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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 22:

Rahul had got muskaan's add from her dad nad now he was

searching for her apartment..ppl here spoke mostly French and

rahul was having trouble in communicating with the localites. He

was standing near an apartment looking around totally confused.

A small Indian girl come to him…

Girl- heu u r Indian??

R- yaa..(bends down to talk to her)

Girl- hi…I am Mugdha..

R- hey mugdha I am Rahul…naam toh sunna hi hoga…

M- Shahrukh khan huh>???

Both laugh….

Mu- main dekh rahi thi aapko kabse u r looking lost….can I help

u??

R- well u knw Mughda basicaaly mujhe yeh sawaal puvhan chahiye

tumhe coz u r little girl…and u r asking me if u can help me??

Its embaraasing…

Mu- o come on….main yahan ki don hu…ok???

R- O ya???

Mu- Huh haaan….waise aap mere aai (mother) ko mat bolna ki I

was talkin g to u…she says u should not talk to strangers…

R- aapki aai bilkul theek kehti hai mugdha sweetie..bt ab main toh

stranger nahi hu na…so can u plzz tell me this address???

Mu- yeh toh yahin ka address hai…main yahan sabko jaanti hu..tell

me kisko milna hai?????

R- Muskaan???


Mu- Aapko Muskaan didi se milna hai?? She is my neighbor….woh

dekho jaa rahi hai…DIDIDIDIDIDIDIDIDIDIDi


Muskaan turned to look and was shocked to see Rahul there

standing with Mughda…

M- Mughda?? Kya hua?


Mu- aree didi Rahul bahiyaa aapko dhund rahe the….pata hai

aapko Rahul bahiyaa yeh Muskaan didi ke parents ne ekdum

wrong name rakha hai iska…Muskaan it means smile? Bt she

never smiles?????????!!!!!!!!!!!!


M- Mughda ghar nahi jaana??


Mu- maine kuch galat bola lkya??? U knw bhaiya….jab se who

yahan aayi hai…I have never seen her smile…who toh mere jokes

bhi nahi hasti..thats so insulting u know…..


R(smiles at the 7 yr old girl)- yess..very insulting….Bt u knw

Mugdha main jiss Muskaan ko jaanta tha who toh issi bilul nahi

thi….


Mu- Aacha? Toh kaisi thi???


Rahul smiles…..

Aati hai who aise chalke jaise jaanat mew rehti hai..

Dekhti hai sabko aise jaise sabko who sehti hai..

Aree gusse me jab aaye aur aankho who dikhlaale

Ladte ladte galti se muskaaye….

My dil goes mmm………….

Haan who nanan karti hai …haan thoda akadi hai..

Jaate hai sab daaye baaye who jaati hai..

Teedi inn baton se mujhko saatati hai..

par waqt se pehle aana sunna na koi bahana…

par dekhna mera raasta rojana…………

my dil goes mmm…………


Muskaan just looks at Rahul…yaa she was exactly like rahul

said..bt then she changed…situations made her this way..and

then now there was no way that she could again be that bubbly

carefree muskaan…life has changed so has she………….


Mu- wowow…aap sach me muskaan didi ki baat kar rahe ho

na????


R- apni di se hi puch lo…..(turning to muskaan) Kyun muskaan???


M- Rahul tu yahan kyun ayaa hai??


R- wHat?? Atleaast ghar ke andar toh bula…pani waani pila…

kuch khaane ke de then ask questions yaar…2 ghante tera

address dhund raha hu…tujhe bhi bas puri duniyaa me paris hi

mila tha..u could have steeled somewhere where ppl spek

proper english yaar….


Muskaan just rolled her eyes….


R- ab chal na ..kitna timepaass karegi??



M- rahul mujhe….hmm..butic jaana hai…I am getting late…


R- what??? Tu ek din jayegi nahi toh log kya bina kapdon ke

ghumenge?????????


It was not that Muskaan was not happy to see her bestest

frend

after so long bt she felt akward to talk to him…she didn't knw

what to say….she ….she was lost….


R- oyee??? Kya hua?

M- kuch nhai…ghar chal….


R- Thank God tujhe maaners toh yaad aaye..warna paraye desh

me apne bahart ki kya izzat rehti???


M- rahul???


R- what???

AT Muskaan's place:


Rahul looks around….

R- kya baat hai kudiye…ghar toh tera vada chnag hai….bt itna dull

kyun hai??? Roshni ghar ke andar aati hi nahi hai???


M- Mujhe aaeve hi pasand hai…


R- kabse????


M- jabse …………


Rahul sits beside her

R- Muskii I am sorry mujhe Raj ke bare me pata nahi tha….


M(teared eyes)- Kaise pata hoga? Tu nahi tha…


R- Ghar badal dia tha…

M- rishtey bhi badal diye the kya? Jab mujhe meri dost ki

jarurat thi..tu toh tha hi nahi…..(shaky voice)


R- I m soo sorry Muskaan…I really am….par dekh ab toh main

yahan tere saath hu na/????


