RM: Ek Rishta thoda hatke!!!upd 21/5 pg32 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
hey apoorva thanx
aaise hi pm bhej te rehna
and thannxxxxxxxxxxxxx!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Apoorva nice one....OMG Muski got engaged with Raj... 😲 hm eagerly waiting for the next part...Please update soon.. 😛
Thanks for the PM. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

nicee part, Apoorva!! can't wait to see how Rahul feels bout this and what happens to RM next!!

but yeah this Raj guy has got to go!! but i understand what you mean bout the story!! our RM will be together of course!!
can't wait till the next part!!
continue soon pleasee!!
lots of love,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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luved the update
Muski getting engaged that too with Raj????!!!!😲
cont soooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey apoorva!!
the part was really funny as usual
what? is muskaan falling 4 raj?
nooooooooooooooooooooo
yaar yeh raj-vaj ka chakkar shor...
rahul ko vapis laaaoooo!!!
samji?....lol!!!...im jocking!!
the story is going good...
just missing rahul!!
bring him back soon
see uuuuu
love yaaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry sorry sorry kaan pakriiing, im gonna read this defo, sorrrryyyyy, actually i dnt even remember the first part so will start it all over again by tonite okieee.... luv ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Apoorva!!😃

Read all the parts today. Amazing FF dear.👏 RMs charachters are simply adorable. And i must say all their dialoguebazi and nautanki is mindblowing.
Wonder what will happen next. Waiting for ur update. Do PM me.😳

THanx a ton dear.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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anybody knows where is appy these days?! 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part!!
please do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5:

A week later:

Rahul calls his dad.

R- bauji.....climate kaisa hai hai apne ghar ka??

R.D- Bura hai..bahut bura...hitler ka temperature jydaa hi garam hai.....

R- Mar gaya....

R.D- Waise abhi hai kahan??

R- Backyard me!!

R.D- Areee nahi.............

R- Kyun????

R.M- Kyunki backyard me hitler hai......(holds rahuls' ears)

r- Maa..ouch..kya kar rahe ho????

R.M- yahanse phone kar sakte ho??? Mumbai se ek bhi phone nahi kar paaye???? Aur yeh naya mobile????

R- Maa..tussi meri gal toh sunoo...

R.M- chup...ek dum chup....

R.D- Aree Rahul di maa....puttar dino baad ghar4 aaaya hai...andar toh aane do....

R.M- Aap beech me mat bolo....aapke laad pyaar ne isse bigaad ke rakha hai.....

R- Aree maa yeh toh hamesha Bauji ka dialouge tha na?? Phir aaj tussi???

R.d- De3kh na mera dilaoughe chura rahi hai....

Both laugh....R.M goes inside angrily.....

R- Aree maa....tussi dekhoge nahi main twade liye Mumbai se kya laya hu.....

r.M- Mujhe kuch nahi dekhna.....

R- Maa.....aaj maaf kar de.....aagli baar se aisa kabhi nahi hoga..i promise......(holds his ears & does uthak baitak)'

R.M smiles.....

R.M- Chal hat...uth jaa.....

R- I love u maa....

R.M- Love u too....

R.D- Toh puttarji interview kaisa tha???

R- Interview???? Awesum tha..... mujhe 99% guraante hai ki yeh job mera hai..u know papaji unke0-----

R.M- oye..yeh saari baatein baadme bhi ho sakti hai...chal aaja thoda nasta kar le..kinna dubla ho gaya hai mera beta....

R- maa??? Wow aloo ke parathe!!! My favourite!!!!

Rahul is eating.....

R.M- Rahul ....teri Muskaan se baat hui???

r- Muskaan se??? Nahi toh....

R.M & R.d look at each other....

R.d- toh tujhe wahan jaana chahiye....

r- Kyun??? Kya hua??

R.M- Wahan jaa..tujhe khud hi pata chalega......

R- Ok........

Muskaan's place:

Muskaan was fuming & burning wid anger....that Rahul had been away for a week widout telling her...she wanted him to be wid her on her special day...she wanted tosay so many thigs...she wasnted to ask him so much.....

M(herself)- Samjta kya hai aapneaap ko??? kutta..kamina.. usko kya laga main usse miss karungi?? huh? jaye jahan jaana hai usse..i dont care....Bt wapis aane toh de...maar maar ke bharta na bana diya toh bas....

M.M- Muskaan??? Akele kya badbada rahi hai???? Niche jaa Rahul aya hai....


M- Aa gaya chucha???

M.m- chucha??? Muskaan kaise kasie shabdon ka istamaal karti hai???

M- Mummji..Chucha matlab loafer..ok????

M.M- loafer?? Muskaan..dekh ab teri shaadi honewali hai...agar tu aise hi karegi roh tere papaji ki izzat ka satyanash ho jaega....sab kya kahega...Maa baap ne kuch nahi sikhaya....

M- Mummyji..take a chil pil.....ok????

M.M- Haam...chilpil......


Muskaan comes down...walking staright to Rahul..holds his hand & makes him open his palm & puts some sum coins in his hand....

M- Yeh le piddhe...Khaas tere liye..agli baar kahin jayega na toh wahan ke PCO ya STd kar lena ok????

R(getting senti) Muskaan.....tune..mee liye...yeh coins ikhtaa kiye hai??? Tu uske liye mandir ke bahar baith thi???? O muskaiiiii................(lauhjs)

M- haan..bol le jo bolna hai...aaj mera mood bahut aacha hai....

