~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 11

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome update

too good

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: pinky901

nice prt dear

pls cont soon

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Superb part dear.Raj is fallen in love with sur

oh no, sur is married ,it's big suprise and shocking.

Pls post the next part and pls pm after u'll update the next part.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sur hi suhana

Thanx for d pm dear... arre pm k liye bhi koi thanx kehta hai?

Update was really nice..thanx

Raj is fallen head over heals in love with Sur...but he so much afraid of loosing her..😛😛

Sur is married!!!!!!! 😲 How is it possible?meri fic me kuch bhi ho sakta hai!

This twist is the turning point in dis story...How will Raj react to dis..

Update soon i wil try, thnx a bunch fr commenting!

Bye

Originally posted by: spvd

very nice cute part.................raj is having the best of times............and for sure knows is in love with sur.........................hes really a happy go guy.............and whats this sur ki shaadi ho gayi...............kisse????????????raj will be very broken hope sur tells him about her past and raj makes her realise raj's love is true...............cont soon dear..............

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Mmmm mmm mmmmmm… mmm mmmm

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar
Is shehar mein na apna tikana raha
Durr chahat se mein apni chalta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha

Gar woh pehle se hai zyaada, khud se phir yeh kiya wada
Khamosh nazrein rahe bezuban
Hmmmm…mmm…mmmm….
Apno phele si baatein hai, bolo tho lab thar tharatein hai
Raaz yeh dil ka, na ho bayaan
Ho gaya ke aasar koi hum pe nayi
Humsafar mein tho hai humsafar hai nayi
Durr jatha raha, paas aatha raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Hmmm…mmm…mmmmm…
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(movie new york)
He could feel the cruel irony of fate...He had started thinking of her as his wife, he would dream of those moments, her cooking in the kitchen, taking care of him and much more. All that was happening but in a different situation. But he was glad that he came to know of this truth before he had proposd her....other wise he would have lost a lot...maybe more than he could afford to. His feet carried him to the hotel he had booked for them for lunch. He cancelled the reservations and flower orders. He planned to return the ring to the jewellery showroom but he stopped at the threshold.
Did he want to forget her and do what they called as "move on with life"?
He turned about and walked back to the house, determined and sure of himself. the moments spent with her were too precious to be forgotten as an unsuccessful relationship. He would treasure her every memory as long as he would live because he knew that pushing her out of his life that was practically suicide for him. He couldnt bear to live without knowing that she wasnt somewhere out there, happy and existed in his life. He would not try to forget her and live his life with somebody else. Love had no second chances in his dictionary.
He then came to more logical...where was her husband? Maybe they had a fight or something and were living separately..She had said she was married, not divorced. But then he shook himself mentally and asked himself why he was looking for chances for fitting himself into her life. She had made it very clear that she was not interested in starting a new relationship. Her husband may be away from her but he was still her husband...Her othet half, who had every right over her while he was just like a side hero....
He forced his thoughts to shut up as his head was throbbing with pain. He stopped at a chemist and picked up a local painkiller, popping it into his mouth. He saw that he had almost reached the house again and had not bought anything to show her. On the opposite side of the street there was a small florist. He delibrated whether he should do it or not.
"Yes, friends do exchange flowers, whats so unsual?"
and he bought a bouquet of fowers consisting of yellow roses and bluebells. On a second thought, he asked the florist to add a red rose in the centre. satisfied, he went to the house and rang the bell. sur immediately opened it and gave a surprised smile as he presented her with the flowers.
"Thanks...Ye kis khushi me?"
Raj:"Bas aise hi...goodbye gift"
Sur:"Hmmm....they are lovely..tumhe pata hai, i love roses!"
Raj smiled again as she beckoned him inside and shut the door. "Vese tum bilkul sahi time par pahuche, mai tumhe phone karne hi wali thi..."
Raj:"Oh chalo acha hua paise bach gaye tumhare"
Sur:"shut up! chalo khana kha lo...tumhe jo chahiye tha wo mil gaya?"
Raj looked at her and said slowly:"Nahi...jo chahiye tha wo to nahi mila par kuch khoya to nahi"
Sur blinked in surprise and said "Kya keh rahe ho?"