M- hmm…Rahul kya main buri hu???


R- Nhai….kyun?


M- toh mere saath aisa kyun hua??? Y did babaji take away my

husband??? Kyun???


Muskaan cries…rahul hugs her…..


M- mummyji hamesha kehti thi ki jo hota hai aache ke liye hota

hai..par mere saath jo raha hai usme kya aacha hai???


R- Muskaan kabhi kabhi hum samaj nahi paate ki humare liye kya

aacha hai….par ababji ne toh sab soch ke rakha hota hai..trust

me ..they must have plaaned something reaaly nice for u….


Muskaan cries and cries so much….rahul couldn't see her tears

bt he is helpless..he is just comforting her…


Half an hour later:


R- Muskaan bas…bahut hua rona dhona…ab bas kar yaar…tere pe

suit nahi karta,,,


Muskaan wipes her tears…


R- dekha…aankhe kitni red ho gayi hai…aur andherra bhi ho raha

hai…


M- Kya??


R- Muujhe aaj bhi chudolaise bahut daar lagta hai Muskaan…..


Muskaan gives a weak smile..she knws he is teasing her again…


R- kya baat hai Muskaan….no reaction??? Matlab tune accept

kar liya hai kit u ek bahut badi chudail hai….


Muskaan looks at him controlling her anger…..


Rahul is completely enjoying this…he comes near her and keeps a

comforting hand on her shoulder,,,,


R- I undesrastnd dear…tujhe kitni takleef hoti hogi…chudail

hona aasan nahi hoga hai na???



M(finaaly losing her paitence)- saale..main Chudail…tu draculla…

tu shaitanoka badshaah..tu narak ka head……..


RAhul smiled….Muskaan reacted exactly the way he wanted her

to….muskaan saw him smiling and got irriated all the more….


M- oyee phittey mooh…Ab data kya dikha raha hai??? Huh?

Bahut m,azza aara hai hai kya tujeh kamibney!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


She runs behind him havinga pillow in her hand..she kicks him and

makes him fall…he catches her hand and she also falls….then she

hits him athe pillow….


R- Oyee bas kar jungle billi….maar dalegi kya,???????


Muskaan laughs…


R- badi hansi aarahi hai tujhe????


M- haaan……


Both laugh……..Muskaan had laughed so much after full long 2

yrs..she was feeling like the whole world is happy

now….suddenly her eyes fill with tears….


R- Aee kya hua??


Muskaan hugs him…


M- Rahul..thanks thank u so much…tujhe pata nahi main kitne dino

ke baad itna hansi hu…


R- Muskaan..i am always there for u..teri har khushi me tere har

gum me..ok…jab bhi tu khush hogi mujhe saath saath hasta hua

payegi….aur jab bhi tu dukhi hogi main tera hath thamee tera

hosala bada raha hunga…I am sorry jab tu akeli thi main anhi tha

tere liye….bt I promise aaj ke baad main kabhi tujeh akela nahi

chodunga…


Muskaan is very surprised to see Rahul talking in sucha matured

way….


M- rahul?


R- Hum dost hai Muskaan….hamesha rahenge…..


M- tujhe pata hai kit u duniya ka sabse aacha dost hai…


R- Yaa…I knw that…


BOTh laugh………


i hope u like it...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww I loved how Rahul came to see Muski! :)
and he talked to her and finally got her to become old Muskaan a little.
awesome part!! Do continue asap :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
appuuu awesome updt!
loved it a lott!!!
finally muskaan ko muskaan ayy..lol
only thanx 2 rahul
great work
cont soon
love yaaa
mmuuaahh
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 23:

Next day:

Muskaan was standing near her window…looking outside…never

in two yrs she had observed there was alot of scenic

beauty around…never she had noticed the fountain in

front of her apartment…she was smiling…smiling yeaah…her

door bell rang…

Muskaan opened the door…mughda was standing on her door….

Muskaan smiled…

M- good morning Mughda …

Mu(shocked)Di??? Aapki tabiyet toh theek hai na??? ur

smiling.????

M- shut up Mughda….

Mu- Waise di aapki smile bahut pyaari hai….alwayz keep smiling…

R- Aaree Mughda..usko jyada compliment mat do…phir itna sir

pe chad jayegi na ki bas..tum pareshaan ho jayogi..

M- Rahul tu yahan subhe subh kyun aaya hai???

R- hello..main apni nayi dost se milne aayaa…tujhe koi problem

hai???(turning to Mughda…) Hi sweetie..kaisi ho??

Mu- I am good bhaiyaa…tell me sumthing…aaapko magic ataa hai

kya??

R- Nahi..kyun???


Mu- aapne raatoraat meri didi pe kya jaadu kar diya?? She was

smiling i mean its shocking for me…

Muskaan smiled again…

Rahul looked at Muskaan..it was good to see her smile again…

R- well u knw mera jalwa hi aisa hai ki u just cant escape….

M- OMG!!! Rahul u r sooo impossible….