R- Kyun shaadi kar rahi hai???

m- Haaan..bt tujhe kisne bataya????

Rahul falls from his seat...

R- kya???? Sach me shaadi kar rahi hai kya???? Uncleji iska dulha aandha hai kya??? Issse kaise pasand kar liya/???

M- Oye Rahul ke bache...unke baare me tameez se baat kar....

R- *coughs* unke baare me.....haiiii main mar java...ab toh iss munde ko milna padega.....usko bata na padega na ki woh kiiss musibat ko pane gale me le raha hai... i have to inform him abt the sankat approching him.....

M- oye kankhajure..bas haana...bahut natak kar raha hai/.....bahut hi jyada jubaan chal rahi hai teri...ruk toh.....

Muskaan runs behind Rahul as usual...there was never a day when they did not run behind each other or kick other...still they were frends & shared every secrets.....unka rishta thoda hatke tha....


They keep running & throwing things wid Muskaan's dad looking at them & the condition of the house helpless.. Suddenly muskaan falls into the arms of a guy....

Background me ....DDLJ ka music playing........

Rahul was surprised to see Muskaan & other guy staring at each other.....

R- *coughs*

Both jerked back to rea;ity.....look at each other..he smiles...she blushes.....RAhul is shocked.....he has seen her blush for the first time.....

M.D- raj puttarji..aaao na...andar aao....

Ra- Kaise hai aap uncleji???

m.D- Main changa...tussi bolo....

Ra- Kaisi ho Muskaan??

Muskaan just smiles.....(blushes)

M.D- Raj puttar...isse milo..yeh saada Rahul hai...Mere dost ka beta aur Muskaan ka dost.....

Ra- hey Rahul! Whats up man!!

R(shakes hands)- I am good...SO finally i get to meet the hero....kaise ho Raj???

Ra- I am good.....Yaar Rahul...kaise dost ho tum??? Apni dost ki sagai pe nahi the????

R- Sagai??? Ho gayi??? KAb????(turns to Muskaan)Oyye Muskaan ki bachi....Tune chup chaap sagai kar li aurmujhe bulaya bhi nahi??? Inni bhi kya kanjusi???? Saare baartaien yon ka kahana akela kahta hu kya main????

M- Oyee phittey mooh...tu toh bas chup hi reh.....

R- Kyun??

M- 2 din bolke 2 hafte Mumbai me kaun gaya tha??? Ek baar bhi phone kisne nahi kia???? tera koi contact no nahi tha ?? tujhe kasie bataati????

R- Aree shaani.....tujhe bata ni tha warna bahu taarike the.....

M- Rahul....tu kya kahi bhi kuch bhi bols akta hai???? Duniya me tujhe chodke sab galat hai right???

R- Nahi nahi...ab toh saari galati meri hai...tu toh sati savitri hai...

m- dekh Rahul tu no entry me gaadi mat ghusaa traffic jaam ho raha hai.....

R- Main traafic jaam kar raha hu??? Tune bina signal diye jo u turn maari na uske wajah se accident hua..ok.....

M- Dekh Rahul....tu.....

Raj smiles.....He notices RM were verry busy in their own little world.....& Muskaan completely forgot abt Raj's presence.........

M.M- chup karo dono.....Damadji kahde hai aur kya baka bak kiye jaa rahe ho..Muskaan tu toh thoda samjha kar na.....


M- Mummyji....tussi hamesah mainu kyun bolte ho/??? Isse Rahul ke bache ko kuch bhi nhai kehte????

M.m- Kyunki mera puttar kuch galat kehta hi nahi......hai na Rahul????

Rahul smiles & streches his collar in attitude.....

M(rolls her eys)- haan main toh bhul gayi thi..main twadi nahi padosi ki beti hu.....

R- Haiiiii meri Muskii kinni samjadaar hai....atlast samja hi gayi na tu!!!!

M- rahul tu na...tuna......

R- Tujhe "tuna" machli khanni hai????

M- Nhai.....main veg hu.....

R- hai Rabba!!!! KAbse????

M- jab se sagai hui hai tabse.....

R- Kyun????

Ra- Shayad kyunki main vegeteraian hu.....

M- haan....

R(looks at Muskaan in disbelief)- Jo ladki chicken birayani kahye bina ek hafta nahi reh sakti woh veg ho rahi hai??? wowow.....dekhte hai.....

M- Rahul tu mujhe challenge kar raha hai!!!! Th GREAT Muskaan kaur Chadda ko????

R- Nahi nahi..meri itni himmat kahan.......

Ra- Ahem...Muskaan....toh aaj tumhara frend aaya hai toh hum plan cancel kar de????

m- Kaunsa plan????

Ra(feels bad)- Movie.....Dinner....

M- O!!! raj i am sooo sorry main ek dum bhool gayi thi.....yeh rahul hai na ek dum kamina hai....aapko bura toh nahi lagega na agar hum plan postpone kare toh????

Ra(bit hurt)- NAhhi.....

M- Pucaa na????

Raj nods....
M- Ok fine......Chal Rahul...mujhe ab Mumbai ki saaaaaaari details cahahiye......Chal chal......
Muskaan holds Rahul's hand & both go to her room.....Raj feels like an complete outsider when RM r together................
hey guys...finallly got time to update....xtreelmy sooory for the delay...hoope u guys have not given up on this ff....

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