FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 90

wow kainath Awsome updt ................... thanx for pm dear

hey kainath,

you ve spoiled us with your frequent updates.. without your update din khali khali lagta hai.

so when can we expect the next part? 😍

please i also cum online from phone to check the update..
do u think tonight u will be able to update??
i cant sleep peacefully these days as i need to knw what is going to happen with mayur now...

Originally posted by: little_dragon

Gosh kainath...... i hav no words to express wat am i feeling...

athi uttam if i hav to express in hindi.... total block buster...

ouchie was excellent little neev's eyes are too sharp n naughty...and those rhyming words were really kiddish.. Silly billy .... and shilpa aunty toh chance pei dance !!! wonderful... And watz this wit uncle ajay dear me he is Mr double meaning. Gosh tat too he talkin this in front of neev! U cracked me down wit his double stuff. Too cute. For instance it was like falku ka bhoot chad gaya. Please pen down more such double stuff.

and regarding nupzi-samy scene.. it hurts me to see ner cry a lot... crying alone wit her my tear glands hav got drained out....

and watz this happening to Mr. Sharma??? he over nupzi a lot... i hav a gut question, will nupzi become pregant after tat nights ahem ahem !!!!!

loving ur way of expressing te scene...... muaaaaaaahhh... update soon... waiting eagerly...

thanks for te pm ..........

Hi! Thanks a ton for the review! :) Neev certainly is a blabbermouth :) and Ajay was plain cheeky in this one ;)

Nupur had been really hurt by what happened - and I promise you'll find out soon enough :)

And Mayank, well after last night, he's totally outta control...lol...well, you've got to give it to the guy - he laid off her for two whole months! And Nupur preggers....lol...well, it will all be unraveled soon :)

Originally posted by: myownarea

amazing stuff Kainath!!
I sort of run out of adjectives when it comes to commenting on ur updates.
Its unbelievably real yet dramatic and..oh so beautiful...
I feel like I'm watching a well staged musical..only here the music is ur words..well written n the story very intricately woven...u seriously shud try ur hand at being a writer (if u rnt one already!!)

I loved the flashback n the awkwardness between M and N ...their ouchie moment with dear old neev...Will Nupur never ever forgive him...?OMG...inspite of her insides hurting so much..she still resists those feelings of love that never ever subsided!!!
What an ending....now u r gonna have us wailing for more...😊
keep up the gr8 work!!

Divya

Hey Divya!

Thanks a tonnn for the review :) Awww...a musical? I'm so flattered :)

Glad you liked the flashback :) Nups was really really hurt by the past events and forgiveness would be a HUGE decision to make, and she's just not ready yet, unfortunately...and your right, those feelings never did diminish..:)

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

tht was fab!!!

i startd reading ur FF juss two dayzz bck thanxx to falak for gvng me th link...

itssssssssssss so gud !!

really!!!

keep it up!!!

and add me to pm list

luv

nihu

Hey, thanks a ton Nihu for reading this! I truly appreciate it :) I've added you!

Originally posted by: aati1429

well.. oh my god neev is so so what to say.. ouchie ha ha ha..

that whole part was fun.. i could visulaise poor nupur blushing

but best was the end when nupur actually screamed at mayank...

since mrning was waiting with hope u will update today and hurray u did..

i amkind of addicted to ur FF.. I guess many of us..

u r amazing writer

Thanks a bunch! :) The ouchie bit was really an 'ouch' moment for Nups..lol...I feel bad for her :( poor girl is sooo horribly confused

You liked the screaming bit? Haha...I figured that would be her natural reaction, frustration and despair combined... :) Thanks for the compliment!

Originally posted by: falak01

ok so i m done with my reading part n now the analysis....😳😳

wowieee..it started with a flashback...the convo was nice,and it left many questions in my mind regarding mayank-nupur's break-up!!!!well we got to see a flashback,i think in next part,things will get even more clear...😳

so a new dawn has come,with so many confusions...well nupur is fighting with her own self...dats really a difficult one..

both of them r sooo confused ...and their past experiences r making it tougher,,,

but in midst of these emotional drama,u r able to create humour too....

i loved this one:

"I-I'm done, Nupur. You can look now." You can look now? What the hell is that supposed to mean Mayank? Have you lost your grip on sensibility as well now?

😆😆

well sonali is too a confused soul...😆but poor girl,....

soo neev is back with his cuteee talks..and his roseee...

the whole mole thing was lovely...he cudn't resist staring at it..😆😆

well yes sharmas r always winners,and nupur is a sharma too...my cutie neev...u said it darling....👏👏👏

awwww...and the "ouchie" thing on the dining table...😆

ahaaa..luvd uncle Ajay remarks....omg..he thinks like me..the double meanings...😆😆

so finally nupur confessed that they had it last night..gr8....so will shilpa aunty do something to make them realise their love???well a lot of questions r flooding my smalll mind...😆

and hawww...mayank is not over with the "ouchie"..😆😆

but this time nupur retained her desires...well gud for her...its not easy 4 a woman to forget evrything n move on..and she is in a state of dilemma too...well i agree wid her reaction...😃

well in all it was as usual an awesome,super duper fantastic part...i loveeddddddd it...👏

u r an awesome writer,n u proof it all the time...

all their mental state of confusion n dilemma r well mentioned n neev's comeback was rocking..coz he again did it with his charm,without his "ouchie" thing shilpa wudn't hav got to know the reality of the soiree "night"😳😳

my darling neev...love u!!!!😳😳😳

u rockkk kainath!!!!
well after such a hot update,this was really very needed...thanx dear...and thanx a lot for bearing our constant nagging and "faltoo" comments here...😆😆

love u dear...🤗

Hey falak! After reading through your posts in CG, I figured you're very similiar to Sonali ;) hahah..anyway, thanks a million for the review! :)

And yes, after the flashback, things will soon begin to unravel :) and your right! confusion is ALL over the place right now...lol...

