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Posted: 14 years ago



Part 13:

next day:

Rahul is helping Muskaan's dad with the preparations when he gets call from Raj.

Ra- hi Rahul...

R- Hello dukheraja kaise ho??

Ra- theek nahi hu yaar

R- Y??? getting coldfeet
????

Ra- Nahi...bas main tujhse milna chahta cxhata hu...

R- Mujhse?>> ya muskaan se??'

Ra- haaiii muskaan se milna toh hai hi par philhaal tujse milna hai....

R- Ok...koi khaaas mesaage pahunchaana hai kya???

Ra- msg nahi..par haan khaas kaam hai....

R- ok toh milte hai....

Ra- in half an hour?

R- ok don e,......



HAlf an hour later::

Ra- Rahul yaara mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai

R- hone bhi chaiye...tu Muskii se shaadi jo kar4 raha hai...(laughs)

Ra- Yaar mujhe Muskaan ki pasand napasand ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata..usse kya aacha lagta hai kya bura lagta hai mujhe kuch nahi pata...humari shaadi itni jaldi jaldi me ho rahi hai...ki usse theekse jaaneka mauka hi hau mila.....meri help karge ana tu???

R- Yaa sure....par i would like to warn u haan..muskaan ek dum pagal hai..jungli hai....ek number ki bhukad hai...hamesha khud ki marzi chalati....aur agar maarpit par utar aaye an tph phir bas...kahtamn hua sabkuch.....


Ra- RAhul?????????

R(laughs)- aacha theek itni buri bhi nahi hai......

Ra- Pata hai....(smiles)aur batao na....

R- Muskaan ke baare me ab kya batao me......jhalli hai meri muskii....sajna sawarana khubsurat lagna yeh sab toh aata hi nahi hai usse.....thoda bachpana hai usme par kabhi kabhi baatein ek dum experenced karti hai.....thodi muphat hai par dil me kabhi kuch nhai rakhti
(rm music in background)....bachpan se jhaali taare ginti thi......aur mujhe kehti thi ki u can count stars they r not uncountable....(laughs)....jab bhi dukhi hoti hai na terrace pe baithkar aasaaman me dekhti rehti hai....baarish bahut pasand hai usse...par jab bhi bheegti hai ek dum se sardi ho jati hai usse....madam ko coffee pina bahut pasand hai par chai banaani aati haui coffee hamesha meri haath ki piti hai....shopping karne jayegai na toh bas pura bazzaar buy karna hoga usse....hamesha tumse puchegi kaunsi dress aachi hai par wohi dress legi jo usse pasaand hai....noodles bahut pasand hai muskii ko....aandhe se allergy hai usse....omlet ek baar kayanatha pura face red ho gaya tha....sweel ho gaya tha....jab neend nahi atai na tab mujhe bhi sone nahi deti kehti hai kuch bol na yaar..................aur--------


raj was simply astonished to see Rahul going on and on and on abt Muskaan..he knew every smaall detail of muskaan 's life...

Ra- Rahul tu Muskaan se pyaar karta hai????????

Rahul looked at Raj....for a moment he didnt know what to say......bt then no..he didnt love muskaan she was his frend..best frend....

R- Pgal hia kua???? Ab itne bure din bhi nhai aaye hai ok???????

Ra- Muskaan teri best frend hai na???

R- haan

Ra- Jab woh yahanse chali jayegi toh usse bhaut miss karegha na???

R- Haan...bahut jydaa...aaj tak ek bhi din aisa nahi guzra jab maine mUskaan ka chehra na dekha ho yaa uski awaaz na sunni ho...agar humara jhagda bhi hota tha na toh bhi ek dusre ko galli dekhne ke bahane semilte the,,,,(laughs bt has has tears in his eyes) Raj..meri jhalli ka khayal rakhna...woh bahut silly hai stupid hai bt dil ki bahut aachi hai...trust me.....

