RM: Ek Rishta thoda hatke!!!upd 21/5 pg32 - Page 19

but poor rahul

feeling sad 4 him

buddu abhi samaj aya ki usse pyaar hai...lol

can u tell me the song u used

konsi film ka hai??

thanx

cont soon

love yaaa

Six months later:

Its Mumbai…

The city of dreams….mumbai never sleeps…it is the place where

if u have courage then all ur dreams will come true….

Everyone is busy in their own world...

Muskaan:

Muskaan 's life changed after marriage…raj is extremely

supportive husband…both have happy married life…muskaan's

mom-in-law is a bit khadus..bt as long as muskaan listens to her

she is happy…she stays with raj and muskaan…muskaan has a

butic with one of her frends…she remembers Rahul and their

fun times together….

M – rahul main tujhe bahut yaad karti hu…par pata nahi kyun

tujhe phone karne me thoda daar lagta hai…shayd tu mujhe

bhool bhi gaya hoga…tere liye ab main itni important nhai hungi

…bt rahul u were and are my best frend….main raj ke saath

bahut khush hu…tune sahi kaha tha raj bahut aache hai…mujhse

bahut pyaar bhi karte hai…par main tujhse bahut naraaz hu..tune

mujhe ek baar bhi phone nahi kia….par maine bhi kahan kia? Par

koi baat nhai yeh teri aur meri pic hamesha main apne paas

rakhti hu…aur jab bhi tuujhe miss karti hu I talk to this pic

…par yeh baat kisko pata nahi hai….warna Raj immediately tujhe

phone karke bol denge phir tujhe ke aur mauka mil jayega

mujhe chidaane ka…bt rahul I really miss u a lot….

Rahul:

Its 6months since rahul admitted to himself that he loves

muskaan..bt he knows its too late and she is happy in her

married life….bt still he was not able to forget her…he had

stolen apic from her weding album and he keeps it with him….

Jhoka haawaa ka aaj bhi zulfe udaata hoga na…

Tera dupata aaj bhi teri saaar se sarkhta hoga na..

Baalon me tere aaj bhi phool koi sajta hoga na…

Thandi hawaayen raaton me tujhko thabkiyaan deti hogi na..

Chand ki thandak khwabon me tujhko leke toh jaati hogi na

Suraj ki karne subah ko teri neende udaati hogi na

Mere khyalon me sanam…khudse batein karti hogi na

Main dekhte hu chuo chuo ke tumko mehsus karti hogi na

Jhoka haawaa ka aaj bhi zulfe udaata hoga na…

R – main bahut koshish karta hu muskaan par tera khayl dil se jaata hi nahi..par theek hai na…tu khush hai uar mujhe kuch nahi chahiye…main bas teri khushi chahta hu….tu toh apni life me itni busy ho gayi hogi ki tujhe meri yaad bhi nahi atai hogi….main bhi yahan Mumbai me hu..par main tujhse milna nahi chahta..main tujhe raj ke saath nahi dekh paunga…nahi….

It is Sunday:

Raj and muskaan are walking on the streets of linking road(most famous shopping area of mumbaikars)

Ra – shone aur kitni shopping karogi?? Bas ho gaya…

M – raj?? Abhi tak toh humne kuch liya hi nahi…

Raj looks at the number of bags in his hand…

Ra – haan yeh sab bags toh bakki logonko pakad ke chal raha hu…

M – raj plzz…mujhe bas abhi jhoote lene hai phir hum ghar jayenge ok??

Ra – haan…chalo..main kuch bol sakta hu kya??

M – o u r soooo swweeet….

Ra – aacha? Good…

M (smiles)- raj……………………

Ra – kya hua??

M – who dekhiyeee,,,,

Ra – kya?? Ice cream???

M – nahi sandwitch wala…

Ra – tumhe sandwitch khaani hai???

M – nahi…aap chaliye toh sahi…

She runs to cross the street…

Ra – aree shona sambhal ke….yeh ladki bhi na mujhe ek din pura pagal kar degi….

Muskaan looks at the man eating sandwitch….

