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Posted: 16 years ago
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shilpa ka internship ka last year tha aur ab wo doctor hai.. internship ke dauran wo sameer se mili.. sameer ek bahot hi aiyaash ladka hai aur usne shilpa ki tarah hi najane kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi barbaad ki hai..

shilpa(to herself) - aaj sameer mujhe dokha deke chala gaya magar mujhe ek bahot badi baat sikha gaya ki zindagi main koi apna nahi hota aur hame kabhi kisi pe bharosa nahi karna chahiye..

shilpa sharma ji ki sabse badi beti hai.. sharma ji ki dusri beti hai sanna.. wo abhi 10th class main hai.. shilpa ke behad karib hai sanna.. sharma ji ki 4 betiyaan hai.. shilpa, sanna , kripa aur arohi.. sharma ji ki patni unki sabse choti beti arohi ko janam dete hi chal basi..

shilpa bahot toot chuki hai.. par wo haaregi nahi zindagi se.. woo ghar gayi aur sharma ji ko sabkuch bata diya.. shilpa ki tino behane bhi wahi thi par kripa aur arohi kuch bhi samajhne ke liye kafi choti thi so sanna ne unhe unke kamre main bhej diya.. sharma ji se bardasht nahi hua.. unhe bahot garv tha apni betiyon pe par aaj shilpa ne unki izzat ko mitti me mila diya.. unse bardasht nahi hua aur unhone shilpa ko ghar se jane ko keh diya.. uss waqt sanna ne sharma ji ko samjhaya ,shilpa ka saath diya aur use himmat di duniya ka samna karne ki.. shilpa ki nazro main sanna ka darja bhagwan se kam nahi hai akhir usne shilpa ko hosla diya jine ka.. sanna ne hamesha sabko pyaar kiya.. studies ki wajah se shilpa aur sanna dono ko jyada waqt nahi milta tha apni behano aur papa ka khayal rakhne ka par doo adjust karke bari bari se sabka khayal rakhti.. (ji haan lead shilpa nahi sanna hai.. we paired her opposite raj..😊)

kuch saal baad -

abb shilpa ki beti 5 saal ki ho gayi hai aur uska naam hai zaina.

sanna ki internship puri ho gayi hai aur sanjeevani main as a doctor uska pehla saal hai.. sanjeevani ke head Dr. shashank use apni beti ki tarah mante hai aur unhe uss par bahot garv hai.. sanna ko sabhi se khub pyaar milta hai par internship ke dino se hi sanna ki kabhi Dr. asthana se nahi bani.. unki policies kabhi sanna ke bheje mein ghusti hi nahi.. lolz..

waise sanna ki agar sabse jyada kisi se patti hai to wo hai uski ladli zaina.. dono jab bhi ek saath hoti hai khub masti karti hai.. sara ghar sar pe utha leti hai.. sanna aur zaina dono hi sunday ko shilpa ko khoob nachati hai.. subah breakfast se lekar raat ko dinner aur uske baad icecream sabb dono ki marzi ka hota hai..zaina ke liye sanna uski choti maa hai..😊 kripa ne LLB kiya hai aur abhi se hi sabb kehne lage hai ki wo bahot jald ek achi lawyer sabit hogi.. philhal kripa assist kar rahi hai Mr. angad grewal ko..arohi college jane lagi hai, abhi 18 yrs ki hai par padhai main uska mann nahi lagta.. well use "laad pyaar main bigdi" keh sakte hai..



aiye dekhte hai raj ki zindagi main kya hua aur kya ho raha hai..


raj ki family waise to sirf uski mom aur bhai arjun hi hai..

raj ke father Mr. mihir grewal hai aur unke bade bhai hai daddaji (alok grewal).. mihir grewal ki patni hai tulsi grewal aur inke do bacche hai raj grewal aur arjun grewal.. raj ne MBA kiya.. arjun grewal raj ko assist karta hai.. alok grewal ki patni hai rukmani grewal.. alok grewal thode stiff hai.. waise unhe parampara wadi kaha ja sakta hai.. par unki patni rukmani ji bahot sidhi aur suljhi hui hai.. ghar main sabhi ka khayal rakhti hai aur sabko bahot pyaar karti hai.. unhe mamta ki murat kaha ja sakta hai.. inke bhi doo bacche hai angad grewal aur armaan grewal.. angad ne llb kiya hai aur bahot hi acha lawyer hai(kripa inhe hi assist karti hai..).. armaan doctor hai sanjeevani main(shilpa ka batchmate aur sanna ka senior)..

