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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25:


Rahul was shocked at Msukaan outburst…she was thinking he

was being smypathic towards her??? No….she was his best

frend… there is no sympathy in friendship…its just friendship….


R- Muskaan??? Tujhe lagta hai ki main sirf sympathy ke wajahse

yeh sab kar raha hau???? Muskaan? Mujhe laga hum dost hai…

hamesha ek dusre ka saath denge…aache waqtme bhi aur bure

waqt me bhi…toh jab main apni dosti nibha raha hu…u think its

smyptahy??? Tu aaj tak toh apna har kaam mujhse haq se karvati

thi…maine kabhi teri kissi baat ka bura nahi maan pata hai

kyun??? Kyunki usme bhi ek apna pan tha…tu mujhe kuch bhi

kehti thi maarti thi hum ladte the uss sab me humari dosti thi…jo

bhi karte the apna samaj ke karte the…tune aaj yeh sab kehke

mujhe ke pal me paraya kar dia????????? I am sorry muskaan

agar tujhe bura laga..mujhe abhi jaana chahiye….i wont trouble u

again…



He is about to leave when Muskaan grabs his hand….


R- Ab tu mujhe chod ke jaa raha hai??? Sab mujhe chod ke

jayenge toh main kya karungi???????(tears fill in her eyes)


Rahul is as always melted by her tears…


He smiles…


R- Aee jhalli …emotional blackmail kar rahi hai???


Muskaan hugs Rahul…


M- Rahul mujhe chodke kabhi mat jaana…plzz mujhe akelepan se

bahut daar lagta hai…yeh do saal mere zindagi se sabse bure do

saal the…main abhut akeli ho agyi thi Rahul..plzz mujhe teri inti

aadat ho gayi hai na…Mujhe kabhi chodke toh nahi jayega na??? u

will be there for me na??? hamesha???


R(hugged her tight and smiled)- haan marte dum tak…I will be

there for u…… waise ek baat bolu???


m- hmmm


R- Mujhe thande noodles pasand nahi hai…


M(smiles)- Mujhe bhi….


They have their lunch…


R- Ye le..bill



M- Mujhe kyun de raha hai???


R- Aree tune bola na ki u dnt want any favours so maine socha u

will pay for the bill…


M(smiles)- saaale kamine..ladki se paise maange me sharam nahi

aati??


R(surprised..looks around)- ladki??? Kahan hai ladki????


M- Main………


R- Aree tu??? Tu toh meri jhalli hai….


Muskaan smiles….she lyks the way he calls her jhalli….


Same night:


Muskaan's place:


Muskaan was reading novel "Someday my Prince" yaa exactly..it

was a romantic novel..it was very unusual Muskaan….That day

she was passing by a book stall.. and she saw the novel there…

she read the summary of the book on the last page and that

hero reminded her of Rahul….and god knows thinking what she

took that novel….


While reading that book she could imagine Rahul speaking all that

lovey dovey dialogues and rescuning the princess and all that

stuff….she smiled thinking abt him and closed her eyes…and she

saw Rahul's face…she quickly opened her eyes….


M- yeh kya ho raha hai??? I am going mad….main Rahul ke bare

me kyun soch rahi hu??? Who mera best frend hai..thats it…toh

maine uska chehra…shut up Muskaan….yeh sab iss book ki

wajahse..yeh saadi hui gandi si book mujhe leni hi nahi chahiye

thi…its making me mad…..


she pushes the book and it goes under the bed….


M-I should gert some sleep…warna mujhe mental hospital jaana


padega….


Rahul's palce:


He was thinking abiut the days events…how suddenly after no

hope he bumped into Muskaan…then she was alone sad….and sab

kitna change ho gaya…


R- God…tussi kya planning kar rahe ho??? Jab mujhe muskaan

se milana tha tab nahi mili aura b aise ajeeb situation me daal ke
mera mazzak bana rahe ho??? Muskaan ab akeli hai sad hai and

I am making her just like before …Bt mere intentions koi galat

nahi hai…I just want her to be happy…main use aapne liye nahi

paana chahata….uski khushi me meri khushi hai…Par God tussi

meri help kar do….meri muskaan ko ek dum pehle jaisa bana
do….ok?? good nite….

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Really nice part...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 26:

Few days later:

Muskann called hr mom in patiala..

m- Kaise ho Mummyji???

M.M- Changa puttarji…tune bade dino baad phone kia..kaisi hai

???

M- mast hu…..


M.M(smiled..she could hear joy in her daughter's voice)-

Puttarji?? Bade khush lag rahe ho?? Babaji ka lakh lakh sukhar

hai ji…

M- Mummyji???? Yeh babaji ka nahi…rahul ka kamla hai.;…

M.M- rahul??? Sadaa rahul???

