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Posted: 15 years ago
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raj raj garewal.......... life uske liye bahut achi bhi thi aur bahut strict bhi.......... achi uski mom ki vajah se kyunki uski mom ne use wo saara pyaar diya jis pyar ki har bache ko tamanna hoti hai.........raj ne jabse is duniya mein kadam rakha tabse uske liya uska best gift uski mom thi...... jo uspe duniya ka saara pyaar nyochaavar kar deti thi........ par kehte hai na jab khushi hoti hai to dukh bhi life main aa jata hai........ jaha hassi thi waha narazgi bhi...................
jiss narazgi ko aage badaya uske dad yaani mihir garewal ne.............mihir garewal hamesha raj se choti choti baaton pai naaraz rehte the.......... jisse raj bhi apne dad se duur rehta raha............
ab raj 5th class mai tha......... raj was always good in all his subjects lekin science uske bas ki baat nahi thi......... aur armaan woh to jaise har subject main brilliant tha............
bas yahi phir mihir garewal ne apne bete ko support karne ke bajaye use nicha dikhaya aur armaan ko sir par bithaya..........
kai had thak raj ne saha bhi par jab bat bat par use nicha dikhana badhta gaya tab se armaan aur raj main dooriyan bhi badti gayi...... shayad iski wajah mihir garewal hi the .... shayad raj khud ya shayad armaan........ raj khud bhi nahi jaanta..............
ab raj badha ho gaya hai usne apni M.B.A. complete kar li hai aur armaan ne bhi M.B.B.S complete karkar doctor banna jaari kar liya hai.............
aur yaha bhi mihir garewal khush nahi hai wajah raj ka garewal industries join karna aur armaan ka doctor banna .......... mihir garewal chahte the ki raj apne balbute pe kuchh banne par unse raj ka garewal industries join karna saha nahi gaya.......... aur bas raj ko ek aur tana mara gaya .............
bas raj tabhi in sab baato ki vajah se shayad itna arrogant hai ........ par kehte hai na jaha nafrat hoti hai waha pyaar bhi hota hai.......... raj chahe kitna hi arrogant ho ... par woh utna hi loving bhi hai......... jaha use apni arrogance nature mihir garewal se mili hai ......... waha use apni loving nature apni best mom jo woh kehta hai unse mili hai...............



sharma house -
sharma ji paper padh rahe hai.. shilpa sabke liye khana bana rahi hai kyunki iske baad use sidhe hospital jana hai.. balki kripa aur aarohi soyi hui hai......... yahi ek ladki dheere se kripa ke room main jaati hai.......aur uske kaan main zor se chikhti hai........ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
while kripa jhatke se uthti hai........ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kripa screams.................
ha ha ha ha 😆........... woooooo ladki zor zor se hasne lagti hai............ha ha ha.............
while kripa says.......... haan haan haslo.............aisa bhi koi uthata hai bhala............hun,,,,,,,,,
ladki-- chal chal ab jaldi se uthja........... aur tujhe ab kaam par bhi jana hai...... late ho jaayegi ..............
kripa -- ohh thnk u di............... & she kisses her di.......... & runs to bathroom to get ready..............
ab wo ladki apni dusri behan ke kamre main pahuncti hai..........arohi abb tak soo rahi hai........ woh ladki dheere se uske kamre main jaati hai......... aur kehti hai aarohiiiiiii tera dream man......... yeh dekh aa gaya..........
aarohi jhatke se uthti hai......... hai aur kehti hain............ kaha di kaha hai woh...............
aur aarohi apni aakhe rub karti hai..........kya di............
ha ha ha while her di is laughing........ chal ja jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa............now arohi too rushes to da bathroom........ thnkng her di...........
while her di....... goes to her papa......aur woh unke pao chooti hai........
sanna - good morning my sweet papa..........
sharma ji - good morning my sweet sweet bachaa............. her papa rubss her cheek...... & gives her aashirwad......
sanna - hawwwwwwww papa zainaaaaaa...............
she runs towards zaina room............. while zaina stood there towards her bed.......... havng an angry face......... & her arms folded................. while she runs towards zaina room...........
zaina - choti mom aap itni late............ jao main aap se baat nahi karti.............
sanna--- sorry bacha........ mujhe maaf kardo.............. sorry ........... says sanna holding her ears....... & making a cute baby face..........
while now zaina gigles.............
zaina - okk maine aapko maaf kiya & she hugs her maasi & kisses her cheeks while sanna did da same...........
now this is sanna......... jiske bina is ghar main har kissi ki life adhuri hai...................chahe wo uske apne ho.... ya phir wo begane jo hospital main uske aane ka wait karte hai...........