R- chalo muskii..jaldi se ready ho jao…

M- kyun??

R- hume shopping ajaana hai…

M- Shopping kyun???

R- Yeh tere sundar se ghar ka sadda hua interior change karna

hai…aree I feel like hum 60 saal ke budhhe ho gaye hai….

RAhul iski koi jarurat nahi hai…

R- Aree tujhe nahi hogi mujhe toh hai…ab main yahan hamesha

aaunga toh I will feel so dead….

M- Rahul plzz..mujhe kahin nahi jaana…

R- Bill main de dunga….ok???(laughs)

M- No..its not about that….

R- Fine..(dramaticaaly)tujhe mere dosti ki koi parwa hi nahi hai…

M- Emotional Blackmail kar rahi hai kua???

R- Nai…who toh tera department hai….

Muskaan smiles…….suddenly all her past flashes come to her..all

good memories with Rahul …he always said that dialogue…she

hugs Rahul…

M- Thanks

R- Kyun bhai?? Itna pyaar??? Jyada kharcha karne ka irada hai

kya???


M= Nahi,….tunr bas beetein hue dino ki yaad dila di….

R- Yaa those days in pataila man…I miss them….

M- Me too…kya purane din kabhi wapis nahi aayenge rahul?

R- Kya?

M- Hum kitni masti karte the bina duniya ki parva kiye...mujhe

woh din wapis chaiye

R- Muskii...woh din toh main nahi laa sakta...but masti toh hum

abhi bhi kar sakte hai...hai na???

M- Hmm...

R- ok toh ab chale ki aur drama karu???

Muskaan smiles…..

They go shopping…new curtains…new bedsheets and new

dcor…………Muskaan life was changing…she had closed all the

doors of light coming in her life..bt Rahul opened the

windows….never mind the doors…..Rahul was bringing back

Muskaan The original….

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Posted: 14 years ago
ur going the humtum way... i didnt want raj to dieee but i didnt want him bad either... o shucks he's gone so w/e..lol

rahul is so cutee!!comforting her and making her laugh.. mughda is adorable!lol i'm glad ur not copying everything from that movie:D:D
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 24:

Few days later:

Muskaan is in her butic talking to her client…

Her cell rings…Rahul calling….

M- haan bol…

R- Kya kar rahi hai?

M- kaam kar rahi hu..i am busy.

R- kya baat kar rahi hai?? Busy and u???omg….

M- Shut up….

R- ek problem hai…

M- Kya?

R- Mujhe bhook lagi hai…


M- Is that a problem?? I eman normal logon ko bhook lagti hai

and I am surprised ur normal….


R- pagal..problem yeh nahi hai ki mujhe bhook lagi hai..its that I

dnt knw what to eat..yahan ke khaane ke naam kitne aajeeb hai..i

just dnt knw what to order…saath lunch karte hai na ..plzzz


M- sorry Rahul I am busy


R- Aree yaar aadhne ghante se kya phrak padega…


M- I said I am sorry…not possible….


She cuts the phone….


It was nt that she was too busy or sumthing…she felt Rahul was

being symapathetc towards her..she didn't want any sympathy

that's the reason she left India….


It was lunch time:


Muskaan was struggling with her acoounts..she was never good

with it yet she tried…Rahul comes…


M- Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?


R-(ignoring her question)- Pata hai jeena mushkil ho gaya hai

yahan..log english me baat hi nahi karte…aur bhook se insaan mar

jayega yahan…kuch order karo aur kuch aur hi le aate hai

kamine…finally I found a Chinese restaurant..noodles.. laya hu….


M- maine akha tha busy hu…


R- Aree isliye toh yahan aaya hu…kya kar rahi hai???

Acounts(laughs) Madam ka weak point huh? Accountant rakh

lena…chal show me I will help u…..


M(irritated)-Rahul..pkzz…main koi bachhi nahi hu..jo tu mujhe

baar baar help kar raha hai..i can very well handle my life…


R- Muskaan..main toh bas---


M- Shut up(shouts) That's enough…jab tu nahi tha tab life ruki

nahi thi meri..i was handling it very well..u just stop

interfereing in everything…yeh baar baar mujhe sympathy

dikhaabne ki jarurat nahi hai…iski wajha I left india…u plzz leave

me alone..


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Posted: 14 years ago
yaa i knw...i hve churaofied this frm HUM TUM...bt i will come up with sumthing very nice next time...pukkka
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part!
Thanks for the Pm..
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Hey,
OMG!!! I have missed soo many chapters..I was just scrolling along. But read all of them now. You are soo inspired by 'Hum-Tum' it seems😆..but its amazingly fitting on RM.
I wish I could see them onscreen once again. 😍😭
Awesome writings.👍🏼Continue soon and thanks alot for the PM's!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice parts appu
i know u will put something very nice next time =)
i mean muski will understand ki rahul is helping her
by his heart n love
not just 2 show her that he's caring 4 her
waiting 4 next..
see yaaa
love uuu

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