RM: Ek Rishta thoda hatke!!!upd 21/5 pg32 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sweet.melody

awwwwwww omg cute part!!! :D

So Muskaan was in love with him the whole time? bas he didnt know?

loved this line especially:

Buddhu.. jiss ladki ne bachpan se lekar jawwani tak ka safar tera haath thamkar kia'use aage ki zindagi ke liye kissi aur ka haath thmane ki kya jarurat pad gayi?

continue soon appy!

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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Awesome part!!
Thanks for the pm

thankss sweetie..i am glad u liked it...😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

awwwwwwwwwww FINALLLYYYYYY!!! totalllyyy loved this part!!!cant wait to read the next partttt...too cuteeeeeee

hmmmm finally...well not so finally.....😉😉😉😉 keep reading....

Originally posted by: lovely.ravs

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loved reading u r update yaar!...
good job😊

i am glad sweetie u liked it....😊😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: _Monu_

aapppuuu yaar

woooww sooo cuteee

so muskaan was in love with him???

ha ha ha ha

n i think rahul faint ho gaya

the way she said

rahul rahul rahul

omg...cont soon

love yaaa

mmmuuaahhh

rahul faint toh hua hi hai...😆😆😆😆 well...keep reading to know more..... i am updating sooon😉😉😉😉

eeeeeeeee waiting!!!!!!

did I comment for latest part 🤔 going to check 😆

omg I re-read.. dont tell me that was Rahul ka sapna 😲 🤣

areee yaaar agara itrne jalid hero heroine mil gaye toh kaise chalega???

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

areee yaaar agara itrne jalid hero heroine mil gaye toh kaise chalega???

point toh hai 😆 but I didnt realize that it could be a sapna or something till the second time i read it 🤣

and haan I was majorly shocked seeing that hero heroine already mil gaye 🤣

Part 15:

RAhul'.

RAhul'''

Uth ja puttar yahan kithe soo gaya???

Rahul wakes up and sees his mom standing in front of him'

R.M= puttar yahan kithhe soo gaya???

R ' maa muskaan kahan hai??? Uski shaadi??

R.M- shaadi ho gayi puttar..tune hi toh use mandap me bithaya tha na'chaL abhi uth ja..uski bidaai ho rahi hua'

Rahul was shocked'

R ' main sapna dekha??? Mera aur muskaan ka? No I don't love her yaar..main..kaise..uski shaadi ho gayi hai..maine aisa sapna kaise dekha???main kuch jyada hi soch raha hu'.i don't know'may be I should just relax a bit'sab theek hai'yaa sab theek hai'

Here it is muskan's bidaai:

She hgs her mom and dad and she is crying'.she is about to sit in the car when she sees Rahul standing at a distance.. she ran and hugged him'

M 'kamine khotey..kahan chala gaya tha?? Main kabse tujhe dhund rahi thi..idiot..

R ' sorry'who sab chod' byee muskaan..apna khyal rakhna'

M(sobs)- rahul..mujhe nahi jaana'kuch kar na yaar'

R ' chup kar pagli pagal hai kuya??? Raj aur tum dono hamesha khush rahoge'

Raj's mom was looking at this from the distancfe'she rolled her eyes'

one of the relatives said- aree yeh kya'teri bahu kis munde ke saath hai??

Ra.M- who uska dost hai bachpan ka'

Relative- dost? Par phir bhi bhabhiji ab who aapke ghar ki bahu hai..kuch toh lihaaj karna chahiye na use..kya yehi sanskaar hai maa baap ne diye???

Ra.M ab kya bolu raano mere bte ko koi pharak nahi padta'

Rano= aree bhabhiji apna raj toh bholuram hai..aap toh samajdaar hai na'apni nuu ko thodi samaj de dena'

Ra.M- haan baat toh sahi kar rahi hai tu ranno'main baat karungi muskaan se..ab mujhe hi sikhane padenge usko saari baatein'.

She goes to RM'

Raj's mom looks at Rahul'

Ra.m ' bahu'chale beta???? Agar tumahri baatein ho gayi ho toh???