M – oyee phittey mooh nikame nikhaate..kamine..common sense ke mare hue putle..jharru ke aankhri tinke…

The man turns and no prizes for guessing its RAhul…

R – oyee tu jaban sambhal ke baat kar nahi toh teri choti pakad ke ghumaunga ki tujhe Mumbai me bhi patila dikhega samjhi???

Both laugh..then silence…rahul was surprised to see muskaan…

M – saale kamine,,,Mumbai me hai aur mujhe ek phone tak nahi kia???

R – nahi who actually…

M – haan haan ab bahane bana usme toh tune Ph.D kari hai…

R – aree anhi sach me aisa kuch nahi hai..

M – chup kar..baat mat kar mujhse,,,,

R – mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tujhse baat karne ka…aur waise bhi itbne dino baad mille hai koi aise milta hai apne dost se…

M (smiles and hugs him)- aee emotional blackmail kar raha hai???

R (smiles and wipes his tear without muskaan knowing abt it)- nahi..woh toh tera department hai…

Raj comes…

Ra – hey rahul…

R – hi raj…kaise ho???

Ra- babhut aacha..tu bataa yara?

R – I am fine..

Ra – kya rahul itna muskaan ka best frend banta hai aur shaadi ke baad ek dum bhool gaya pani best frend ko ek baar phone bhi nahi kia???

R – nahi …who main thoda kaam me busy ho gaya tha…aur waise maa se kahbar milti thi muskaan ki…

Ra – meri shone ne toh tujhe bahut miss kia,…

R (looks at muskaan)- really???

M –aisa kuch nahi hai…

Ra – nahi nahi..photose baatien toh main karta hu na??kyun??

M – aapko pata tha???

Ra – haan..meri shona ke life ki har baat mujhe pata hai…

R – um..main chalta hu..thoda kaam hai…

M – aree aise kaise jaoge???

Ra – haan..ghar chalo na…saath lunch karte hai..

R – I would love to..par meri abhi ek meeting hai…so I have to goo…

M – chal jhoote aaj Sunday hai…

R – I know muskaan bt its important…

Ra – ok…shyaam ko dinner pe chalte hai..what say?

R (hesistant)- shyaam ko?

M –oyee itna kya soch raha hai?? Humari treat hai raj bill pay karenge….ab toh aayega? Bhookad ko free ka khana bolo toh phatak se man jaata hai…

Ra – muskaan?? Yeh kya keh rahi ho?

M – kyun? Aap bill pay nahi karoge?

Ra –haan karunga…bt tum rahul se kaise baat kar rahi ho?

R – aree nahi raj..mujhe iss sab ki aadat hai…in fact I was missing all this…

M – toh shyaam ka plan pucca na?

R – hmmm…ok…

M – great.. thaichi chalte hai…pata hai…mumbai ke sabse best thai food wahan mita hai…

R – muskaan tu thai khatii hai???

M – haan kyun?

Rahul remembers the time when muskaan hated thai food…she said it has no taste and it's the food made for chuhe-billi…

R – nahi bas aise hi…

Raj's cel rang..

Ra – excuse me..main abhi aya…

RM alone…

R – tujhe toh thai bilkl pasand nahi tha na??

M – par raj ko bahut pasand hai…

R – haan toh??

M – toh ab mujhe bhi pasand aane laga hai…

R – omg..i don't believe kit u actually kissi aur ke liye change ho rahi hai…

M – raj koi aur nahi hai…who mere pati hai….

Rahul was shocked fore moment ….jis muskaAN ko rahul jaanta tha who bas apni marzi dusron pe chalati thi…she would never change for any1…and today she has changed….wow…

Ra – ok guys…toh shyaam ka plan pucca..hum tujhe pick karne aa yenge 8 baje ok???

R – aree nahi main thaichi aa jaunga…

M – nahi nahi,…tu ghum ho jayega bache..hum aajayenge tujhe pick karne…(laughs)

R – ghum ho jaunga??? Very funny…

M – ok then shyaam ko milte hai…

R – ok.. byee..

finally rm mil gayye

now waiting 4 next

cont soon

love yaaa

She is looking extremely beautiful in white sari and long earrings… rahul was simply stunned to see her…

M – kya hua???

R – muskaan..teri tabiyet toh theek hai na??

M – haan kyun/?

R – yeh sari???