M- Haan ji Saada rahul….

M.M- Who Paris me hai??? Tere saath???


M- Haan…twanu nahi pata??? Rahul ki mummyji se aapka jhagda

ho gaya kya?? Waise toh saari baatein disuss karte ho yeh baat

nahi pata aapko???

M.M_ bechari ko khud ko pata nahi hai…sab galat ho raha hai

yahan…


M- Matlab??

M.M- Rahul ki papaji ki tabiyet bahut kharab hai…hospitalme

hai..baar baar Rahul ko yaad kar rahe hai….par jassi kare bhi toh

kya kare…


M- kya matlab??? Uncleji hospital me hai aur Rahul ko yeh baat

pata nahi???


M.M- Puttar…unka vaada jhagda ho gaya tha usske baad toh

jaise Rahul ne yahan se saare samabad tod hi diye…


M- O Plzz mummyji Rahul oh ek no ka duffer hai..tussi chinta

mat karo..aunytji ko bol do..main Rahul ko lekar aati hu Patiala….


M.M_ tu sach me aise kar sakti hai???


M- Haan mummyji sachi…. Trust me….i will see u soon…


M.M- ok ji..main abhi jaakar Jassi ko bata deti hu…



Muskaan thinking:

Yeh Rahul pagal hai kya? Aisa kya ho gaya ki Rahul ne apne papaji

se 2 saal baat nahi ki??? Mujhe Rahul se baat karni hogi…


She goes to Rahul Place:


R- Hey..yahan kaise? I mean Butic nahi gayi???


M- Nahi..jaldi se bag pack kar..


R- KYun? Main kahan jaa rha hu?


M- Hum jaa rahe hai…Patiala….


R(expression serious)- Tu jaa..mujhe yahan bahut kaam hai…


M- Kyun?? Aise bhi kya naraazji hai ki tu apne Bauji se milna bhi

nahi chahta???


R-Aisa kuch nahi hai…


M- Shut up Rahul…natak mat kar…tujhe pata bhi hai ki Uncleji

hospital me hai…he had a serious heart attack…


R- Kya?????? Bauji hospital me hai..aur kisine mujhe bola bhi

nhai????(hyper)


M- Tune hi toh saare rishtey tod diye the na???


R- nahi..unho ne kaha tha ki aisa beta hone se aacha ki hum---

-- Mujhe koi pharak nahi padta…mujhe nahi jaana…


M(smiles)- Tujhe bachpan se jaanti hu…u r more close to ur dad

than anyone else….isliye Rahul Garewal apne ego ko side me

rakhke chal..woh tere bauji hai unhe teri jarurat hai…


R(tears fills his eyes)- Who theek toh ho jayega na??


M- haaan bilkul ….tu chal..main apni flight tickets book kar deti

hu…okay?


R-Hmm…


Rahul still noy convinced…he is worried abt his dad's health…


M- Rahul?


R- Hmm??


M- he is going to be fine…trust me….


R(hugs her)- Thanks Muskii…tu nahi hoti tobh mujhe kabhi pata hi

nahi chalta aur agar unhe kuch jata toh main apne aap ko kabhi

maaf nahi kar pata….kabhi nai


M- isliye toh main hamesha tere saath hu


R(looks at her)- hamesha?


M- Haan...tujhme sense daalne ki liye duffer...


R- O yaa..mujghe laga...


M- Kya?


R- Kuch nhai...



In Flight:


M- Kya soch raha hai???


R- Shayad maine overreact kia….i mean bauji gusse me the mujhe

unki baatitni seriously nahi leni chahiye the... maine kahamkha

chotisi baat ka bakhega create kia…


M- tu pagal hai…so u admit u r short tempered…


R- Yaa…aur gusse me pata nahi kuch bhi kar deta hu…then I

repent it…


m- Its ok . abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda….wahan jake uncleji ko sorry

bol denna…ok???



Rahul nods

Flashback:


Rahul is home for a week from Canada..


R- Maa…kaise ho tussi?? (hugs her)Bahut miss ia maine aapko


R.M- Haan puttarji maine bhi bahut yaad kia tujhe…


R.D- Humse nahi miloge saara pyaar maa ke lie???


R- Aree Bauji…maa se jyada pyaar aapke liye….


He hugs his father…he was more close to his dad then his

mom….he knew if ever he had any problem he should talk to his

dad and he will help him out..his mom was more emotional

types….


They were having breakfast:


R- Wow maa….u rock…yeh aloo ke parathe are the best…


R.M- ruk main aur laati hu..kinaa dubla ho gaya hai mera beta….


