Ek Raja par Kitni Rani?(on Rajeev) (part 2 pg 12) - Page 9

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sumaiya n Nandini Hey Suhana Dii....😃😃

Mere ko bhi nahin yaad raha iss fiction ke baare mein..Jab tumhara pm aaya to dekha yeh kya tha😆😆 Hehe....no wonder Dii....hum khud almost bhul gaye the....😳😆😆😆

Meri bhi memory loss shuru ho gayi hai 😉 Hehe...itne bare gap k baad ye koi bari baat nahi hai....chalta hai....😉😆😆

Coming to the update ,it was really gud..😛 Thanks Dii...😛

Us samy ke hisaab se tum accha likh rahe ho..Kuch words bahut difficult hain padne mein n tumne to story mein use kiya hai..hats off to u yaar👏👏 Ohh....I knw kuch words difficult hai....hum bhi Hindi translation dhundte rehte hai....😆😆....but hum aage se eng translation provide karenge....hope that'll do sum gud to u....😃😃😃

I use to read Nandan n Champak when I was very young..Yeh story padke mujhe apna bachapn yaad aa gaya,Raj n Rani wali stories bhi..😛 Ohh...mujhe nahi pata tha hamari pagalpanti aapko apne bachpan me le jayegi....we r very happy to knw dat.....😃😃😃

Raj will proove to b a really gud ruler ..Usne ne jo judgement di woh bahut hi acchi thi..👏 Am glad u liked his judgment Dii....no doubt he is gonna be a gr8 king!!😉😉

Continue soo

Bye

Ab isko continue karna😛 We'll try to remain consistent....😆

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

nice start...Thanks Priya....😃

ab raja jee rajeev hain toh hamesha sahi kaam toh karenge hi...!!! Yup....aur phir iss kahani ki sutra sanchalak bhi to Rajeevians hai....😆😳😳😳😳😳yeh toh hum sabhi jante hain ki raj on screen aur off screen sahi kaam hi karta hai...!!!No doubt abt that....he is the BEST!!!😃😃 ab voh raja bana hai toh faishla toh sahi karega hi... is me koi shaq nahi hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Bilkul sahi kaha....😛😛

actually mujhe yaad toh tha is fiction k bare me...par fir maine socha ki sayad tum dono apne apne ideas ko le kar uljhan me ho...aur isiliye cont nahi karr pa rahe ho...!!! ab do log sath me pagalpanti karenege...toh late toh hoga hi na...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Ohh....first am glad tumhare dimagless dimag me itni achhi memory bytes hai....😆😆.....and u r kinda ryt...hum dono ko apne ideas ek saath lane ka mauka hi nahi mila tha...Nandu hostel me thi na...😃😃.....aur tumhe to pata hoga....pagalpanti k liye bahut waqt chahiye...ye bhi ek art hai....hai na?😉😆😆

tum kuch jyada hi saaf bol rahi thi...mujhe un words ko sahi tarik se padhne me thoda sa waqt laga...par finally main samajh gayi...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Hmm....mujhe bhi baad me samajh me aya...its way too difficult....isilye next part se eng traslations honge....but only in brackets....😆😆

ab is ka next ud kabb aayega...??? We ourselves hardly knw....😆😆

Originally posted by: golu_1677

nice part. cont soon

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Sumi and Nandu ! Hieeeee !!! Hiiiieeeee Mana....😃😆

you guyz ROCKKKKKKKKKKKK !!! like alwaysssss !!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 Ohh....thank u thank u....hamein tarif sunna bahut pasand hai....😉😉😆😆

mujhe tumhari yeh 'Pagalpanti' or what Sumi calls it, bhi bahottttttttttt pasand aayi !! Aksar dimagless insaan dusre dimagless insaano ki pagalpanti enjoy karte hai....😆😆....issi bharose to humne ye fic start kiya hai....😆😆....but seriously dear....am glad u liked it...😛

Welll issmein koi badi baat nahi hai, PAGAL ko pagalpanti toh pasand aani hi hai ! 😆 😆 Hehe....maine upar yehi baat likhi hai....and am not gonna erase it huh!!😆😆😆

so finally you guyz decided to update this....Me soooo happy happy ! 😃 U happy happy.....then we t happy to the power infinity!!😆😆

