~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 26

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiii sur... hey yogitha!

Wonderful part 👏 👏 👏 👏

sur ki papa chahthe hain ki ab sur India main hi rahe n he is asking her to think about marriage... main sochrahi thi when sur n her papa r talking ye nandu itni chup kyun hain,why she is not saying any thing..but usne sahi time pe sahi baat ki..sur to shocked hogayi aur papajee wants to know wo aadmi hain kaun yeah, nandu was actually a bit angry with Sur for being so dumb.

raj is so sweet ,when he noticed that sur ki mood tikh nahin hain kitna sweetly poocha...papa aur bhabhi ne milke daanta kya..the scene in the car is awesome haan, aur uski guess sahi nikli na!

sur n nandus convo is nice... nandu tried a lot to convince sur...but sur is hell bent on going back strong headed u see

want to know what actually happened to sur in the past...plz continue soon yup, sure

thanks a lot for the great comment!

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sur...hello Guglu

Awesome update... 👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanku!!!!

Sur's papa is right... she should come back now... It has been long now and it is pathetic to see her staying in London away from her family... The way Nandini said to her father... I was laughing... I know it wasn't nice but I couldn't help it. Sur had no reply and when raj came he was surprised to see her earlier good mood in the trash... Well... he definitely has missed the most important part of the conversation and nandini's insolent look was very nice. Sur shouted at Raj but when he apologized she couldn't bear the thought of distance between them. I loved her dialogue in the car.👏👏👏 hehe, im glad u laughed...even i end up lauhing at very serious emotional scenes. yeah, nandini did irritate her a lil but im sure that wont bother u guys.

The conversation between Sur and Nandini was definitely enlightening but Sur is hell bent on going away. She is shocked that how could a person take her words so seriously that he has almost stopped smiling and enjoying his life.🤢🤢🤢 its tough to convince her of that.

I was waiting for this conversation between Raj and Sur. Sur is trying to make Raj move ahead in life but what about her? She is sticking at one place. Sur's flashback were gruesome... to be frank I'm scared. And you stopped even before Raj could complete his sentence... WHY??? 😡😡😡 Nandini came at the right time... "Apni baat puri karo Raj" 👏👏👏 Hope Raj does that in the next update... actually i stopped so that u guys would read the next update. u know except raj's dailogues theres nothing readable in this fic!
thanku so much for the lovely comment guglu!
Continue asap...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: golu_1677

superb part.pls jaldi cont karna ......

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hi hallo!!!

how could you stop at such a point.😒 Agar sur ke past ke bare mein iss update mein nahi batana tha....toh atleast raj ko toh apni baat puri karne deni thi. arre to fir ud late ho jata na!

Well the update was great. 👏Nandini and Sur are both happy to see their father recovering. Sur ke dad ne sahi kaha...she should come back now and start a new life. Sur refuses but when nandini hints towards Raj....sur becomes nervous. 😳 yeah...she wudnt prefer 2 talk about him at all

Raj finds it strange that sur is upset and so he tries to lighten the situation...but inturn has to face Sur's anger. But than when she tells him that he has the right to interfere in her life...sujal is pleasantly surprised and so in Nandini. Giving nandini a chance to say that she was right about Raj😉 by his every act towards Sur he is giving nandini a chance!

It was very funny to hear of Raj's resoning that Nandini and Sur would be having some girl talk....poor guy has no clue that they are discussing about him.😆 yeah...he would have fainted then.

Nandini tries to convince Sur that Raj really loves her and that she should give their relationship a chance. But Sur is afraid that after knowing the truth Raj and his family with refude her. The flashes of her past are very scary indeed...seems that something really bad did happen...and it was not just a failed marriage. Sur is addament that she will go away from Raj's life.😕 yeah...it was much worse

The conversation between Sur and Raj was very good. And the way in which he was standing was itsself enough to melt a girls heart...and after seeing in his eyes how could Sur stop herself. 😳 who could stop themselves in front of Raj?

Raj points out that running away from a place does not solve the problem...her family has always been with her and have infact answered more questions than her. 😔 well, thats true.

And now that you have stopped at such a point...please conitnue soon... cannot wait to hear Raj's confession. With Nandini playing the cupid😳....these two will come together. yeah sure...that will happen very soon- maybe in next 2 updates!

Please update soon will try my best

thanks alot for commenting!

Originally posted by: vvdn

wonderful part....akhir Sur ke saath hua kya hai?😕 Raj really luves her soo much.hope ke sur apne atit ke baare mein Raj ko bata de..waiting for next part

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

I want a serious improvement!!! Tumhe apni ye adaat badalni hogi yaar!!! Raj batane hi wala tha ki tumne rok diya....Sur bhi batane hi wali thi ki tumne rok diya....and Nandini bhi aa gayi par tumne UD rok diya.....sab kuch rok ke kyun rakha hai???🤢🤢 speed breaker my dear..sadak pe hota hai na, waise hi!!! lolz

Anyways....I loved that hospital scene when Nandini was indicating abt Raj n Sur was feeling awkward in front of her father!! And then Raj came bak....and bechare ko free me daant padh gayi....but then his sweet sweet line....made her say another sweet sweet line which made Nandini clear her throat....😆😆😆.....how cute was that!! hehe thoda mitha ho jaye wala scene ho gaya...im glad u liked it!

And more than that....I was thinking abt Raj's expression when Sur dragged Nandini to the room....he was thinking it was sum girl talk....how cute he must hav looked na...😳😳 Raj to hamesha hi cute lagta hai...hhaaaiii

And then Sur n Nandini's convo...it was nice n touchy...but zyada touch nahi kiya....pata hai kyun?? Kyunki madam aap ne to kuch kaha hi nahi....ki Sur k saath kya hua tha...😆😆 arre sumi darling, sabr ka fal meetha hota hai na! dekho, bas yahi tak story slow thi, after that it will be so fast that u wont even realise k kab khatam ho gai.

And then her sweet convo wid Raj....😃😃.....main na Raj ka weardrobe k saath khare rehne wali scene imagine kar rahi thi....haii...he looked dam awesum!!! And the dialogues here were brilliant!! And specially when u said....turning away from his gaze is a sin....how true!!! yeah...Raj aise kitnaaaaaaaaa cute lagta hai na!!!

Pata nahi Sur...maine iss reply me kuch zyada hi taarif ki Raj ki....coz I was missing this Raj for soooooooooooooo long na....😳😳 i was kinda expecting that...actually im surprised u managed 2 remember Sur nd nandu!

Now dont make us w8 more....and aisi jagah pe chhorne k baad to bilkul nahi....pls try n UD soon dear....😛 okkkkk....thanks for the very cute comment!!! :)

Luv,
Sumi.😛

Originally posted by: spvd

nice part...................so everyone wants sur to come back and stay with them...............glad that nandu told sur that raj loves her very much and what happened to sur????????????? her past????????????? and u have stopped at the nice point dear..................cont soon and u forgot to pm me dear..................

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome update.loved it.

everyone wants that sur come from there and stay here forever. but what happen to sur in her past.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

thts bad...y u stopped here????
upst was gr8....luved it..:) :)

thanks alot for liking the post guys!