sanna aur shilpa jaise hi hospital pahuncte hai tabhi sanna ka dupata bahut hi cutely ek choti si bachi khichti hai...........
while shilpa was called for an emergency............ sanna pichte mudti hai woh uss cute si bachi ke baal sehlate hue kehti hai...........
ohhh shona kya hua...... aap yaha kya kar rahi hai.........
shona- didi mujhe pleash apne sath lejao woh moti si aunti mujhe kadvi davai khila rahi hai........
shona woh nurse hai bacha..... chalo aap mere haath se to khaoge na phir main aapko chocolate doongi pakka........
oooooooo didi apke haath see wooahh aap kaha thi maine apko kitna miss kiya..........
maine bhi aapko kitna miss kiya......... chalo aapke ward main chalte hai...... aapko dawai bhi khani hai na.....
nahi nahi didi hum nahi jaayenge woh naakullll hai na woh nakalchi bandar woh kehta hai ki didi pehle usse dawai khilayegi ........ nakalchi bandar kahi ka............
nahi didi pehle aapko hi dawai khilai gi okk shona......... chalo ab didi ko jaldi se paari do............
shona cutely kisses her sanna didi.......... while sanna also kisses shona on her cheeks & they both hug very cutely then picking up tht cute little 6 years girl sanna took her to da children ward...........
sanna ko waha dekh kar sabhi bacche khusi se jhum padte hai.................
yeh hai sanna ,........... though sanna accident cases handle karti hai par usse bachoo se bado se aur buddho se bhi utna hi pyaar hai........ tabhi wo sabko bahut achi lagti hai sab usse dekhar khush ho uthte hai....................
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hope u all enjoy
waiting 4 ur comments as well as criticism
love
sanna & nandini
Edited by REDnBLACK - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
grt part dear
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pinky901

grt part dear thanks pinky..😃

pls cont soon we will try..😃

love
Nandini and Sanna..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey reallly nnice...
cont soon
love habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess52

hey reallly nnice...thanks habs..😃

cont soon we will try..😊thanks for reading habs..😊
love habs

love
sanna n nandini😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part. U described Raj's arrogance nicely.....I mean the reason. Well agar reason nahi bhi hota to bhi mujhe koi fark nahi padta...kyunki arrogance mujhe achhi lagti hai.....wo bhi Raj ki. Oh how awesum he looks wid that anger. (Ahh...phirse line marna chalu...hehe). And loving nature.........*sigh*.....uska nature loving ho ya na ho hum to usse luv karne se khud ko nahi rok sakte. 😍

Ok now, Sanna.....she is a sweet girl whom every1 luvs. Lets c when she meets the person who'll luv her the most n whom she will luv as well...hehe. Pls continue soon girls.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. U described Raj's arrogance nicely.....I mean the reason. Well agar reason nahi bhi hota to bhi mujhe koi fark nahi padta...kyunki arrogance mujhe achhi lagti hai.....wo bhi Raj ki. Oh how awesum he looks wid that anger. (Ahh...phirse line marna chalu...hehe).haan dekho to sahi mera koi lihaaz hi nahi hai..😆😆 And loving nature.........*sigh*.....uska nature loving ho ya na ho hum to usse luv karne se khud ko nahi rok sakte. 😍band karoo mere cutu raj pe line marna😡😆😆 par tum kitni hi koshish karlo raj tumhari line catch nahi karne wala..😛😆😆

Ok now, Sanna.....she is a sweet girl whom every1 luvs. Lets c when she meets the person who'll luv her the most n whom she will luv as well...hehe. Pls continue soon girls.



thanks for reading and commenting..😃(teri comment pe comment sanna karegi okk..😃)

love sanna n nandini..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. thnxU described Raj's arrogance nicely...hmm thnx credit to nandini di.....I mean the reason. Well agar reason nahi bhi hota to bhi mujhe koi fark nahi padta...kyunki arrogance mujhe achhi lagti hai..mujhe bi i love raj arrogance...wo bhi Raj ki. Oh how awesum he looks wid that anger. (Ahh...phirse line marna chalu...hehe).ha ha ha raj tumpe kitni lines bajti hai yaar And loving nature.........*sigh*.....uska nature loving ho ya na ho hum to usse luv karne se khud ko nahi rok sakte. 😍absolutely correct ..i agree

Ok now, Sanna.....she is a sweet girl whom every1 luvs. Lets c when she meets the person who'll luv her the most n whom she will luv as well...hehe. Pls continue soon girls....... thnx will cont asap....... aur ya dont worry......raj will meet me soon ........ ahem ahem i mean sanna soon

thnx 4 commenting dear
will cont asap
love
sanna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice part dears............mihir is too much in raj's issues...............sanaa waking up every1 was very cute..............n the kids scene also was very beautiful.....cont soon dears............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Nandini n Sana(Sorry for not mentioning your name in the last update..It just slipped from my mind).
How r u both??
Update was gud....
Mihir has behaved very badly with Raj...Is he his step-son??I mean no 1 can b so cruel to their own...
Raj is arrogant bcoz of him n I think that Sana will definetely make a gud pair with him..She is friendly n he is not...U know opposite attracts..😉😉😉
Every1 loves her but I can't say d same for Raj..
Do update soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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