~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Part 2 was also nice. 👏 👏 👏

thanku!

Raj to flirty number one hai na n i got it right that the gal was Sur n she didn't tell him her name, but Raj ko bhi naam nikalwaana acche se aata hai na to Truth or Dare me hi nikalwa liya na janaab ne. Vishaal kitna impatient ho raha tha na engagement k liye isiliye us ne acche taunt maare the pandit jee ko. Nandini hi kya koi bhi vahan hota to us ko vahan. Raj ko naam pata chal hi gaya but all thanx to Nandini.

Par Sur k saath aisa kya ho gaya hai ki vo itne udaas rehti hai.............

Raj ne accha kaha tha. hehe Raj to hai hi aisa...Jaha tak Vishal ki baat rahi, usey wait karna bikul pasand nahi hai..Raj jo soch leta hai, vo karke rehta hai, aur dhoondhne se to bhagwan bhi mil jate hai, ye naam kya cheez hai!

glad 2 hav u here dear!

thanx fr commenting!

Originally posted by: tina_1234

plz updt asap....waiting eagerly..!!

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls cont soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

superb pls cont soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Main kya batau ki mujhe kitna rona aa raha hai!!! My cutu Raj!!!!😭😭😭 The way u described his pain, my heart was aching....all the while I was just feeling I wish this wud end soon.....but alas....that was not supposed to be. awww..Sumi dont cry yaar...abhi 1-2 ud me sab thik kar dungi..even I cant see my sweeto crying...

Waise why he called himself 'side hero'.....sirf iss kahani ka nahi....wo to har kahani me sirf hero banne k kabil hai....pata nahi hai kya usse?? And he was cyanide??? How cand he think of it??? Mera kya hoga??? In fact hum sab ka kya hoga??? arre mere rehte kuch nahi hoga..aur Raj to hamesha hero hi rahega...ok??

And Sur had heard him??? And she intentionally hurt him....to keep him away from her....wanting to knw wat has happened to her....par chahe kuch bhi ho....mera Raj kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dukhi tha n usse dekh kar main bhi kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dukhi hu.😭😭😭aur likhte time mai bhi kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dukhi hui thi..sur k baare me bhi jaldi reveal kar dungi...

Pls Sur darling....jaldi se continue kar do.....waise part long to tha....lekin mujhe phirse 'happy days' wapas chahiye....isiliye pls try to continue soon.😃thanku jee kisine to kaha k part long tha...mai abhi ud kar rahi hu...and tum bhi zara jaldi ud karo apni fic..waha mere Ayaan ka kya haal bana k chod dia... thanx for commenting!

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hi Sur,
I just read this fic....I got to know about it coz galti se tumne mujhe PM bhej diya tha...But I love this fic...Its very nice....Pls update soon...!!!

Originally posted by: sania_58

nice update

too good

very emotional

loved the update

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Superb part dear.U showed the emotions of raj very well.Continue soon dear.Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

pata hai main sach me ro rahi hun😭 😭 😭...kyuuuu? baht ro rahi hun😭 😭 😭...was it dat bad??? par tum se gussa nahi hun...awww mujhe bass Raj aur Sur ka dard aisa laga jaise mujhe khud voh feel ho raha hai...😭 😭 😭!!! main baht royi😭 😭 😭...kahin na kahin aisa laga ki zindagi me jab kuch khaash kho jata hai...tab zindagi k mayne bhi kitne badal jate hain...!!! 😭 😭 😭

well, zindagi k mayne hi nahi zindagi ka maksad, jeene ki wajah sabkuch badal jata hai..aur pata bhi nahi chalta

mujhe ehsaas hua Raj k dard ka...!!! jab sari khushiyan aap k behad kareeb ho...aur achanak se sab kuch cheen jaye...toh baht dard hota hai...!!! ek pal me hi zindagi badal jati hai...!!!😭 😭😭 m glad i cud convey myself well dear...

dono hi ek dushre k liye dukhi hai...!!! sur ki past lyf me jarur aisa kuch hua hoga...jis ki wajah se voh aise hai...!!! par mujhe is part me Raj k liye rona aaya...!!! sayad aisi hi hoti hai zindagi...'ek pal me sab kuch hai...aur dushre hi pal me kuch bhi nahi'...!!!😭 😭 😭bas life aisi hi hai...jaise hi lagta hai k humare paas sabkuch hai, ek pal me sab badal jata hai

pata hai yeh writer k hath me hota hai ki voh apne readers ko hassaye ya phir rulaye...!!! aur tum ne mujhe sach me rula diya...par main tum se naraz nahi hun...balke samne hoti toh main tumhe jarur hug karti...for dis beautiful ud...!!!🤗 🤗 🤗thanku so much for dis lovely comment. pata hai mai bahut hi unemotional aur stone hearted type ki insaan hu..par aj tumhare comment padh k rona a raha hai

yeh ek jhatka toh tha ki sur raj k feelings k bare me janti hai...par yeh mushkil tha...ki sur khud raj ko pasand karti hai...par apne past lyf se bahar nahi aa pa rahi hai...!!! voh raj ko miss kar rahi hai...phir bhi apne feelings se bhaag rahi hai...!!!😕its very hard 2 hurt a friend...aur wo bhi khud apni hi wajah se...

raj ka pain...us k emotions...us k feelings...apne ander sab kuch dabane ki puri koshish ki thi us ne...!!! par tumhari writing style ne mujhe us k sare dard mehsus ho gaye...aur main rone lagi...!!! vaise main baht kam roti hun...par kabhi kabhi rona achha bhi hota hai...!!!😭im really happy k tum un sab cheezo ko feel kar pai jo mai batana chahti thi...thanks a bunch..ab mai bhi chane ki jhad pe chadh gai hu

par Raj toh India chala gaya na...aur Sur toh vohin rah gayi...!!! phir dono kaise milenge...???😕 milenge milenge!

mere fav scene tha last airport ka scene...!!! aur jab raj ne apne tears chupaye...aur sur se voh vaada bhi le liya...!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏hmmm..thanku!

yeh jo bhi batain maine likhi hai na...voh ehsaas mere dil me tab aaya jab maine yeh Ud padha...!!! yeh ud baht touchy tha...aur sach me mere dil ko choo gaya...!!!hey ab itna emotional mat ho..tum hasti hui zyada achi lagti ho im sure

gr88888888888 job Sur...!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thankuuu priya

cont soon...plzzzz jaldi ud karna😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃sure dear

thanks for d lovely comment

Originally posted by: vvdn

Beutifuly writen part.....excellent work Sur👏👏👏
Sur knew that Raj luvs her😲but wat was her past that stoping her...Raj's emotions r beutifuly shown.waiting for next part