Glad you liked that line.... ;) poor mayu, finding a double meaning in everything now ;) And the ouchie bit wa typical Neev thing...lol..

And Mayank is sooo not in control with his feelings now...lol...well, after the pretend-not-to-like-her two month period, he had to break the barriers soon ;)

And thanks a ton dear! I love reading all your comments :D

Originally posted by: debolinaroy08

aww tat flashback part....aww how i thought u were gonna be done with flashback today......but i guess more suspenses rite.....??? uff i wud love a detailed flashback anyway....

ok coming back to present as you too did 😆...aww did mayank really think alls fine when he pulled her back.....sheesh pooor nupur just can't get over the past really.....allthogh she loves him....she admits it too at tyms....has the fear of losing both neev and mayank...but uf the damn past!!

omg neev noticing the rickey part was just omg!! and uncle ajay wat is he???i just fell of my chair when he said "tats wat cause the ouche"🤣🤣🤣 and shilpa ma also shocked...they have already done it🤣🤣🤣

ok back to serious stuff! the nupur shilpa conversation was also heart breaking yaar....i know it pained her to say tat "us" is not possible...again the past.....!!

back to home mayank again getting emotinal...hmm but tis time nupur got a grip....dying to wat happens next....!!

gr8 job yaar as usual!! need i say more....it was just gripping and entertaing and heartbreaking in parts!!

ok so when do we get the flashback?? i wud really look foward to tat part!!

pls keep updating!! i guess i'm addicted now😆 😆

Hi Debo! Thank you soo much for the review! :) A more detailed flashback? hmmm...well, you'll find out what happens soon anyway ;)

Mayank pulling Nups back was my fav bit :) Glad you liked it! And your analysis of Nups is sooo right! I feel terribly sorry for the poor soul :(

LOL....the ouchie part was a ummm...tense moment indeed ;)

You'll see what happens next soon! But I'll probably only be able to update over the weekend..

Originally posted by: Senny

hey kainath oh my gosh you updated yipeeeeeeee, you updated sooo quickly man, thankyou sooo much. I hope my Super loud squeal of delight doesn't wake up my room mate. I am sooo happy.

Coming to the update, kainath you have always lived up your standard but indeed increased it everytime. I don't how to say it but i respect you and your writing skills more and more now man. Your update had so much depth, it highlighted each and every person's feelings and thpughts so well man, it was beyond magic.

So my maestro provides us with another masterpiece. I lovedddd the intense conversation between nupur and samrat early on. You are giving us the taste of the past, bit by bit i am dying to know what happened but then i am very apprehensive and i can't bear to see mayur separated man.

I lovedd the dialogues of nupz and samrat, they emanated deep pain, sense, genuine care, love and friendship. I loved how nupz broke down in samrat's arms and he started feeling gulty. The thing with nupz being that she acts as a very strong girl from inside and doesn't want to show her vulnerable side which she keeps hidden, but at times it just comes out and she can't help it. All the emotions were soo beautifully captured man.

Coming back to the present, aww i loveddddd the way you described nupz's inner battle and how she tried to free herself of mayank's hold. I could literally feel what she must be feeling, aww mayank snores hehe.

I lovedddddddd how he won't let her go. But all of a sudden reality struck and mayank lets nupz go. It must be just as hard and confusing for poor mayank as nupz. I loved how awkward she felt when he was changing.

I am soo happy neev is back, i missed him too. aww i was soo sure he would have loads of stories to tell. He is such a gem and the smaty pants also knows that nupz is a sharma and a part of their family man.

i lovedddd how they both are feeling awkward with one another, that was inevitable na. I loveddddddd how mayank kept on staring at her mole and having crazy thoughts and even nupz. I know it must be hard for them to keep their hands off eachother man.

The part where mayur visit shilpa and ajay together with neev was all so beautifully told. aww neev again hit the bullls eye with catching the ouchie or hickey hehe.

Shilpa wow thinking and asking nupz about the extra marital affair, wow she is one damn impressive lady. I am soo glad to see nupz clearly told her about mayank and herself.

Shilpa so rightly understood the complications in their relationship. I lovedddddddd how mayank and nupz came home. Oh my my i knew mayank wouldn't be able to keep his hands off nupur. I lovedddddddd the last scene, it was damn romantic, i still have weird feelings in my tummy and my hand is trembling with excitement.

please update soon, i know i am getting soo greedy. amazing work kainath.

Hi Senny! Thank you sooo much for your review :) You'll get to find out about the past soon, just lil more time :)

Glad you liked the flashback bit, and very happy all those emotions came across to you! :D Nups is indeed a very very brittle woman on the inside....she just hides behind a veneer of strength :(

You liked Mayank not letting go of Nups? Well that was my faaav bit ;) And yes, Neev is back with a bang - messing up the whooole calm, 'normal' situation...lol... ;)

And yes, I realised I did portray Shilpa as very blunt and in-your-face in this chapter...slightly OOC I know, but Nups needed a wake-up call too :)

And the last scene was...interesting, I'll have to say...haha...you'll get to see both their reactions in the next chapter...probably will only be able to update over the weekend though!