Update was superrrbbbb !!! 👏 Thank you....😳

arey yaar jab tum dono likh rahe ho toh Rajeev ka character toh Dhasoooo hona hi hai ! 😆 Koi shakh??😉😉 Actually hamara prime moto yehi hai....jo bhi ho Rajeev ka character bindaas n jhakkas hona chahiye....😆😆

par yeh dono beheno ka chakkar meri samajh mein nahi aaraha...I mean Raj ki heroine kaun hai...megha ya Sumedha? Arre....first part me hi ye question???😆😆 Mana....abhi to filhaal hamein bhi nahi pata heroine kaun hai....😆😆...and I assure u....hamare decide karne k kaafi waqt baad tumhe pata chalega....🤣....to abhi ye sawal apni khali dimag se nikal do....and make sum more khali space...😆😆

Ab yeh toh tum dono maujhe batane se rahe 😡 😆 issliye main apni bakwaas bandh karti hoon....iss line ke saath ki.....Ohh...hamein aisi bakwas achhi lagti hai...jaha hamari tarif hoti hai....aisi bakwas karti rehna....😉😉😆

Please update soooooooooonnnnnnnnn ! 😛

PART 2

Raja Rajveer ne sabhi ke dil aur dimaag mein apni jagah banali thi ek anokha par saccha faisla suna kar.. dil main unke jo bhole bhale hai aur jinhe Raja Rajveer se umeed hai ki woh unke jeevan main ujala (roshni) layenge aur dimaag main unke jo abb Raja Rajveer ko apne ghatia irado ke pura hone main rukawat samajhne lage hai..

Ek raat --

andhere main ghane jungle main kuch yojna (plan) bann rahi hai.. kayi log muh pe kala kapda bandhe aur ek haath main mashal aur dusri main talwar liye baithe hai..

Person 1 - Saathiyo aaj aap sabb ko phirse yaha bulaya gaya hai.. hamara maqsad hai anyay(injustice) aur anyay karne walo ko muh tod jawab dena.. kal garibo ka haq, unki mehnat ki kamayi, unke haq ki roti ko chinne ke liye, rajasva (tax) ke naam par atyachar karne ke liye Raja ke darbar ke papi mantri apne sainiko ke saath gaav ayenge.. woh log shaam ko purane mandir wale raste se guzrenge..

Person 2 - Aur hum wahi unka intezaar karenge.. aur har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi unke haath kuch nahi lagne denge par haan iss baar hum unka woh haal karenge ki dobara aisa karne ke liye sochne main bhi unki ruh kaanp jayegi.. itni baar haar aur maar ke siwaye kuch na haath lagne ke bawjud woh log mane nahi to iss baar unhe kuch aur bhi dena hi hoga..

Rest of the members - Haan haan.. iss bar hum unki sari himmat tod denge.. unka woh haal karenge ki unki saat pushte bhi yaad rakhengi..

Sabhi ek saath bolte hai - Insaniyat Zinda Rahe..

Aur ab jin papi mantriyon ka zikr hua tha wahi mantri ek saath baithe hai..

Mantri 1 - Piche ek saal se hamare sainik unn dakuo se muh ki kha kar aa rahe hai.. rajasv na milne se rajkosh khali ho na hoo magar hamari tijori zarur khali hoti ja rahi hai..

Mantri 2 - Mujhe to lagta hai ki hame iss bare main hamare naye Maharaj Rajveer ko sab kuch bata dena chahiye..

Mantri 3 - Nahi aisi bewakufi katai mat karna.. Raja Rajveer alag soch wala Raja hai agar use pata chala ki hum garibo se rajasv lete hai to woh iss rajasv shabd ke saath saath hame bhi rajya se bahar phek dega..

Mantri 4 - To phir kya kiya jaye?? kya iss baar bhi hamare haath kuch nahi lagega??

Mantri 1 - Nahi.. iss baar hame takat ki nahi balki akl istemaal karne ki zarurat hai..

Mantri 4 - Aap kehna kya chahte hai'..spasht roop se (clearly) kahiye..

Mantri 1 - Iss baar hum ek teer se do nishane lagayege..

Mantri 2 - Hum kuch samjhe nahi..

Mantri 1 - Iss baar mere paas aisi yojna hai ki yeh daku jadd(root) se samapt hoo jaenge aur phir hamari tijori bhi bhari rahegi..

Mantri 3 - Par yeh hoga kaise??