R- MOM???


R.D- areee Rahul di maa…kuch dubla nahi hua twada beta saadaa

puttra aach khasa mustanda hai…


R.M- Aapko ko kuch nahi pata…tu inki baat mat sunn main abhi

aayi…


R.D- So betaji??? Kaise chal raha hai???


R- O dad…Canada is wonderful…bahut thandi hoti hai bt it is

really nice..mera roomie bhi bahut sweet hai…hum Friday nites

ko party karbne jaate hai…we have lots of fun….


R.D- drink and drive toh nahi karte???


R- no ofcourse not…


R.D- Good…aur kaam kaise chal raha hai???


R- Huh…work is bad…bahut kaam karvate hai saale…bt u knw

what they r really happy with my work and I am expecting a

promotion….


R.D aree waah yeh toh abhut aachi baat jhai…


R- I knw..bt abhi tak kuch sure nahi hai…


R.D- toh puttraji?? Apka shaadi ke bare me kya khyaal hai??


R- Shaadi?? Kiski???


R.D – Ab iss sumar me main toh shaadi nahi karnewala matlab

teri hi karani hai shaadi…


R- Aree dad..plzz maa ke saamne mat bolna warna mera jina

haram kar degi…


R.D(laughs)- Oyee chup kar khotey…maa hai who teri..par beta

shaadi kabhi na kabhi toh karni hai na???


R.M- haan ji..main bhi wohi keh rahi thi….


R- O shit..maa plzzz u dnt get started…


R.M- kyun????


R- Mujhe shaadi nahi karni???


R.D- Kyun beta???


R.M- Aree puttar maine bahut soni kudiyaan dekh rakhi hai..woh

mulhotraji ki beti hai na bahut soni hai aur singhsab ki bhai ki

bte ki Sali bhi bahut kubsurat hai…


R- Maaa mujhe koi ladki vadki nahi dekhni???


R.m- tujhe ladke pasand hai???


R- O god nO MAa…..


R.D- aree abhi kahan keh rahe hai shaadi kar le?? Ladki dekhne

me kya problem hai???


R- Par jab shaadi karni hi nahi hai toh ladki vadki dekhne ka kya

phaida hai???


Rahul thinks:


Rahul loved Muskaan…hum ek baar jeete hai ek baar marte

hai..pyaar bhi ek baar hota hai…aur who pyaar Muskaan hai….meri

zindagi me uski jagah koi nahi le sakta kabhi nahi…


R.D- wahan koi pasand hai kya tujhe???hume toh bas ter khushi

me khush rehna hai…


R(getting irriatted)- Bauji plzzz..meri khushi shaadi naa karne

maine hai…aap log plzz mujhe pareshaan mat karo..chain se jine

do


R.D(getting angry)- Pareshaan mat karo??? Hum koi dushman hai

kya tere??? Tere bhaale ke liye keh rahe hai… Samaaj me log

tarh tarh kmi baatein banaate hai…


R- WHAt the hell….Aapko unki padi hai aapne bte ko kya

chahiye use koi chinta nahi hai?????


R.D- Aaj mujhe afssos ho raha hai tere paida hone pe …kash

Rabji ne ek soni kudi di hoti toh aaj yeh din nahi dekhna padta…


R.M- yeh aap kya keh rahe ho Garewalji???


R- nai maa…kehne do…aaj inki dil ki baat jubaan pe aayi hai….


R.M- Puttar aisi baat nahi hai….unka kehna ka yeh matlab nahi

tha


R.D- Nahi..mere kehna jka yehi matlab tha…main marne se pehle

apne pote-potti ke saath khelna chahte hu..tera ghar basa hua

dehne chahta hu toh iss me kya galat maang lia maine??? Huh???

Chadda ko dekh…aaj kina khush hai Muskaan ko vidda

karke….aaphi bolo jassiji kya galat hai meri baat???


R.M- Aap jara shanty se liji na..main baat karti hu na Rahul

se….aapka bp bad jayega…plzz shant ho jayeyee,,,,


R.D- Ek din yeh ladka meri jaan lekar hi shant rahega…


R- aapko mujhse itni problem hai toh ghar se nikal kyun dete????


R.D(slaps him hard) Bas yehi sunna baki reh gaya tha tujhse???

Tujhe itni problrm ho rahi buddhe maa-baap ki baat mane me

toh tu hi chala jaa nay eh ghar chodek….main bhi bhul jaunga

mera koi beta tha….


R- Haan mere jaise beta hone se toh wahi beter hai aapke liye….


R.M(crying)- Garewalji yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?? Jawaan bte

pe haath nahi uthate….hum sab sulajenhe Rahul puttar….


