||AR FF|| I Won't Let You Die - Part 18 Pg14 10/08 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
please continue!! Eager to read the next parts. loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
I loved this part and the first part! It's a very cute and simple FF! I love how Armaan keeps smiling and winking at her...so adorable! Do update soon!

By the way, last night at like 1 am, I was gonna shut down my computer because I had school, but I saw your FF and I read the first part and I loved it! <333

Love, Noru!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
nice part
eagerly waiting to know wht will happend next
plz post soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

grt part continue sooon

plss pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey intresting story would lv to read ahead plz cont it sooooooon nd plzzz if u could pm me whn u udate ur prt kk
Edited by swamii92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
nice part , really liked it a lot ,
oh riddhima was soo much attracted by him , loved that one a lot
very nice , would love to read ahead , please doo try and update with the next part soon
waiting for the next part
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was really goood plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

part 3

riddhima awakened to another beautiful day ..... she started getting ready for her college...'.but then her mom came in and told her that she couldn't go to college today'
Riddhima : (surprised) y ma ?
Padma : u forgot u have your monthly check up today ..we have to go to the hospital..

Riddhima hated dis ..she hated it when those cold hearted doctors sucked her blood out mercilessly just 4 some stupid tests.
She was upset like she always use to be but today her sadness was tinged with feeling of disappointment.....somewhere deep inside she was upset because she would not be able to see armaan she would miss his smiling face 'and most importantly she would not be able to ask anjie about him'

She went to the hospital for her check up and returned late in the evening'she was extremely tired so she directly went to her room. She was preparing her bed when suddenly her phone rang' it was anjie..
Riddhima answered the phone with a smile
Anjie: how are you sweety ?? must be tired'.
Riddhima: im fine but a little tired ..
Anjie: riddhima '.who is armaan ???
Riddhima : (stunned) armaan??????? why are you asking about him
Anjie: who is he???
Riddhima: he is a guy..
Anjie: wow wat a discovery ..i didn't know that he was a guy.. stupid he was asking about u.
Riddhima : (she had a shy a smile on her face) ..wat??????? he was asking about me??????? wat was he asking about me ?? (surprised n exited)
Anjie.: yr u so exited ???? nothing much he just asked me why didn't u attend college today.
Riddhima: (her heart was dancing)he noticed that I was not around ??
Anjie : hold on gal wats going on ..will u pls tell me wats cooking between both of u'
Riddhima : nothing yaar..he is just an aquantant.
Anjie: I don't think so'
Riddhima : anjie pls . Why will I lie to u
Anjie : how do I know.. but abhi you go to sleep ....see you tomorrow..

Now riddhima had a huge smile on her face'
Riddhima: He noticed that I was not around..he actually noticed dis'.wow ..he was asking about me'I might be important for him 'that's why he was asking about me'warna why would he waste his time asking about a gal'that means he was affected by my absence'so he must be missing me ..he must be wanting to see me..just like I always want 2 c him'..(extremely happy)
and wid these meaningless thoughts she went to sleep wid a stupid smile on her face'..

Next day in college'.
Riddhima was walking in the corridor with some books looking out for armaan. She wanted to talk to him and she was going to do it today'
suddenly armaan walked out from nowhere ..
Armaan : hi
Riddhima : oh hi'
Armaan: why didn't you come to college yesterday'
Riddhima : (wow anjie was correct he noticed it) actually I went to the hospital
Armaan : hospital???????????????? Is everything all right?? Are you fine??? What happened to u??? (Very tensed)
Riddhima : (oh fish !!! did I day say hospital I shouldn't have said it ) no everything is fine .Just general check up.
Riddhima : (look at the concern in his eyes'oh!!! his eyes I never noticed it, his eyes r so amazing..)
(smiling') you were asking about me yesterday, anything important ????
Armaan : no nothing great just like that ...i saw anjie so i thought of asking about you from her....she is your best frnd nah thats why.......
Riddhima : (he knows that anjie is my best frnd but how??? let it be who cares ..dont use your brains so much riddhima..)' (smiling)ok then byee..
she started leaving...
Armaan : riddhima!!
riddhima turned back...
armaan : will you have a cup of coffee with me??? (nervously)
riddhima: (hidding her exitment) sure ...lets go..

and then they went to the canteen for coffee..

Luv
Karankideewanix
aka
Alisha
P.S. I want atleast 10 replies frm different ppl... Den i will update da next part!!!!
Plus if u r a silent reader plzz dont sit der can u also comment on it...
i will really appreciate it!!!
N enjoy!!!
Edited by karankideewanix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part, but did they allow you to post the fan fiction here? Also, it was also written by Asma khan, so please ask her too before you get into trouble.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
hi....nice part....it was sweet....continue soon

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