Ek Raja par Kitni Rani?(on Rajeev) (part 2 pg 12)

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Sumaiya aur Nandini...

Ab chunki aap logon ne iss bhaag ko purn rup se shuddh hindi me likha hai to mai bhi yahi cheshta karungi ki iss par uttar bhi hindi me hi dun...😆😆😆 parantu bhul hone ki sambhavna adhik hai... isliye mera nivedan hai ki yadi kahin kuch samajh nahi aaye to samajhne ki cheshta bhi mat karna😆😆😆

Atayant sundar rup se aap dono iss bhaag ko likha hai... To Maharaj rajveer apni praza ke dil me sama chuke hain aur unka bhay unn mantrion ke dimag me cha gaya hai...

Dakuon ki yojana bahut achi thi par har baar ek hi yojana kaam nahi aati... isliye iss baar mantri do kadam aage nikal gaye. Unhone kuch samay ke liye to Maharaj Rajveer ko bhi dhoka de diya... parantu ye to Rajveer hai... unhe sandeh nahi hoga to kisse hoga... Ab jab Rajveer ke mann me sandeh jagrit ho chuka hai... to ye dekhna baaki hai wo iss paristhiti se nipatne ke liye kaun si nayi yojana banate hain.

Dakuyon aur Rajveer ke bich ki muthbhed rochak lagi... Unn dono ne Rajveer ko ghayal kar diya. Ab dekhna ye hai ki "INSANIYAT ZINDABAAD" ka naara Maharaj par kya prabhav daalta hai...😆😆😆 Aur wo kya sochte hain aur kya nahin...

Pichle bhaag par uttar na de paane ke liye kshyamaprarthi hun... iss baar se mai samay se hi yahan aa jaya karungi... Aur humara nivedan hai ki aap dono shighratishighra aagami bhaag prastut karen...

Saprem...
Guglu

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PS: Sumi aur Nandini... maine pehle ki keh rakha hai... agar kuch samajh na aaye to samajhne ki koshish bhi mat karna... Mujhe pagalpan ka daura pada tha...😆😆😆

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Nice part Sumi and Nandini..!!!

Update soon...!!!

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

namaste

Dhara di aur Guglu ji se prerna lete huye mai bhi apni tippani hindi me pseh karna chahungi.

Sabse pehle to ap dono ke liye dher sari taliya👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

apne itna achcha path(chapter) pesh kia humare samne.

Hum ati anandit huye

Raja ji ki bahaduri aur adao ne humara dil jeet liya. ye baat hum har jagah likhte hai, magar aj andaz kuch alag hai na

Daku log mantriyo ke prakop se gaav se bachana chahte hai- aur mantri log dakuo aur raja ji se apne aap ko bachana chahte hai

In budhiheen logo ne kya socha ke ye itni asani se Rajveer ko dhokha de denge aur rajasv lekar nikal jayenge, aur Raja ji ko shaq bhi nahi hoga?

Humare Rajveer bahut zaheen hai...aur ab vo in sab ki watt lagayenge(isko khud translate karo)

Magar ye bataiye ke humari dono raniya kaha hai?

unhe bhi to le aiye

agla path zara jaldi pesh karne ki taklif kijiyega

dhanyavaad

Sur

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

hamara sadar pranam swikaar karen Nandini ji aur Sumaiya ji😃

dhara, guglu, mana n Sur se...utchahit ho kar...hum ne bhi sudhh hindi me pravachan dene ka pann kiya hai...!!! is se agar bura prabhav pade toh kripiya humain dosh na de...kyoun ki humain un charon ki wajah se yeh pravachan de rahe hain. yeh vohi charon hain...jin ka naam hum ne pahle bhi likha hai...baht yatnayaain deti hain yeh charon...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ab hum aap k is prayojit karyakram par aate hain...jo ki itna behtarin tha...ki hamari zuban pet me gir gayi...aur hum ati prasann ho kar...apni ungilon se likhne ka prayatn karne lage...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

baht hi uchh koti k raja hai hamare Raja ji...jitne voh uchh hain...un ki matri-gann utne hi nich koti k hain...!!! unhe lagta tha ki raja ji ko ullu bana kar bach jayenge...par raja ji toh sher nikle...jo ki voh hamesha se hi hain...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

raja ji k adayon se hum toh pahle se ghayal the...ab hum aur bhi jyata aahat ho gaye hain...in ki adayon se...toh socha ki vaidya jee se paramarsh le len...taki aap k nirdharit karyakram par dubara pahunch jayen...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab itne chote bhaag par hum se jyada bade pravachan ki umeed na karen...agar ho sake toh thoda bada bhaag daak se bhejne ka prayatn karen...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

hum aap k teeshre bhaag k pratikhsha me hain...😃

ab hamain biday di jiye...😃

namashkaar...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

me and sumaiya r extremely sorry for not being able to update this fic.. we wont be able to UD it before 26 july.. we r really sorry frnds..

Love
Sumaiya & Nandini😊

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

its altready 26 july kab krengi aap madam

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: pinka28
kab kerogi ud

Hey Pinka.....so sorry dear....we r not going to be able to UD very soon....as u can see its a joint fic.....it needs both of us (Nandini n Sumaiya) together at one tym....to think over the proceedings....and ryt now....none of us can do that....we both r continuing our individual fics...and of course are busy wid our studies as well.....so at the end...we cant give u any date of update....but we really wish to finish this fic😕....lets see when it happens😕😕....till then u can enjoy any other RN fic...😉....Extremely sorry....for the inconvenience.... 😕....however we assure u a PM...whenever we can UD this fic!!

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey Pinka.....so sorry dear....we r not going to be able to UD very soon....as u can see its a joint fic.....it needs both of us (Nandini n Sumaiya) together at one tym....to think over the proceedings....and ryt now....none of us can do that....we both r continuing our individual fics...and of course are busy wid our studies as well.....so at the end...we cant give u any date of update....but we really wish to finish this fic😕....lets see when it happens😕😕....till then u can enjoy any other RN fic...😉....Extremely sorry....for the inconvenience.... 😕....however we assure u a PM...whenever we can UD this fic!!

thanx yaar summi atleast you have responded to reader request

not like some other oen wwho dont even care to tell the situtaion

hope tum jab jaldi ho sort out ker lo aur humein ek achi si ud mile

will wait

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

When will both of u update this fiction???

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
When will both of u update this fiction???

Firstly....aapki memory ki daad deti hu dii....secondly....thank u....for posting in the thread and saving it from being locked...😆...and thirdly n most importantly we r just now talking abt this very fic...in fact isiliye iss thread ke darshan kiye maine...😆....so lets hope....sumthing is gonna cum up....not in the very far future!! 😳

EXTREMELY SORRY for such a long DELAY!! 😳

Luv,
Nandu n Sumi. 😳

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