Raj:"Forget it...lets see tumne kya banaya hai...rajma chawal!"
Raj exclaimed in delight like a small child. For a second he forgot all his heartache. sur laughed and said
"Tumhe pasand hai? Mera favourite hai rajma chawal..."
Raj:"Thats fantastic...Sur tumhe dimag padhna bhi ata hai?"
Sur:"No...seems like humari choice kafi milti hai...chalo ab thanda ho jayega, eat it quickly. Tumhe airport bhi to jana hai na."
Raj:"Hmm...come..u r lucky k tumhe itna acha khana banana ata hai...agar mujhe ata hota to sare din apni favourite cheeze bana bana k khata rehta"
Sur:"Gud for u...par khane ka maza tab ata hai jab sath me koi ho...varna most of the time mai akele bore ho jati hu to bahar se manga k kha leti hu..lekin ab tum sath me ho to acha lag raha hai"
Raj looked up at her and smiled at the compliment. Earlier he would have mentally broken into a victory dance but now it was hurting him. He tried to remain as normal as he could with her because he didnt want to lose the last few moments with her due to his bad mood. They might never get another chance at this.
At this Sur noticed that his smile was different. She looked at him conecerned
"Raj sab thik to hai na? tum kuch...i mean tum thik ho na?"
Raj thought gr8 dude pakda gaya, and tried to sound convincing as he said,"Mujhe kya hona hai? mai bilkul thik hu". Sur was not entirely convinced but didnt press it further.
They had lunch laughing together and sat talking to each other on a host of other topics even after they had finished. Her presence healed his wounds and he would do anything to sit and keep talking to her like that without any complications and questions. suddenly she glanced at the watch and exclaimed, "God! jaldi karo u r so very late"
Raj looked at it and jumped out of his seat to get his bag. After 10 minutes, they were in her car speeding towards the airport. The journey wasnt very long and soon Raj was at the airport loading his luggage onto a trolley as Sur watched him.
Sur:"All done? Kuch reh to nahi gaya na?"
Raj looked at her as his eyes filled with emotion. What a question! he thought. But he shook his head and she leaned against the handlebar on whose other side he was standing.
Sur:"Well...I will miss you so much...pata hai itne se dino me mujhe tumhari adat pad gai hai"
Raj:"I will miss you too Sur...jab meri yaad aye a jana...I will wait for you."
Sur:"Mai koshish karungi...pahuch k ek phone kar dena plz"
Raj:"ok...tum apna khyal rakhna"
Raj looked at the time which indicated he should leave. Sur got the gesture extended her hand. He shook it. Then she leaned closer and hugged him briefly and when she drew back she had tears in her eyes. Raj was too numb to react but when he saw the tears in her eyes, he didnt like it.
He wiped them off and said, "Sur...tum ro rahi ho..."
Sur wiped her eyes and muttered,"See what an idiot I am"
They both laughed and she said"Ab isse pehle ke mai ki aur scene create karu, jao!"
Raj smiled and turned around, wheeling his trolly into the customs. At the end of the hall he turned to look at her and waved to her. she waved back and Raj went away.
As he completed the formalities, Raj's pretenses dropped away, one by one. His fake smile was the first one to vanish as he went for the usual checking and by the time he was in the plane, his head was throbbing with pain again. He dimly wondered why he had not taken more painkillers. All through the flight he didnt eat or sleep.

Sur entered her house and shut the door behind her, gazing at the empty walls and rooms. She had been living alone sice a very lnog time but now it seemed very lonely. She threw herself on the sofa and held her face in her hands. She felt really sad after he was gone. She remembered telling him "meri shadi ho chuki hai" and cursed herself for hurting him. She knew very well what he had started feeling for her. And she wanted to stop that at any cost.
Flashback
On the day before Raj was suppossed to go to back, he entered her room at night and saw her sleeping very peacefully. He knelt beside her bed and smiled as raised one hand to touch her face but withdrew it. He adjusted her quilt and said in a very low voice, almost inaudible,"I love you so much...Good night and sleep well kyuki aj raat mujhe to neend nahi ane wali..."
He got up and left. Sur opened her eyes which were shining with tears. She didnt sleep as well, knowing very well that what he wanted was impossible. She had not lied about being married, but there was something else as well which she had not said. Which made the whole difference. Tears again clouded her vision and she flung herself on the couch crying. Then she got up, picked up her sleeping pills, thrust them into her mouth and washed them over with a glass of water and went to a drugged sleep.

nice part.............................sur ko pata tha raj uss se pyaar karta hai tu per kyun hurt kia...........................konsi differences hai......................plz plz con't soon