She laughs…

M – aaj akl most of the time main sari hi pehnti hu…

R – tu bahut khubsurat lag rahi hai…

M- really???

She blushes…

M – ab chale??

Rahul simply noded ..

They sat in the car..

Ra- hey rahul..looking nice..

r- kuch bhi kya yaar…tu aur Muskii saath m bahut pyaare lagte ho..

M- who toh hai hi…we are made for each other types….laughs….

Rahul just looked at her…his heart felt piecered..his eyes

swelled with tears…

M- kya hua? Itna senti ho gaya kya??? Ki aankho se paani aaya…

R(trying to cover up)- pagaL hai kya??? Who lens me kuch

problem hai.. shayad…

M- hmmm…..

They reached Thaichi..

Ra- Rahul tum dono aage jao..main car park karke aata hu….

R- why? Don't they have valet facility?

M- nahi…Raj is very possessive abt his car…he wont let anyone

touch it…muhe bhi drive nahi karne dete…

R- tujhe toh koi apni cycle bhi chalane na de..itni expensive car

kyun dega???

M- chup kar khotey…

She hit him playfully on his chest…her touch was like electric

spark in his body…

m- kua??

R- kuch nahi…chal…

they reach parking lot… RM get down and are walking ahead…

Raj is parking the car….

While walking he gets a call from his office…

r- hello…yess Rahul Garewal…

Voice- Sir-------actually

R- hello???? Hello??? (looks ta Muskaan) signal problem hai..tu

ruk main abhi aaya…

He goes..muskaan is looking at her bangles and waiting for Raj

And RAhul to come…she is standing alone…

A drunkard comes there and tries to act cheap

with muskaan…she slaps him hard…he holds her hand and comes

closer and closer….just then Rahul comes kicks that man hard….

Ra- Saale kaminey…..

He kicks him…hits him…Raj comes and Muskaan runs and hugs

him…Rahul look at Raj and muskaan…he doent like it….he hits that

man more hard…the man is bleeding badly….and Rahul is in no

mood to spare him….

Ra- Rahul plzz stop…..stop it….woh maar jayega..rahul….

R- uski himmat kaise hui meri mus—dost ke saath aise karneki….saale…teri toh…

Raj takes Rahul away…the security gurads come and take the man away….

Ra- ARhul tu theek hai na???

He nods….

Rahul looks at Muskaan…

R- Muskii tu theeik toh hai na?

Mukaan just nods…bt is upset and both Raj And Rahul are aware of it…..

Thy go to the restaurant

Raj calls the waiter…

Ra – hey kailash …

K- hello sir…table for 2?

Ra - no make it 3..we have a friend along

k- ok sir..this way…

they sit and Raj says sumthing to the waiter he nods and then goes…

few minuters later:

Raj comes to Muskaan and askes for a dance she smiles..they go

on the floor…

Tumhe pata toh hoga tumhi pe main fida hu..

Tumhe hai jabse jaana hawaoon me udaata hu..

Tummhi mere har pal me tum aaj me tum kal me

Heey shonaa hey shonaaaaa

Shoooooonaaa shonaa

They dance to this song..muskaans mood lighten up…Rahul is abit

uneasy watching this…coz whenever Muskaan was sad or upst it

was always him who made her smile..bt 2day Raj….he couldn't

aceept the fact she was happy with raj…

R- main tujhe kisssi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta…tu raj ke saaath

khush hai tujhe meri koi jarurat nahi hai yeh abaat mujhe bilkul

pasand nahi hai muskaan..i cant stay her anymore I have to leave

..i am sorry..plz mujhe maaf kar dena…..

He gets up to leave ….while going muskaan's pallu gets

entangled

in his watch(plzz don't ask how..it happens in evry single film

ok)..he tris to emove it…muskaan is not aware of it…she is lost in

dancing with raj….rahul pulls her pallu and she looks back…rahul

shrugs and shows her his watch…Raj twirls her and she holds

raj;s hand and her other free hand she tries to remove her

stuck pallu…

(basically I wanna show that her hand is slipping from raj ka

haath and she is going towards rahul..it is imp in coiming chaptrs)

They order the food….

M- Rahul tu itna hup chup kyun hai?? SAb theek hai na???

R- Haan… sab theek hai kyun??