Ra- haan..main tujhse shikayat ka bilkul mauka nahi dunga.....Muskaan ke aankho me kabhi aansu nahi ayaneg ..i promise.......

R- Thank you........


hope u like it...do commnet.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwww that was such a sweet part Appy.. it was sad yet happy how Rahul knows every little thing about her.. but he doesn't realize it's love. They would surely miss each other A LOT if they ever went away from each other.

Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww very cuteee partttt!!! update the next onee soonnn!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
luv the part soo sweeeet
cont soon
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Part 14:

FINlly the D-Day arrives...

Itss Muskaan's wedding day:

Chadda family is busy with the last minute preparaions...Muskaan is surrounded by her cousins frends & all the girls were helping her to get ready...

suddenly there is sound of firecrackers and band baja.....BARAAT AAGAYAI......some1 shouts.....all the girls giggle.....chalo chalo barata dekhne jaate hai...

all the girls run on the terrace to see the barat...Muskaan's mum is worried whether muskaan is ready as baarat is on the dorr.....she tells a girl- oyee sunn dekh toh jra muskaan taiyar hui ya nhai baarta darwaaz epar hai...

girl- aree auntyji muskaan taiyaar ho hayegi,...main toh chali baarat dekhne...tuyssi jao jijaji ke swaagat ki taiyaari karo.....

M.M- Aree??? yeh aaj kal ki kudiyaan na ek dum baat nahi sunti..ab mujhse swaagat ke liye bhi jaana hai....

R- kya hua aunyji...itne pareshaan kyun ho???? Muskaan bhaag gayi kya???

M.M- oyee chup kar...shubh shubh bol....

R(laughs)- ok sorry....

M.M- Tu kya kar raha hai??? koi kaam kar raha hai kya???

R- Nahi...

M.m- good..jaa jake dekh dekh teri dost taiyaar hui yaa nahi......barata darwazze par hai aur yeh ladkiyaan sab ki sab khamsmanu kahniyaa....

R- relax dulhan ki mom....main hoon na .....

Muskaan in her room:

muskaan is not ready...she is struggling with the jeweallary

M- Yaar yeh sab gehne kyun pehente hote hai...kash main christian hoti...toh bas white gown pehenke shaadi karti...yeh sab kya hai yaaar....kitni heavy jewealry main ek dum jodha akbar ke set se bhaagi hui lag rahi hu....yeh bindi kaise pehte hai yaar...babaji tussi toh meri madat karo na...yeh saare ladkiyaan ek dum uselless hai...braaat aayi nahi ki dulhe ke dosts pe line maarne ke liye sab chali gayi..usless.....

Rahul comes in her room and sees her sitting near the dressing table facing the mirror talking to herself...he smiles.....he could see her image thru the mirror..he was stunned to see her...sh ewas looking beautriful....simply gorgeous......Muskaan sees Rahul...

M- Oye Rahul.... Thanks God tu aaya gaya yaaar....kaisi lag rahi hu main????

Rahul is just staring at her.....

M- Oyee phide...aankhe phad phad ke kya dekh raha hai...kuch toh bol.....

R(still staring)- Beautiful....tu bahut sundar lag rahi hai Muskaan....

M(blushed)- sachi???

R- Haan....

M- par rahul main abhi tak taiyaar nahi hu...dekho ya bangle...yeh bindi mujhe yeh sab nahi aata aur barat darwaaze par ghai uar main abhi tak ready nahi hu aur..........

R(keeps his finger on her lips)- shssss.....main hoona na ...i will help u.....

he takes her by her hand..makes her sit then chooses the bngles makes her wear them...then he takes the bindi and puts it on her forehead and makes her look in the mirror....

M(smlies)- ab main ek dum dulhan lag rahi hu na???

R(looking at her)- nahi...ek cheez ki kami hai....

he takes her pallu and keeps it on her head

R- ab lag rahi hai ek dum soni dulhan....ek min....(he takes the kajal and puts a snall dot behind her ears)- kissiki nazzar na lage meri muskii ko....

