RM: Ek Rishta thoda hatke!!!upd 21/5 pg32 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
what? muski ki shadi ho gayi? how could u do that?

hope its a dream... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nahi........................... muski ki shaddi for real..................nooooooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
what sachme shadi?
rahul faint nahi ho gaya ta
woh soh raha ta?
kya appu itni achi news mili thi
uff...koi na koi twist to hona hi ta..lol
its ok yaar,,,loved the updt
n RM fight
muski's saas sounds lill irritating
lets see what happen
cont soon when u can
love yaaa
mmmuuuaahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

what? muski ki shadi ho gayi? how could u do that?


hope its a dream... continue soon



yaa mukaan is married for real..no dream..
.bt obviously RAhul is apna hero...d
nt worry keep reading....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

Nahi........................... muski ki shaddi for real..................nooooooo


😭



😭😭 yaa for real...

bt there is lot more in RM love stry.....😆😆

😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

what sachme shadi?

rahul faint nahi ho gaya ta
woh soh raha ta?
kya appu itni achi news mili thi
uff...koi na koi twist to hona hi ta..lol
its ok yaar,,,loved the updt
n RM fight
muski's saas sounds lill irritating
lets see what happen
cont soon when u can
love yaaa
mmmuuuaahhh



sach me shaadi....
warna twist kaise aata???
RM toh kissi bhi situation me daalu they will never change....😆😆
yaa her Saas is villian types....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hawwwwwww shaadi 😲 can't wait to see their love story unfold now 😍

and was reading your replies.. haan her saas does sound like hitler types 😆

hope she is not too evil with Muskaan!!
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Posted: 14 years ago



Part 16:

Aftwr two hours..

Rahul is sitting in his room arranging the papares for the job he has got in Mumbai..

Raj enters..

Ra ' hi rahul..

R ' hey raj'aao na baitho..

Ra ' aree nahi..i just came to say bye..hum nuikal rahe hai'

R ' Itne jaldi.;..??

Ra ' haan who 4.30 ki flight hai toh use pehle checking and all that..

R ' o yaa..hmmm'um..muskaan nahi aayi???

Ra (laughs)- tumhew kya lagta hai??? (hye moves aside and muksan is standing behind raj)

Rahul smiles'

M ' mujhe koi shauk nahi tha yahan aane ka..woh toh raj ne kaha..warna toh teri shakl bhi na dekhu main'

R 'toh nahi dekhni thin a'

M ' monkey jaisi shaakal toh hai..usme kya dekhni'

R ' hello..main kafi handsome hu ok''

M (laughs)- oyee common sense ke mare hue putle'kisne keh dia tujhse???

R- kafi ladkiyon ne kaha hai'

M ' aandhi honge saari ki saari'

R ' chup kar'

Raj was getting late'

Ra- hmm..muskaan chale..late ho raha hai'

M ' chal tub hi kya yaad rakega'chod dia'

R ' ja ja tujhe yaad bhi kaun rakhna chata hai'

They go down and Raj sees his tyre is punctured'

Ra ' shit..yeh trye ko bhi abhi puncture hona tha???

R ' muksan ne hi kia hoga..

m- maine?? Main kyun karungi/??

R ' Raj yeh khoti bachpan me meri cycle ka tyre puncture karti thi'

Muskaan laughs'

R ' ab yeh ghode ki tarah hans mat'

M ' kamine sharam kar'main ghodi toh tu gadha'.

Raj was getting a bit impaiotent'

Ra- muskaan? Hume taxi leni padegi airport ke liye'

R ' aree taxi kyun? Main chod deta hu na tum logon ko airport'

Ra ' aree nahi rahul..its ok yaara..hum chale ajyenge''

M ' raj..pehli baar yeh kanjus khud apni gaddi ka petrol spend karke hume lift de raha hai'sona chance hai'chaliye chalte hai'

Ra ' kya?? Muskaan??

R ' tu kabhi nahi sudhregi'

Rahul brings his car..muskaan is about to sit in the frnt like she always does bt raj sits there before her/'she is standing there looking at raj'

Ra ' kya hua???

M ' nahi woh.. main hamesha'

R ' aree kuch nahi'muskaan jaldi baith jaa..hume late ho rajha hai'

He takes her back and opens the door for her..

