~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur...

Awesome update... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Sur's papa is right... she should come back now... It has been long now and it is pathetic to see her staying in London away from her family... The way Nandini said to her father... I was laughing... I know it wasn't nice but I couldn't help it. Sur had no reply and when raj came he was surprised to see her earlier good mood in the trash... Well... he definitely has missed the most important part of the conversation and nandini's insolent look was very nice. Sur shouted at Raj but when he apologized she couldn't bear the thought of distance between them. I loved her dialogue in the car.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

The conversation between Sur and Nandini was definitely enlightening but Sur is hell bent on going away. She is shocked that how could a person take her words so seriously that he has almost stopped smiling and enjoying his life.🀒🀒🀒

I was waiting for this conversation between Raj and Sur. Sur is trying to make Raj move ahead in life but what about her? She is sticking at one place. Sur's flashback were gruesome... to be frank I'm scared. And you stopped even before Raj could complete his sentence... WHY??? 😑😑😑 Nandini came at the right time... "Apni baat puri karo Raj" πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Hope Raj does that in the next update...

Continue asap...

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Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii sur...
Wonderful part πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
sur ki papa chahthe hain ki ab sur India main hi rahe n he is asking her to think about marriage... main sochrahi thi when sur n her papa r talking ye nandu itni chup kyun hain,why she is not saying any thing..but usne sahi time pe sahi baat ki..sur to shocked hogayi aur papajee wants to know wo aadmi hain kaun
raj is so sweet ,when he noticed that sur ki mood tikh nahin hain kitna sweetly poocha...papa aur bhabhi ne milke daanta kya..the scene in the car is awesome
sur n nandus convo is nice... nandu tried a lot to convince sur...but sur is hell bent on going back
want to know what actually happened to sur in the past...plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
pata hai tere is ud ko padhne k baad mere dimag me koun sa dail pahle aaya...vohi 'sholey' k imaam chacha wala dail...'yeh itna sannatta kyoun hai bhai...' πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
sannatta...isiliye bola...kyoun ki raj...sur...aur nandu...teeno ek hi rashte par ja rahe the...par tum ne sahi waqt par lyt off kar di...matlab ud rok diya...ab yeh 'sannatta' nahi toh aur kya hai...???πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ok...ok...ab galiyaan kamm karti hun...aur line par aati hun...nice one...πŸ‘
toh tum ne meri req puri karr hi di...ab sur kl dad dhire dhire thik ho rahe hain...πŸ˜ƒ
nandini sahi ja rahi thi...!!! par sur ne bigad diya...aur bichara raj...bina kuch kiye hi...muft ki daant padd gayi use...!!! par khair koi baat nahi...car me dono ne MAANDVALI kar liπŸ˜›...jis k liye nandu ko vicks k goli ki jarurat padd gayiπŸ˜›...!!! par mujhe Sur aur Raj k car ka yeh convo...kafi sweet laga...dono hi ek dushre k dil ki baat samajh rahe the...par ek dushre ko is baat ka ehsaas nahi dila rahe the...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
nandini ne sur ko kitna samjhaya...par...mujhe laga ki voh sayad sahi hai...matlab tum ne thoda sa hint diya hai na...isiliye kah rahi hun...!!! sahi hai matlab...raj ko avoid karna sahi nahi hai...us ki uljhan sahi hai...par apna Raj hai na...us k dil aur dimag me kuch spices daalne k liye...jis ki wajah se us k dil me khoya hua aur soya hua pyar jaag jaye...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
aur phir sur aayi raj k paas...baat karne k liye...!!! dono kitne achhe se baat karr rahe the...aur kahani sahi raah par chal rahi thi ki nandu aa gayi...matlab...voh toh support karne hi aayi hai na...toh mujhe us se koi prob nahi hai...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
mujhe toh lady gabbar singh se prob hai...matlab tum se...tumne bich me ud rokk diya...jiss tarah se gabbar singh ne holi k bich entry maari thi...vaise hi tum ne ud ko bich me rokk diya...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ab tumhe jaldi cont karna hai...ise bhi IHYFLM ko bhi...nahi toh mujh me VEERU ki aatma ghushne me jyada tym nahi lagega...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyy
awesome update..................akhir nandini ne sur ke samne raj ke bare bol dia...................plz raj sur ko confess kardo.....................plz boldena...............yeh na ho ke sur ko chup karwa de.......................plz plz con't sooooon dear........................eagerly waitng.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
pls next part post karo jaldi se
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Posted: 15 years ago
okay...ud is ready!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey

please update soon...

