~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiiii sur.....

just finished reading all the parts.........Its an awesome n lovely fic yaar

All the characters r so nice........n i loved the name of the fic

Raj n sur r really a nice n cutepair......but ye kya twist hain yaar...sur ki shadi hogayee....

plz update fast

Originally posted by: vvdn

very good update !
Raj n Sur look nice together....par ye kya Sur ki shadi ho chuki hai😲ye kya chakaar hai!plzzzzzzzz continue soon.
Raj ka reaction kya hoga😕

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

i can't believe it sur is married..............................plz con't soon

Originally posted by: manatated

hey sur!

I read fic for the first time and it's lovely!!

can u pm me wen u update it?

continue soon...

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho😡...keyboard se type kara tha and cross button se window band ki thi voh bhi Raj k rahte Sur ne kisi aur se shaadi kar li😡...hey! puri baat to padh lo main sach me tumhari peetai karnewali thi😡...tabhi to mai bed k niche se baith k type kar rahi hu par phir socha ki agar maine tumhari peetai kar di aur tum hospital pahunch gayi toh UDS koun likhega...hehe aur aage Sur aur Raj ko koun milwayega😃...!!!point..isliye abtak mai zinda hu...got it! isiliye maine apna yeh dangerous idea ko drop kar diya aur tumhe bakhsh diya...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

phew ab jaan me jaan ayi

okkkk...ab no more nautanki...sidhe is baar k UD par aate hain...Ud was really too gud...n g88888888...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏sach me? i think tum mujhe marne wali thi lol

kam se kam Sur k bare me kuch toh pata chala...😊!!! pata hai har baar yahi hota hai ki hero heroine ko jab bhi apne feelings k bare me pata chalta hai voh avoid karte rahte hain...!!! par thank God tum ne aisa kuch nahi kiya...n raj ne accept kar liya ki voh Sur k liye kya feel karta hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃arre mai kya karu i cant write long things...pata nahi ye abtak kaise chal rahi hai

aur back karne ne se pahle yeh baat sur ko kahna chahta hai...lekin tabhi dono SUR ne (matlab is fic ki writer aur heroine) mil kar... hamare pyare raj pat atom bomb phenk diya...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭!!!i thought shuru shuru me galiya de di to gussa thanda ho gaya hoga....but i was wrong.. aur tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh scene k baad Ud stop karne ki...😡!!! mar gai main tumhare naam se SUPARI de dungi...agar tum ne jaldi se cont nahi kiya toh...😡kar rahi hu mata!

mera fav scene tha...jab Raj ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya...Sur ko us party k liye dekh kar...😛!!! pahli baar Sur ko bhi aise party boring nahi lagi...kaise lagta... sath me apna hero jo hai...😉!!!hehe xactly..raj mere sath ho to mai kahi bhi jane ko taiyar hu, sumi k boring museum bhi!!!

aur ek scene.... har raat raj ka Sur k room me jana aur use neend me dekhna...Haiiii...kinna sona scene hota hoga na voh...😉 😛 😉 😛 😉haaiiiiii 😛!!! par sach me yaar dono sath me baht achhe lagte hain...un ka ek dushre se baat karna...ek dushre ko tease karna...aur ek dushre ka khayal rakhna...sab kuch ...sab kuch...mujhe achha lagta hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃me 2 me 2!!!

ab tum jaldi se cont kar do...varna main Naina ya phir Devraj ko tumhari supari de dungi...aur Karan ko pata bhi nahi chalega...samjhibas bas mai darr gai!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...isiliye do UD FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAST.........!!!😃vah! mere hi fic k chars ko meri supari! priya darling u r gr8 par mai darr gai, cuz i alone know k wo dono kitne khatarnak log hai..lol