R- Sulajane ke liye kuch bacha hi nhai hai maa…chalta hu..apna

kahyal rakhna,…..


R.M- Rahul…………….Puttar ruk jaa..putttar………….



Rahul goes away…and then he never called again…


--------end of flashback------------------



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Really nice part...
Thanks for pm
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Part 27:

RM reach the hospital in paitala where his bauji was admittrd

In the hospital:

Rahul's mom has completely lost hope and simply sitting helplessly…

M.M- Jassi..himmar rakh…wahe guru sab theek kar denge…jijaji ko kuch nahi hoga….

R.M- mujhe toh ab koi aasha hi nahi hai kul….ab shayd kuch nahi ho sakta….par unke bina main kya karungi…agar unko kuch ho gaya toh main toh….

R- BAuji ko kuch nahi hoga….

R.M surprised to see Rahul standing there…she hugged him…..

R- Maa tussi bilkul chinta na karo…bauji ko kuch nahi hogi…main doctors se baat karta hu…agar chahiye toh unhe Mumbai leke jayenge…worldclasss specialist se unka ilaaj karenge..kuch nahi hoga unko..main aa gaya hu na main sab theek kar dunga….

His mom smiled….she looked at muskaan and thanked her silently for bringing rahul here…

Muskaan just smiled….

Rahul went in the ICU to see his dad….he was sleeping….he had never seen his dad ill….never even a mild cough or cold…his dad was always his hero…and nw he was lying on this hospital bed with all the tubes and machines and whatever around huim…..he felt bad…angtry on himself….

R- I am sorry Bauji….aaj aapki iss halat ke liye kahin ka kahin main zimeedaar hu….i am really sorry….i overreacted,,,,,b tab main sab theek kar dunga…I promise….aap jaldise theek ho kar ghar aayenge…trust me…..

He went to meet the doctor incharge….

Doc- The thing is Mr.garewal aapke father kisibhi medication ko respond hi nhai kar rahe….

R- What?

DR- becoz unki will power jeene ki iccha shayd khatm ho gayi hai….heart attack is very common these days that is nt the problem …the problem is aapke father theek hona nahi chhate…..

R- yeh aap kya keh rahe hai??? Ofcourse my father wants to live…for mr for my mother….

He goes away and is sitting outside the icu when Muskaan cums

M- Rahul Kya kaha doctor ne?

R- Owh doc ek no ka ullu ka ptah hai…he says bauji ki jeena ki iccha khatam ho gayi hai and that's the reason he is not responding to the medications what rubbish usko kuch pata nahi hai…duffer….

M(smiles)- Rahul….mujhe jyada kuch pata nahi hai…bt I think since ab tu aa gaya hai….uncleji will recover faster….

R- Main koi jaadu ki chaadi lekar nahi aaya hu….i think v shud shift him to a better hospital….

M- Rahul..kabhi kabhi…medicines ki nahi apno ke saath ki jarurat hoti hai….

R- Kya??? Kuch bhi…..

M- Just try it…be sround him…talk to him…maafi mango….unka kahyala rakho…aur dekho he will definitely respond very quickly to all his mediimes….

R- tu na ek dum pagal hai….bt ok letas see….

M- rahul..tujhe ek baat puchu???

R- Tu kabse permission maange lagi bakabak karne ke liye??

M- Uncleji ne sirf teri shaadi ki baat kari toh tu itna gussa ho gaya ki u just left and never looked back??? Itna gussa?? Kyun???

R(sighed)- Muskaan…main….i…

M- Kya?

R- I dnt knw….mujhe kisssi aur se shaadi nahi karni thi…

M- Kissi aur se???

R(caught offguard)- I mean….mujhe shaadi nahi karni thi…uss waqt..i was like married to my carrer…

M- Sachi???

R- HAan….jab dekho mujhpe shaak karti rehti hai….

Rahul left..

m- no..rahul..there is sumthng that I dnt knw…..bt what????

Rahul in the ICU….

R- bauji???

R.D(coughed)- kaun?

R- Main.. Rahul… Bauji…aap theek ho na??? u can hear me ???

R.D(slowly opening his eyes)- Rahul??? Tu hai puttar???

R- Han bauji..main…aapka Rahul.. bauji I am really sorry…aap…

R.D- tu aagaya na bas..mujhe aur kuch nahi chhaiye….

Rahul smiled…..he knew his dad loived him no matter what…it was his mistake that he went away and nevre looked back…it was Muskaan who brought him back to his family to his dad…..he will always remain grateful to her….

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey appu nice parts
i think in next updt muski will know abt rahul
marriage rejection
n his bauji will better
ok see u soon
love yaaa
muuaahh

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