okay
ud is ready guys
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls next part post karo jaldi se

haan yaar, bas comments pe reply kar du, fir pakka ud
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

heyyyyy

awesome update..................akhir nandini ne sur ke samne raj ke bare bol dia...................plz raj sur ko confess kardo.....................plz boldena...............yeh na ho ke sur ko chup karwa de.......................plz plz con't sooooon dear........................eagerly waitng.......................

Hey samrah
yeah finally...actually, i m thinking i have stratched this too far....so lets come to the point now.
thanxalot for commenting dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

pata hai tere is ud ko padhne k baad mere dimag me koun sa dail pahle aaya...vohi 'sholey' k imaam chacha wala dail...'yeh itna sannatta kyoun hai bhai...' πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

hai? sannatta? hehehe
sannatta...isiliye bola...kyoun ki raj...sur...aur nandu...teeno ek hi rashte par ja rahe the...par tum ne sahi waqt par lyt off kar di...matlab ud rok diya...ab yeh 'sannatta' nahi toh aur kya hai...???πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† yup, mene light, pankhe sab off kar diye...par is baar mai aisa kuch nahi karungi...poori baat hone ke bad hi sannatta hoga..u see last time mere hath type karte karte thak gaye the.
ok...ok...ab galiyaan kamm karti hun...aur line par aati hun...nice one...πŸ‘ thankuuuuu!
toh tum ne meri req puri karr hi di...ab sur kl dad dhire dhire thik ho rahe hain...πŸ˜ƒ dekha mai kitniiiiii dildaar hu!
nandini sahi ja rahi thi...!!! par sur ne bigad diya...aur bichara raj...bina kuch kiye hi...muft ki daant padd gayi use...!!! par khair koi baat nahi...car me dono ne MAANDVALI kar liπŸ˜›...jis k liye nandu ko vicks k goli ki jarurat padd gayiπŸ˜›...!!! par mujhe Sur aur Raj k car ka yeh convo...kafi sweet laga...dono hi ek dushre k dil ki baat samajh rahe the...par ek dushre ko is baat ka ehsaas nahi dila rahe the...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ hehe i like that word, mandavli...ab Raj ko daant khane ki adat dal leni chahiye...
nandini ne sur ko kitna samjhaya...par...mujhe laga ki voh sayad sahi hai...matlab tum ne thoda sa hint diya hai na...isiliye kah rahi hun...!!! sahi hai matlab...raj ko avoid karna sahi nahi hai...us ki uljhan sahi hai...par apna Raj hai na...us k dil aur dimag me kuch spices daalne k liye...jis ki wajah se us k dil me khoya hua aur soya hua pyar jaag jaye...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 well, apni apni jagah sare characters sahi hai....magar ussey problem complicate hogi na...aur sahi baat hai ,Raj is here!!!
aur phir sur aayi raj k paas...baat karne k liye...!!! dono kitne achhe se baat karr rahe the...aur kahani sahi raah par chal rahi thi ki nandu aa gayi...matlab...voh toh support karne hi aayi hai na...toh mujhe us se koi prob nahi hai...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ ab nandu se kisko problem hogi yaar?
mujhe toh lady gabbar singh se prob hai...matlab tum se...tumne bich me ud rokk diya...jiss tarah se gabbar singh ne holi k bich entry maari thi...vaise hi tum ne ud ko bich me rokk diya...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† waa*crying* mai lady gabbar singh nai hu....waa...mere gande gande baal aur dadhi nahi hai....lolz
ab tumhe jaldi cont karna hai...ise bhi IHYFLM ko bhi...nahi toh mujh me VEERU ki aatma ghushne me jyada tym nahi lagega...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ah...achcha hua yaad dilaya...mai break lene ka soch rahi thi
im shaking now...priya mujhe na, aise mat daraya karo...warna mai behosh ho jaungi...aur ud kaun likhega? ha?
thanku for the takadta bhadakta sholay style comment! :)

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