M(tear-eyed)- Rahul;.......thanks....thnks for everything..........

R(smiles)- Oyee roo mat yaar...warjna teri 4 ghante ki mehnat paani me..itna makeup kia hai uska kuch toh phiada hona chhiye na......

M- chup kar khotey...yeh toh bas 3 ghante me kia hai make up.....

just then M.M comes......

M.m- aree tu taiyaar hui ya nahi....panditji bula rahe hai....(looks at muskaan) Haiiii kinni soni lag rahi hai meri kudi....dekhu toh....(eyes filled with tears)

R- auntyji...abhi bidaai me time hai....rone wala scene abhi nhai hai...aansu bachake rakho...waise bhi iski bidaai pe toh jyada aansu nikalenge nahi toh yeh kaam aayemnge u know just to show hum kitna miss karenge muskaan ko....

M- chup kar kamine....tujhe toh kuch fikar hai hi nhahi meri,,,,,

M.M- shaadi ke din toh galiyaan mat de....

M- Mummmyji aaj toh mainu mat daato.....

M.M- na puttarji...tu bahut soni lag rahi hai.....

M(hugs her mom)- i love mummyji..i will miss u........

R- koi mujhe bhi toh hug karo na.....

M- oyee haatt aaj maa -beti bomnding cahl rha hai..tu har baar beech me mat aa.....

M.M(wipes her tears)- ab chale..panditji bula rahe hai.....

R- Auntyjii if u dont mind..kya main Muskaan ko mandap tat ke jau???

M.M- Haan..theek hai....

rahul gives his hand..muskaan smiles..she keeps her hand on his hand and they walk towards the mandap....he makes her sit besdides Raj & slowly her hand is leaving his hand..he wants to hold it bt cant...his heart is pain9ing out...he feels like he is losing something bt still he doesnt understand what?????

Muskaan and raj looked at each other and smiles...the pandit starts his mantra...bt Rahul is unable to see it..he wonders why??? he goes and sits in a corner........

after sometime:

Muskaan keeps her hand on Rahul's shoulder …

Rahul looks at her…

R – muskaaan tu yahan??? Teri toh shaadi??

M (ignoring his question)- Rahul..tu wahanse chala kyun aaya rahul??? Kyun??

R – wooh main thoda thak gaya tha..na isliye…

M- jhoot mt bol…t tu wahanse chala kyun aaya rahul??? Kyun??

R – kyunki main teri shaadi kisii aur se hote hue nahi dekh sakta tha…

M –kyun?

R – kyunki main tujhse shaadi karna chahta tha..

M – toh kabhi kaha kyun nahi?

R – mujhe laga kit u Raj se…

M – raj se kya? Huh?? Buddhu.. jiss ladki ne bachpan se lekar jawwani tak ka safar tera haath thamkar kia…use aage ki zindagi ke liye kissi aur ka haath thmane ki kya jarurat pad gayi?????

R – matlab?

M – matl;ab duffer main ladki hu..main kaise pehhle kehti???

R –matlab tu???

M –rahul…….

RAhul….

RAhul………




hope u like it do comment..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww omg cute part!!! :D

So Muskaan was in love with him the whole time? bas he didnt know?

loved this line especially:

Buddhu.. jiss ladki ne bachpan se lekar jawwani tak ka safar tera haath thamkar kia…use aage ki zindagi ke liye kissi aur ka haath thmane ki kya jarurat pad gayi?


continue soon appy!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww FINALLLYYYYYY!!! totalllyyy loved this part!!!cant wait to read the next partttt...too cuteeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved reading u r update yaar!...
good job😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
aapppuuu yaar
woooww sooo cuteee
so muskaan was in love with him???
ha ha ha ha
n i think rahul faint ho gaya
the way she said
rahul rahul rahul
omg...cont soon
love yaaa
mmmuuaahhh

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