Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Hi, Sookie! Its been an eternity that you made an update! Happy Diwali, by the way.

I quite had to recollect everything and read a new chapter of the story, since it had nearly faded off my memory. Am sorry, but I'll tell you what - I love the way you're penning the story ahead. When I first read the story last year, the story was well put across, characters seemed well sketched though the language to me was complex, complex enough to not being able to understand half of it.

But now that I understand it so much better, I feel this is one MN FF I can read over and over again. The story is sinisterly close to the initial MN story that I still cherish, which is one reason why its awesome reading your story. I can easily visualize the characters, sense their feeling and everything cause I get the intensity in your words. Beautiful work done!

And this was very fine a piece of writing, friend. You made an amazing update, and am so glad you have not forgotten this flick. The verses you've added have got so much depth, hea - amazing amazing!

Please keep me updated.

-Kankshita

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srihari_phoenix

@srihari_phoenix

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

heyyy sookie...

wonderful part as always..

impressively penned the thoughts and emotions that a single parent and his/her child undergo..u really gave a lot of thought to it..

loved the way nupur and mayank's mom had interacted..

the smalltown_girl 's verse describing the relation developed b/w nupur and mayank's mom is awesome..

the library_guy and smalltown_girl's comments are intriguing..

aptly named the part.. it is truly rejoicing.. may i know why u like "R" the most that u named every part of this ff after this letter..?? lol :D

plz update the nxt part and also ur remaining ff's soon...
thank u...

\m/
sri

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

@Fatima: Glad you liked the verses :-) Thanks for the comment!

@myownarea: Surprised much? Muhaaahaahaa...I was surprised that I picked this one as the first FF I wanted to update. Its kinda easy for me to write this one. Don't know why! Thanks for the comment!

@Kanky: Waaah! Thank you very much for the long comment. Honestly, I am surprised when you say that the language is complex. Because I have avoided conversations and its entirely written in third person. Glad that now you don't feel so. :-) Yes, the story is close to initial MN and it will stay that way. I totally stopped watching MJHT after Samrat goes to jail which from POV was absolute bullshit.

@achoose: Thank you very much for the comment!

@Sri: After writing a chapter, I search dictionary thoroughly for a word starting with letter "R". I picked out that letter randomly and now I want to see how far I can go. It wasn't a conscious decision but something I started doing it after I posted first chapter. If you have observed, there are no actual conversations taking place in this series. (Writing which is very, very hard) Its fun to be creative with a definitive set of restrictions. Thanks you very much for the comment!

Happy Diwali Everyone!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

@Sookie: I was a young girl of 12 when I first read the FF last year, so erm - I couldnt quite understand the language. Now I do cause am more into reading and writing myself in comparison to the last year. And Samrat in jail?! Twas really longggggg back, I wonder why do I still watch the show!! Anyway, you're welcome! :)

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Hey Sookie 🤗

Gosh, I was so surprised when I saw your PM! Pleasantly though! 😆

And the update was just brilliant! The whole experience of the two women, and their interaction was just so wonderfully penned down!

And the verses were just beautiful. Beyond words.

I fall in love with the verses everytime I read them. Bravo!

Continue soon :)

Love

Daania

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Lo and behold, Superstar arrives back!, :D Better late than never, haan! So, I was very-very glad, when I finally received a PM from yourself regarding the update of a non-maan *I meant, 'non-Geet'* fiction, or a one-shot or how-they-saved-Earth or whatever! Anyways, the update was usual as ever, greaaat. Someone's been watching/observing MJHT quite closely, huh! btw, I liked the flow... but i kind of felt as if everything had been said in a hurried tone. Comments from both of them were just fabulous, though the verse from Nupur, is not my pick for today, it was nice though. :P

I still await an update of Revenge.... *which is on Kiz, i know.... but she doesn't even listen! and yes, I'm complaining!* =P Loved, this S. Huge smile and a big thumps-up! Thank's for the diwali gift! :)

Edited by Angel-Pebby - 14 years ago

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

and... Happy Diwali to you, btw! =)

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#228

love the connection btw mayu mom n nups

its something very special

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#229

so happy tha u updated after long time itw as awesome update dear loved mayank mom n nups plzzz try to update soon wen ugot time n thanks for the pm

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#230

@Daania: Thank you very much for the comment. Glad you liked reading this time. :-)

@Angel-Pebby: Lady - writing is writing. I really don't care a shit if its Maan or Armaan or Mayank or whomsoever. As far as I get to write what I want to write, am happy. :D I did watch MJHT once upon a time and I quit like all other shows. Yeah, Revenge is Kiz's turn this time.! :-) Thanks for the comment!

@maloo19: Thank you very much for the comment.

@samiralovemayur: Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I will update when I find some time to do so. I have always liked Mayank's mom and its terrible that they haven't shown her as much as I would have loved to see her on screen.

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