M- NAhi hamehsa toh toh itni baatein karta tha aur aaj itne dino

baad mile hai aur tu kuch bhi nahi bol raha…

R- Agar tujhe yaad na ho toh main bata du..ki hajmesha hi tu

bakbak karti thi aur main bechara suntan that oh abhi bhi aap hi

chalu karo…

M- main iss baat ka toh wait kar rahi thi..i understand ki teri life

itni boring hai ki tere paas kuch bata kre liye hai hi nahui..bt u

knw wat koi baat nahi..main hoon na…I will talk…

Ra & R together- As usual….

Both look at each other and laugh…. Muskaan frowns….

m- Aacha sunn…

R- Bolo….

m- Main na----------------

And she goes on and on abt her life…things happening…her

butic…her sasu ma…her new frends…her everything….she looks

at Raj and then holds his hand..and everything…Rahul just nods…

and truies to smile…….Rahul just keeps looking at her…she had

changed so much…Rahul didn't knw whether to feel happy for

the positive changes in her or feel bad coz Raj made those

changes…he is lost in looking at her…the background becums

blurr…its just him and Muskaan…

Hai dilko teri arzuu…..

Par main tujhe na paa saku….

Hai dil ko teri justju..

Par main tujhe na paa saku

Main hu shub tu subha..

Dono judke ke juda..

Main hu lab tu dua

dono jud ke juda

sajaanaaa…mahiyaaa..

Later they had food…and they were leaving….

Ra- Thank u so much ARhul…tum aaye hume bahut aacha laga…

R- Yaa..i had a great time too…

M- tera no .dede na mujhe so I willcall u…

R- No..???

M- Phone no….idiot….

R- Kyun?

M- Kyun

matlab???? Hum abhi ek hi seher me hai..toh tujhe kya lagta hai I

ma gonna spare u????

Tera jeena haram karna hai mujhe…that's why…..

Ra- Shona plzz….pyaar se….

R- Pyaar??? Who mujhse pyaar nahi karti,…..

M- aisa kisne kaha tujhse???? duffer,,,,,ofcourse I love u…..

RAhul looks at her shocked…..

M- Tu mera bchapan ka best frend hai,… yaar…how can not love

u…silly boy…bt u knw what u dnt love me….warna Mumbai aane ke

baad mujhe phone karta…..

Ra- Muskaan tum kya wahi baat pe atak gayi….

M- Aur nahi toh kya?? Mujhe bolta hai ki I dnt love him aur khud

ka kya??? Ullu ka ptha kahin ka….

R- I love u Muskaan…..

Muskaan smiles…..she goes near him….hugs him….

M- Maine tujhe bahut miss kia…ab phir toh nahi gayab ho jaega….

Rahul just nods no….

R- Mujhe late ho raha hai…toh I will see u guys later….ok….byee

muskaan take care….bye raj….

And RAhul leaves….

RAhul Place:

Rahul is thinking abt what happened that day:

R- Pyaar??? Who mujhse pyaar nahi karti,…..

M- aisa kisne kaha tujhse???? duffer,,,,,ofcourse I love u…..

RAhul looks at her shocked…..

M- Tu mera bchapan ka best frend hai,… yaar…how can not love

u…silly boy…bt u knw what u dnt love me….warna Mumbai aane ke

baad mujhe phone karta…..

Ra- Muskaan tum kya wahi baat pe atak gayi….

M- Aur nahi toh kya?? Mujhe bolta hai ki I dnt love him aur khud

ka kya??? Ullu ka ptha kahin ka….

R- I love u Muskaan…..

Muskaan smiles…..she goes near him….hugs him….

Rahul thinks to himself ….

Yeh sab kya ho raha hai mere saath..main jitna use dur jaane ki

koishish karta hu…who utna hi mere paas aarahi hai….

I knw she said I love u just like a frend…..bt jab maine use I

love u kahaa…that was nt like a frend…I said it purre dilse,,,,,y

"???? Why I cant aacept it once and for all that she can now

never ever be mine????

great part

that pallu watch scene was nice

i loved the ending a lot

when rm had lill fight

n that ILU dil se n ILU 2 a friend..=)

cont soon

love yaaa

thanks i am gl;ad u like....

thanks soooo much.....