Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: -Daania-
Hey Sookie,

As usual a heartfelt and beautiful update. I completely loved it. Ahh, these two and their fights *shakes head*

I will be looking forward to the apology though. Again, Sookie, the verses were splendid. Very well written..

Beautiful work.

Do continue soon

-Daania....

Hello Daania,

Thanks for the comment! Yep, it will be apology during next update. Thanks again for your words! Update on weekend!!!

S

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Posted: 15 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
wonderful n sweet update lov
cont sooon n thnx 4 d pm

Thank you! Update next week! You are welcome for the PM.

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi
I didn't know you wrote for MayUr Sookie 😲
But I found out today 😃
Yay 🥳

I seriously LOVE this story man...you write SO well...am so glad I came across it!!

Do update ASAP 😛

-Nidz

Nidheya!

Its been long! How have you been??? And congrats on being a mod!!!

Thanks for dropping by :-) Glad you liked it. Update will be by weekend...

Thanks!
Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Nidheya!

Its been long! How have you been??? And congrats on being a mod!!!

Thanks for dropping by :-) Glad you liked it. Update will be by weekend...

Thanks!
Sookie

I've been good as always :)
How have you been?😛
Aw thanks😃

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: imshveta
Well I have never been a Mayur fan but I like the way you are writing their emotions with all of their inner turmoil laid bare for us readers
I wonder what will happen when they come to know who they had actually been relating to online
love
Shveta

Hello Shveta,

Thanks for reading this (though you are not a fan) I am following original storyline so its very much similar to series till now.

Hmm...it should be..interesting to see how they will face each other..

Thanks,
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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: charming.angel
hey sookie,

this was a wonderful update dear !!
wow i mean the way thy portray their emotions in their virtual world is .......
and the fight thy r having with is nt the other bt thy themselves...
the words used are so enticing n alluring !! 😊

do continue soon !!

take care,
fatima

Hello Fatima,

Thanks so much for the comment. Thanks for liking their blog too :)

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

I love reading what you write, I remember the character analysis u posted on the forum when u first started to write the story, very interesting intruiging and yes perfect way to describe a relationship so colourful (for want of a better word) ..complicated! Please update soon!! :)

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Marium

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Posted: 15 years ago

#178

awesum ff

just read all the parts

plz add me to pm list

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
*Reserved*

I'd edit my comment asap. :-)

*edited*

Your words create magic, Sookie. 😳 Amazingly put and exceptionally well written. I appreciate your work a lot. Your writing skill is plain FANTASTIC.

Mayank and Nupur in this very FF are just like the ones in the show and therefore, your story immediately connects with the reader. I like how the story's shaping up.

Update soon!

-Kanky

Hello Kanky

Thanks so much for your comment :-) Means a lot!
I don't think its going to be that way in future, at least not for very long! :-)

Thanks!
Sookie