Tumse mera AASHNA(on rajeev)(epi 6 pg16) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
Finished part 3,
Raj aur us k dad i mean Mr. Mihir, kabhi sudhar nahi sakte hain na jaane kyoun apne bete ko neecha dikha k kya sabit kar lenge ya kaun se mahart hasil kar lenge. Kahin na kahin mujhe lagta hai ki ye Mihir, apne aap se frustrate hai kisi baat ko le kar jis ki vajah se vo apna gussa Raj par nikalta hai. Agar kamiyan Raj me hain to kahin na kahin us k liye Mihir hi zimedaar hai ki vo ek acche baap nahi ban paaye.
Sach me agar Tulsi na hoti to Raj to aklel pad jaata sach me. I hate Mihir's teasings at dinning table, sach me aisa baap na hi ho to behtar hai. Sahi jawaab diya na Raj ne ki kewal coat n doctor ban kar koi kabiliyat nahi aa jaati insaan k anadr. APne maa aur bhai ki vajah se vo kahin jaa bhi nahi sakta varna na jaane kab ka chod k chala jaata vo is ghar ko. Tab samajh me aata shayad Mihir ko.
I like the way u shown the bonding b/w Raj n his mom and after that his bro. Sab ek saath ab dinner par jaayenge.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Liked part 4,
Song to accha lagna hi hai Raj ko ye waala kyounki vo khud jo tha is song me.
But sach me he is gem of heart, us k jaise bete pe kisi ko bhi garv hona chahiye but i hate Mr. Mihir for this.
Raj ne bina reason jaane kitne acche se help kar di us employee ki n i am impressed with him again.
Arjun ki Arohi se pehle se hi setting acchi ho gayi hai, i mean maine nahi socha tha ki already sab settle ho gaya hai. Raj ne kitne acchi baat kahi na Arjun ko.
Raj apne mom ki bhi baaton ko bahut acche se samajh leta hai na un ko kuch kehne ki jaroorat hi nahi padti hai aur vo sab samajh jaata hai. Humesha jaise hi vo apne ko fir se adjust kar leta hai na.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Good part 5,

Mera Raj bechara to fuss gaya in Sana aur Nandini k beech me. Ab Mihir kahega ki Sana ko chodo aur Nandini ko pakdo aur Raj Sana ko pakadna chahega. Is sab se accha hai tum log ek new character introduce kar lo story me Vertika naam ka aur kyounki Arjun darling already booked hain to mujhe Raj k saath bus Vertika ko dekhna hai.

Ok, apart from this, part was was really nice. Sab se khushi se Raj ko birthday wish kiya, i hope Mihir jee ko chod k. Vaise jab Mihir Mehra's k ghar jaa rahe the tabhi mujhe laga tha ki jaroor un ki koi beti hogi jo vo Raj se pair up karna chahenge. Vahi hua bhi na, par Raj k liye to Sana hai na, fir Nandini k liye Karan bhi aa hi jaayega kahin se.

Sana ko Raj ne bcahya aur same day ko dono fir se mile Raj ki birthday party me. Ab kuch start hua hai to jaldi hi aage bhi jaayega. Tulsi jee ko bada khayal hai na Raj ka, tabhi us ki pasand ki cheejin banayi hain na us k birthday par. Tabhi to Arjun complain kar raha hai na. Us ko to saamne Arohi ko dekh k maza hi aa gaya hoga.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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