Mantri 1 - Hum Raja Rajveer ke paas yeh khabar pahuchaenge ki kuch dakuo ne pichle ek saal se apna atank machaya hua hai.. woh log musafiro ko loot lete hai aur unhe berahmi se marte hai.. phir hum raja ko ek yojna (plan) bataenge hum usse kahenge ki hum log gaav walo se rajasv lene ka natak karenge aur jis raste pe daku loot te hai usi raste se guzrenge.. woh daku hum pe hamla karenge aur phir to aap sabb jante hi hain hamara naya raja kitna kabil aur shaktishali(strong) hai.. woh kisi ko bachkar jane nahi dega.. aur inki ladai main hum chup chap rajasv leke nikal jayege aur yeh log apas main ladhte reh jayege.. kisi ko kano kaan khabar nahi hogi.. waise bhi humne dakuo ke kaano tak yeh baat pahucha di hai ki hum rajasv vasool kar purane mandir wale raste se guzrenge.. sabkuch waisa hi hoga jaisa hum chahte hai..

All laughed..

Subah hote hi charo mantri rajveer ke paas gaye aur jaise unhone ne plan kiya tha usi tarah Rajveer ko sab kuch bataya.. rajasv k naam se Rajveer thoda asantusht (displeased) hua..

Rajveer - Rajasva lene ka natak karne ki kya zarurat hai??

Mantri - Wo maharaj dakuo ko lalsit karne k liye (to arise lust in the dacoits) hamara matlab rajya ki rajkosh me zyada mudraye nahi hai'.

Rajveer - Hmm..

Rajveer ne mantriyon ko apni yojna (plan) aage badhane ki agya (permission) de di.. charo mantri sari taiyaari karne ke liye chale gaye..

Rajveer(thinking) - Hum unn dakuo ko nahi bakshenge.. woh log iss tarah bhole bhale aur nirbal logo par atyachar nahi kar sakte.. hum khud jayege aur apne haatho se unn logo ko saza denge..

Sainik taiyaar hooo gaye the.. sabhi Raja Rajveer ka intezaar kar rahe the magar..

Person - Mantri ji maharaj rajveer ne kaha ki woh nahi aa sakte unhe kuch aur zaruri kaam hai..

Charo mantrio ke chehre utar gaye magar abb we log piche nahi hatt sakte the aur waise bhi unn logo ne pehle se yeh tay kar liya tha ki gaav se sainiko ke jane ke baad hi chupke se rajasv ko mantrio ke ghar le jaya jayega bhes badal kar..

Sabhi daku aur unke sardar purane mandir ke paas inn logo ka intezaar kar rahe the.. unn logo ko iss baat ki khabar nahi thi ki inn mantrio ne kya yojna bana rakhi hai..

Shaam hui..

Daku 1 - woh log aa rahe hai sabhi taiyaar raho..

Sainik jaise hi waha tak pahuche dakuo ne unpe hamla kar dia.. charo mantri bhi the saath.. idhar daku aur sainik ladd rahe the aur udhar mantrio ne unn sainiko ki madad se jo ki mantrio ke saath shamil the gaav walo se berahmi se rajasv vasul kiya aur chup chap dusre raste se nikal gaye..

khoob khoon khraba hua.. kayi dakuo ki jaan gayi aur kayi sainik mare gaye.. kuch behosh pade hai.. isi bich tin log ghane jungle tak pahuch gaye ladhte ladte.. inmein se 2 daku hai matlab ki dakuo ke sardar.. inn dakuo main se ek ne iss sainik par zor se vaar kiya.. sainik ghode se niche gir gaya aur uske chehre pe bandha naqab khul gaya.. dono daku dekhkar hairaan the.. yeh sainik sainik nahi balki maharaj Rajveer hai !!

Rajveer ne ek daku par hamla kiya woh daku niche gir gaya.. dusra daku bhi ghode se khood gaya..

Abb tino zameen pe ladd rahe the..

Bich main Rajveer tha aur aaspaas dono daku..

