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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian
super cool one shot...

Thankyou so much! 😃

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha
wow.....the robot thingy was superb
lovely one shot
thanx a lot 4 d pm

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debadrita

Thanks alot! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!

. Loved it. Very Well penned.👏👏👏

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ridzi830
hey
nice shot ...loved it.....pm me if u write more

Thankyou, I will 😃

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!
. Loved it. Very Well penned.👏👏👏

Thanks alot! 😃

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
that was really really nice neetz...
beautifully penned...

the description of her state...her friend advicing...and its nice to see a new name for the friend...it gets boring to read the same rahul or muskaan...

and then armaan coming back and the emotions clouding riddhima..that part was penned well...actually, i would have loved to read their making up part and also would love to know whether he came back forever or not...but still..

it was short..it was sweet...it was awesome...

thanks for the pm...

awaiting many such terrific one shots frm u :D

Thanks Sunaina! 😃 Yeah, I was going to type 'Atul Joshi' but then I pressed 'Backspace' 😆 too much of them already! 😆

Actually I like to write vague stories where 60 % is left to the reader's imagination...but thanks for the suggestion, I'll be more precise next time :))

Thanks again Sunaina! 😃

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: arluver15
hey neeta
thnxs a ton for the PM

loved it very much

do write more one shots

nruti

Thanks Nruti! 😃

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smriti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Hey Neeta!

Gr8 to see another one shot from you! Thanks a ton for the pm; I am extremely sorry for the delay in commenting, its been pretty hectic off late and I didn't wish read this one in a hurry and comment.

Back to the one shot after my blabbering which can go on forever.

This one reminded me of Embraced moments and Almost in Love. The former for Ridhima's state and the latter for its ending on a hopeful note. I like the fact that your fics end on such a note rather than the happily ever after fairy tail endings. Hope I feel is the driving force behind a majority of human actions and a story that leaves the reader scope for imagining his/her own conclusion is always a welcome change for me!

Ridhima's reaction to Armaan leaving her was bang on! Even though every individual reacts differently to a given situation, I found that I could again very easily associate her behavior with my own. The tendency to shut out the pain, submerge oneself mechanically in work and know subconsciously that one is still hurting deep down is all too familiar :)

The ostrich truly loves to bury its head in the sand and maybe sometimes in work! : D

It takes but a moment for us to let go of the barriers that we erect around for fear of appearing weak and emotionally foolish to the people around us and I absolutely loved her reaction on seeing Armaan. It was an accurate mix of being instinctively on guard and at the same time a futile attempt to not let herself hope and be happy; the battle quite a lost cause for the heart tends to win in the matters of heart! :)

It wasn't the most unique of ideas in terms of the situation but your portrayal of the same gives it your own special touch!

Good one Neeta!

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Smriti