M ' rahul..woh meri jagah hai..main hamesha wahan bauithi hu'tere side me'

R ' toh theek hai na?? tera pati hi toh baith hai'chal jaldi baith jaa..

They sit in the car and rahul drives'.

Ra ' toh rahul muskaan ne kaha kit um Mumbai me job ke liye aanewale ho'?

R ' well haaan'abhi tak kuch final nahi hua hai bt aanwwala hu..

M ' hey bahgwaan ..aab wahan bhi mera jeena jhaaraam karne wala hai kya tu??

R ' tujhse nahi milne aunga bas khush??

M ' haan phir theek hai'abse din aache guzrenge tera saada hua chrhra nahi dekhna padega'

R ' mere bhi din aache guzrenge..subhe subhe mujhe pakane abhi koi nahi aayega'aaram se ssone bhi nahi deti thi yeh raj mujhe'

M ' ab unse meri shikaayat karne ki jarurat nhai hai ok?

R ' kyun??? Daar gayi muskaan??

M ' muskaan kaur chadda kabhi bhi kissi se bhi darti nahi hai ok??

Raj smiles'

Ra ' by the way shone now its muskaan raj mulhotra raight???

M ' aree haan'main toh bhool hi gayi thi'

R ' bhulakad kahin ki..shona'

M ' shut up'only rja cals me that ok???

R ' o ya???

M ' yaaaaaa

Rahul laughs'

R ' its such a cuute name ..shona..

M ' tu kya soch raha hai?? Teri koi gf hai?? Kamine khote tune muyjhse yeh baat kyun chupai??? Tujhe kya laga ki hamesha ki tarah main use bhaga dungi???

She quickly covers her mouth'she had confessed her own crime'

R ' that's it..main jaanta tha..tu hi meri saari gfs ko bhaga deti hai'

M (hiding her face) aisa kuch nahi hai'main toh bas'

R ' haan..bol main toh bas kya?? Pata hai raj tujhe yeh teri shonaa'meri har setting kharab kar deti thi'pata nahi woh girls ko kya kehti thi ki saare last minute back out karti thi'

Raj was surprised..

Ra ' tum rahul ki gfs bhagati thi?? Kyun? Kya kehti thi unko..?

Muskaan laughs''.

M ' woh main unhe kehti thi ki rahul gay hai aur apni maa ke kehne se kisi bhi ladki ko pata kar ussse shaadi karna chahta hai'.

Raj and Rahul are shocked'''..

R ' kyaaa????????

Rahul stops the car..

R- tu aaj gayi kaam se'.

She gets down from the car and runs ..rahul runs behind her'.Raj gets down from the car and is irritated..he looks at this watch'then at RM'

Muskaan hids behnd Raj'

Ra- muskaan'humari flight miss ho jayegi'can we plzz go?? Ya main akele jao??

R ' aree nahi'sorry raj baith ja'muskan abhi kuch nahi bolegi'

So they all sit in the car'Rahul makes muskaan sit..

R ' ab jara chup baithna'

m- tu khudki dekh'mere bare mat bol'

ra- rahul'stop the car' I am going'

r- aree nahi'main gaane lagata hu'

m ' plzz fm lagana teri choice ke gaane nahi sunne,,,,

he plays the fm'

tumko bhi hai khabar..mujhko bhi hai pata'

ho raha hai juda..dono ka raasta'

dur jaake bhi tumse'tum mere yaadon me rehna..

kabhi alvida na kehna kehna..

kabhi alvida na kehna kehna..

rahul looks at muskaan from the top mirror and muskaan looks ta rahul'they knew it was the apt song for this situation'both have tears in their eyes'perhaps this is the last time they meet..they have fun..last time they fight'they both are lost in the moment'

a car is coming in their direction bt rahul is not aware of that'they are abt to dash when raj turns the streeing wheel'

Ra- rahul sambhal ke'..

R(realizes wat happened)- I am sorry'who main'.

Raj looks at tears in his and mukssan eyes'he knew they felt bad abt the separation'somewhere he felt did he come in between two friends who would eventually be lovers???







Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwww sweet part man!!!

waise I can't feel gussa at Raj either.. uska bhi toh point hai ke she's his wife and is not even bothered about him.

but esp the ending.. no matter how much they fight.. they are always there for each other 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon..

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