Rajveer bakhubi dono dakuo ke vaar se bach raha tha.. Rajveer ne ek Daku ke haath par vaar kiya.. uss daku ke haath se talwaar chutt gayi.. dusre daku ki aankho main gussa aur apne saathi ke liye fikr saaf nazar aa rahi thi.. Rajveer ne uss daku (jiski talwar gir gayi thi..) par talwaar se vaar kiya magar dusre daku ne apni talwwar se use rok diya Rajveer ki kadi nazrein uss insaan pe padi jisne uska talwar roka.. abb yeh dono ladne lage.. Rajveer dono pe hawi hoo raha tha.. usne iss daku ke haath se talwar gira dii aur gardan pe talwar rakh di.. Rajveer ne haath bada kar uss daku ka naqab khichne ki koshish ki magar dusre daku ne uske sar par vaar kar diya.. Rajveer zameen pe girr gaya.. uske sar se khoon beh raha tha.. dono daku ghode pe chadh gaye aur Rajveer ke aaspaas gol ghumne lage..

Daku 1 - main agni

Daku 2 - aur main jwala..

Both together - hamare naam ki tarah hamara maqsad bhi ek hi hai.. Hamse mat takrana warna jhulas jaoge..

Agni - Iski jaan mujhmein hai

Jwala - aur meri jaan ismein..

Together - hum dharti vayu aur jal ki tarah amar to nahi magar hum tab tak mar nahi sakte jabtak hamara maqsad pura nahi hoo jata.. (they shouted)Insaniyat Zinda Rahe..

yeh keh kar dono ghane jungle main gayab ho jate hai..

Yaha mantri Rajasv lekar nikal gaye.. jabki Rajveer ne socha daku sab kuch le kar chale gaye.. aur daku ne socha Raja ne iss baar chalaki se unhe hara diya aur rajasv le gaye..

Raat bhar Rajveer soch me tha.. use pata tha dakuo ka yu rajasv le jana rajya k liye kitna gambhir vishay hai.. wo khud bhi unhe rok nahi paya.. iss baat se wo aur bhi pareshan tha lekin inn saari soch me kuch bahut ajeeb tha kuch tha jo bahut alag tha.. jo bilkul sahi nahi tha.. aur iske saath kuch aisa bhi tha jiske bare me use sochna tha kuch aisa jiski taraf use uski chhati indriya (sixth sense) ishara kar rahi thi lekin Rajveer ka dimag uska saath nahi de raha tha.. raat kaafi ho chuki thi ya yu kahe ki sawera hone ko hai.. aur Rajveer ko chot bhi ayi thi saath hi usne vishram (rest) tak nahi liya tha.. isiliye kuch bhi sochna ya samajhna mushkil ho raha tha.. Rajveer ne isiliye kuch waqt tak araam karne ki sochi kyunki iss paheli ko suljhane k liye use iss thakawat se rahat chahiye!!!

Subah hote hi mantri usse milne aye.. unhone Rajveer ko kal raat k bare me sab kuch bataya ki kaise daku unki sena ko hara kar saara rajasv le kar chale gaye.. Rajveer zyada dhyan se baat nahi sun raha tha lekin achanak unki ek baat pe wo chaukanna ho gaya..

Ek mantri ne kaha, "Unke sardaar ne hamein chetawni bhi di hai Maharaj ki wo aisa baar baar karenge!!!"

Ye baat Rajveer ko khatak gayi kyunki kal raat dakuon k sardar se wo lad raha tha unki baton se ye saaf tha ki wo hi sardaar the to ye Mantri kiski baat kar raha tha?? Aur achanak use khyal aya wo mantri pehle kuch pal to lad rahe the lekin achanak gayab ho gaye the.. par phir Rajveer ne iss baat pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyunki wo khud jungle k bicho bich chala gaya tha aur sena k saath nahi lauta tha..

Rajveer ko kuch shakh hone laga aur usne apni taraf ki kahani unn mantriyo ko batana uchit nahi samjha..

Rajveer - Thik hai ab aap log jaa sakte ho dakuo ka kya karna hai woh hum dekh lenge

Rajveer phir se gehri soch me pad gaya tha.. use itni to bhanak lag gayi thi ki sab kuch waisa nahi hai jaisa use dikh raha hai.. kuch hai jo uski nazron se chhupa hua hai ya yu kahe ki chhupane ki koshish kii jaa rahi hai aur Rajveer ko har aisi koshish ko nakaam karna hai tabhi wo ek sacche Raja hone ka farz nibha payega!!!

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love

Sumaiya and Nandini

Namskaar Nandini n Sumaiya

Sumaiya ji aur Nandini ji !