Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur) - Page 19

Originally posted by: Alini.

Awesome one........

Loved it........

Continue soon.........

And thnks for the pm...........

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy sookie
amazing update yaar
both are such people who won't think before speaking
but later they will realize n feel guilty....
As always loved the words....
Do continue soon
n thanx for pm

Originally posted by: cool_shwets

Hey i just went through all d 5 chps of this ff n i loved it to the core...i'm glad i came across this ff.....i loved ur unique style of writing...pls do pm me the next time u update😳

Originally posted by: myownarea

I love reading what you write, I remember the character analysis u posted on the forum when u first started to write the story, very interesting intruiging and yes perfect way to describe a relationship so colourful (for want of a better word) ..complicated! Please update soon!! :)

Originally posted by: maloo19

awesum ff

just read all the parts

plz add me to pm list

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Originally posted by: Prasanthi

reserved

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Hey S!

A very nicely written part. MN here are adorable. You upholded their levels here more than the show. They unknowingly influence and control each other. Their next meet is going to be interesting. I have a feel that she would get a slightest inclination that Mayank is the Library guy. I am all eager to see how you are going to shape up situations.

Originally posted by: ammygurl

It's turning into a pattern because of destiny!
The destiny brings them closer and then apart!
Well..Sooks.. Here is a very short comment coming from my side.. but this part was okay.. not up to your standards according to me.. I mean, it was okay! I wanted more of the MAYUR essence.. still.. It's your fiction! No qualms with your writing.. just that. I don't know.. need some more chemistry..
The verrses were good..
as usual.. My fav. one being-


Clean her wings of red blood and make them snow white again. Balm them soon and patch them up. When she tries to fly, strap your body to her and carry her as fast as your legs can take.

Update soon! Waiting..
Take care
Ananya

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

<font color="#660000">Thanks for the comment Ananya.

Well, I am not sure what my "standards" are but to each his own. 😆 And I honestly don't know what Mayur essence is. Either that or I see them completely differently than you do (which I think is the case here.😆)

Chemistry between the two is the last thing I will write at this point. So you might want to come back after 3-4 chapters if you are expecting to see chemistry between the protagonists. 😊

Thanks!
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