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Aria!
I felt as if I was reading a ballad; the pace, the content and the synchronous metronome which played in my mind when I read the first four paragraphs. Absolutely brilliant.
Its such a simple act of a man catching a woman. But dissecting everything she goes through in those moments are wonderfully penned.
I liked her third death, for its intensity and the way you have written it.
Hmm...a sequel would be nice. But you know an experience like this is once in a lifetime thing. Once it happens one would hold on to that as much as possible till the real deal walks in to their lives. So perhaps a few years later, they meet under similar circumstances but next time, she makes a move? Maybe?
Well, its an amazing read and I loved it!
Love to read more.
Sookie
I felt as if I was reading a ballad; the pace, the content and the synchronous metronome which played in my mind when I read the first four paragraphs. Absolutely brilliant.
Its such a simple act of a man catching a woman. But dissecting everything she goes through in those moments are wonderfully penned.
I liked her third death, for its intensity and the way you have written it.
Hmm...a sequel would be nice. But you know an experience like this is once in a lifetime thing. Once it happens one would hold on to that as much as possible till the real deal walks in to their lives. So perhaps a few years later, they meet under similar circumstances but next time, she makes a move? Maybe?
Well, its an amazing read and I loved it!
Love to read more.
Sookie
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
Tum Se Tum Tak
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Vasudha
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