Muskaan looked at her mother-in-law..she didn't understand the taunt in her nwords..Rahul smiled'wiped muskaan's tears'

R- Bye,,,apna khayal rakhna'.

M ' tu bhi'.

Muskaan goes and sits in the car& waves' and the car goes'.

Suddenly there is silence everywhere'. Rahul keeps looking at the car till it is invisible'slowly tears start flowing from his eyes' which he controlled since long..he walks in his room & sits on his bed.. all the memories of the moments spend wid muskaanflashed through his mind'and tears didn't stop'.

He is thinking'

R ' mujhe kyun bura lag raha hai??? Meri bestest frend ki aaj shaadi ho gayi hai' raj bahut aacxha ladka hai'who meri muskii ko bahut khush rakega'par ab hum roj nahi mil payenge'who masti who sharrat sab kahtam ho gaya.woh ruthna who manaana who sab chut jayegaa...aaj se uski nayi zindagi shurru ho ho gayi hai'kya issliye main dukhi hu?? Bt har ladki ko ek din apne ghar toh jaana hota hi hai'par mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki maine zindagi ki sabse imp cheez chuut rahi hai'main muskaan ko call karunga'sometimes we will meet'chat bhi karenge'par usme who baat nahi hoga'main wapis apni best frend muskaan ko nahi milunga main Mrs.Raj mulhotra'.sab baddal gaya'.

Sach hai ki dil toh dhuka hai'

Humne magar socha hai'dil ko hai gum kyun..

Aankhe hai naam kyun

Hona hi tha jo hua hai/'..

Uss baat ko jaane bhi do..

Jiska nishaan kal ho na hooooooo''''.

Next day:

Muskaan comes for her pathpheraand its 10.30 and still rahul has not come to meet her..so she goes to his place only to see rahul is sleeping..

M 'oye khotey uth jaa'nikaaame nikhtaate get up..time dekha hai kya tune???

She is abt to kick him when she sees a picture of hers and rahul flighting near his pillow..

She smiled..she is abt to take that pic when her soft hair falls on Rahul's face and he gets up wid a jerk'

M (smiling)- good morning!

R ' muskaan tu hamesha mujhe subhe subhe darrati kyun hai???

M (laughs)- aur tu daar gaya ????

R ' chup kar khoti..tujhe kuch kaam vaam nahi hai'subhe subhe mujhe pareshaan karne aa jati hai'

M (senti)- aaj ke baad nahi aaungi'main jaa rahi hu waise bhi sham ko'

R ' aree haan teri toh shaadi ho gayi hai na ..main toh bhool hi gaya tha'.

M ' tu bhuool gaya tha???

R ' haan'

M 'tu na ek number ka bulakad hai..kabhi nhai sudherga'

R ' meri chod tu apni soch'

M 'meri kya..meri toh shaadi ho gayi hai'tu itna aalsi hua hai ki koi ladki tujhse shaadi nahi karegi'

R ' aalsi hone ka aur ladki ka kya connection hai???

M ' wohi toh'tu itna stupid idiot hai ki tujhse baat karna hi bekaar hai'

R ' toh jaa na kyun baat karne aayi hai'

M ' haan jaa hi rahi hu..ek toh dost ko milne aayo uparse isko natak chada hai..jaa kamine narak me jayega'

R ' haan aur tere aane ka intezaar karunga..tujhe bhi toh wahin aana hai'.

Muskaan looks at him angrily pushes him on his bed'

R ' mere saath kusti kehelegi???

M 'haan dekhte hai kaun jeeta hai'

R 'aacha???

R.M- haiiiyopoo rabba ..yeh kya ho raha hai???

R- maa maine kuch nahi'

M ' sab rahul ki galati hai'

R.M- muskaan puttar abhi teri shaadi ho gayi hai..jara zimmedaar ban ja puttar..warna teri saas kahegi ki maa bauji ne kuch nahi sikhaya'.

R ' haan wohi toh'

M ' tu chup reh..pehle khud ka dekh'jaa rahi hu'

r- aree jaa jaa'

m ' auntyji main chalti hu'warna meri mother india tension lene legegi,'

R.m laughs'

Muskaan leaves and rahul goes for shower..

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