bachapan se hi raj ko business main bahot interest tha isiliye MBA karne ke baad he joined grewal industries.. waise bhi insaan ko wahi karna chahiye jo wo chahta hoo par yeh baat Mr. mihir grewal nahi samajhte.. bachpan se lekar aaj tak unhone raj ko sirf tane hi mare aur haan baat baat pe haath bhi uthaya hai aur wajah thi armaan ka padhai main raj se acha hona aur baad main family business jopin karne ke bajaye doctor banna.. raj ne kabhi kisi se shikayat nahi ki.. use pata hai ki use zindagi main kya karna hai aur abb use kisi se koi farq nahi padhta par haan armaan aur raj ke bich hamesha tension rehti hai.. alok grewal(daddaji) ko bahot caha laga jab raj ne grewal industries join ki.. unhone raj ko grewal industries ka MD bana diya.. daddaji ko raj pe bahot garv hai.. raj bhi unki aur rukmani ji(badi maa) ki bahot izzat karta hai.. raj kabhi kabhi daddaji main pita ko dekhta hai magar unke rules aur purane vichar raj ko jamte nahi hai.. raj ka ladla hai arjun.. raj kabhi use kisi ki sunne(taunts) nahi deta hamesha uska bachav karta hai.. raj ka manna hai jo kuch usne saha wo uske bhai ko nahi sehne dega..😊 angad aur raj ki khub banti hai chahe jo bhi hoo dono hamesha saath rehte hai bachpan se..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HELOO GUYS.........
here are da pics of da characters
zaina's pic -

pic of shilpa -


pic of kripa -


pic of arohi -


pic of sharma ji -



pic of raj - (☺️)


pic of arjun -


pic of angad -


pic of armaan -


pic of tulsi -


pic of mihir -
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Posted: 16 years ago
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update was awesome
so character dekhkar lagta hai charon behene ek hi ghar mein ayengi
part was awesome
update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
sanna n nandini how ru guyzz...
till now everything was perfect lovd the chracter skecth
i mlooking forwards to it..
plzz continue soon
n thnkz for the pm
love habs
Edited by princess52 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Hi Nandini
How r u????
First chapter was really interesting...
Shilpa ke sath kitna bura hua but Sana n uska sath diya..Her daughter is very cute..
So Sana is opposite Raj....
Raj is looking very handsome in dis pic..😊😊
Raj ki family kaafi badi hai...Naam yaad rakhna hi ek problem hai😆😆😆
Yeh Arjun yahan bhi chala aaya..Kya yaar main jitna isse door rehti hoon tum apni fictions ke through isko aur paas le aati ho😆😆😆
Armaan n Angad bhi hain..Interesting!!!!!
Do continue soon
Bye
Bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rituka7

update was awesome thanks rituka(BTW ur name is ritu or rituka??)..
so character dekhkar lagta hai charon behene ek hi ghar mein ayengi lolz...
part was awesome thanks..
update soon sure.. thanks for reading n commenting😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess52

sanna n nandini how ru guyzz... well am fine..😆
till now everything was perfect lovd the chracter skecth thanks sweetie.. BTW wats ur name??😃
i mlooking forwards to it..
plzz continue soon sure.. thanks for reading..😃
n thnkz for the pm noo thanks dear😃
love habs

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Hi Nandini and Sana

Very nice ud..Zaina is sooo sweeeet.. d bond b/w Zaina nd Sana is very nice..its gud that Shilpa's family accepted her... U hav included all my fav couples in ur ff..interesting
pix r also very gud
ud soon
love
sur
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Nandini and Sana.... hi sur

Very nice ud..Zaina is sooo sweeeet..ya awww shes so cute.. d bond b/w Zaina nd Sana is very nice.ya they look so cute together haina.its gud that Shilpa's family accepted her... U hav included all my fav couples in ur ff..interesting
pix r also very gud thnx
ud soon
love
sur



hey sur will cont asap😛

love
sanna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess52

sanna n nandini how ru guyzz.. hi habs m gud how r u??.
till now everything was perfect lovd the chracter skecth
i m looking forwards to it..
plzz continue soon
n thnkz for the pm
love habs



hey habs will cont asap

love
sanna

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