FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 91

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

omg neev is awesome!! i love him to bits! he called nupur a sharma!
loved the ouchie part, n shilpa aunty ne to mauka dekh kar chauka mar diya!!
also i liked the awkwardness b/w mayur
i feel awful for nupur she is so confused, well not really she knows wat she wants n needs but doesn't think its good for her
n mayank has lost almost all his control
they really need to tell each other how they feel
n i just loved the sanu scene it was so sad n touching
also i feel bad for sonali, poor her
anyways continue soon

Hey, thanks a ton! And yes, if not Mayu, at least Neev acknowledged the fact that Nups is of course a Sharma! haha...glad you liked the ouchie bit ;) uncomfortable situation that was ;) Haha....Mayank has indeed thrown his so-called caution to the wind, hasn't he?

Well, I'll try to continue over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: hasiii

Wow! What can I say? awesome, Fantastic, Fabulous....etc etc. I love your FF. Its not that I could love it more than I already was is love with your FF, but I still missed the details of Mayank's point of view. Please please ... I am eager to know what Mayank feels at this point. I love your ff very much :) thanks for the pm

Hey, thanks a ton for the review! I managed to post my comments after the technical difficulty...haha...you'll find out Mayu's and Nups reaction next chapter - which should be up over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

Hi! So I was really nervous about this part, and I'm glad it didn't turn out too bad. But now I'm really nervous about the next part. I really really hope they don't get into an argument and start hating each other and start back up to square one.

I'm really glad to see Neev back! The ouchie part was HILLARIOUS! I thought the Nupur and Shilpa confrontation was a little to upfront. I didn't think they would be so blunt about it.

Great update! but now I'm wondering what Nupur will say. I hope they don't fight.....lol Sorry for the randomness in this message!

Update soon! OH and thank you for updating today....that really made my day! Update soon!

Hey! Thanks a ton for the review :) Nervous? Well, you'll just have to see what happens next...lol

And Neev, the little devil was back to work again - makin things even more uncomfortable for everybody! LOL... :) And yes, nups and Shilpa's convo was very in-your-face i agree....trust me, it wasn't so bad in my head...haha... ;) But I wanted Nups to receive a wake-up call, and if she hadn't talked it out with Shilpa, she would have probably given in to Mayank once again in this chapter....lol ;)

I'll try to update over the weekend :D

Originally posted by: shahidkaarmaan

OMFG!!!!!!!!!! haha i printed it out to read it and i was reading it in the gym... lol i kept getting like all these expressions on my face and like i was laughing....i got so many weird luks!
haha this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait to see where mayur is headed!!!!

Hey! Thanks a ton! You read in the gym? lol....I can totally imagine the 'weird looks'...lol.. ;) I'll try to update over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

OMG. i am at school right now, i'll comment once i get home.

i think im not going to be able to concentrate at all now..

:P


*EDIT*

Okay, so i guess having the school net unblocked was a bad thing, and then especially in english too.. i was sitting reading my laptop screen for an unnormal ammount of time.. haha

anyways to the part..

the starting with the flashback was great... the whole decription was gr8.. i was taken back and it felt like i was just watching sammy and nupz..

the whole morning after thing was sooo
soooo
sooo
sooo adorable..
well at first.. how she tried to leave and mayank held her back... *dreamy sigh*
but i was dissapointed when he let go of her hand.... but it was kind of right.. i mean.. un-intentionally did they get in bed with each other.. the sexual-tension was talking..

i couldn't stop but *silently* giggle at the awkwardness when nupur walked out of the bathroom to see mayank changing.. *insert awkward turtle*

Neev is sooo sooo soo cute i think i've said that soo many times before.. hhaa.. but the whole lunch thing with the ouchie was soo embarassing.. and i can't belive nupz just said we had sex to Shilpa
: O

i am super super super excited for the next part coz i wanna see wat happens..

sorry for a short comment.. i have a legal SAC to finish
:(


thanks for the PM

xSonia

Hey Sonia! Thank you sooo much for the lovely review :) Glad you like the Sanu scene :D Nups really came across as a broken soul in that one :(

And the morning after scene was my fav bit too! :D lol...glad you liked it ;) And you're right - sexual tension was evident ;)

LOL...Neev will be Neev :) and yes, Shilpa was very upfront here - I should have toned it down...lol...but Nups needed a wake-up call, otherwise, she'd have gone ahead with it this time as well ;)

I'll try to update over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: nikki028

hey kaitz..........(can i call u like tht?😉......i hope u wont mind...)

once again rockin awesome fab fantabulous update...........flashback thing?god u r creatin now tons n tons of more suspenses related to tht flashback........so is ur plan to show flashback to us like this in bits by bits...leavin ur curiosity level increase each time,huh???????😲😉........oh god.....onli kaitz wht d hell had happnd b/w MN in d past ki in dono ko Present mein jo past ka pyar wapas aaya hai usiko accept karne mein yeh ek baadha bankar khadi hai!!!!!!........😭

it ws soooooooooooooo gud to our jaanuable neev back........hey bhagvan iski aankhon se kuch nahi bachta kya??????????by god.....it ws d weirdest moment for mayur........n tht too just bcoz their son had askd his doubt in public.........😆😉

by god Shilpa aunty is truly a sweetheart....i kknw she'll b d happiest aftr knwin abt last nite of Mayur....aakhir unki plan ab jaake work out hui hai......finally ....aftr tht looooooooong two months........plzzz kaitz....make aunty as cupid.....n make MN realise tht they cant live without each other n tht 'us' factor is still b/w them....plzzz.....

nw d endin part....my...my....mayu fir carried away ho gaya??????control mayu...control......ab toh pooora life bacha hai........😆😉.......bt seems his Dil maange moreeeeeeeeeee,huh?😉.........bt nupsi's reaction ws obvious.......shes really in a huge turmoil of feelings........confused to d core........bt then iski is tarah chale jaane se.......i'm feelin lik....tht Sadu mayu wilb back.....n he in his anger wil say somethin tht wil ruin evrything.......plzzzzzz kaitz plzzzzzzzzzz prove me wrong this time yaar...plzzzzzz.........

nywz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeeeeeeee sooooooooooon...........ab toh i'm addicted to ur ff......i really dnt knw wht will happen to ur obsessed ff lovers lik us when this ff ends....soo plzzzzz........continue it for a longgggggggg time...........neev ki shaadi tak....😆😉..........

Hey Nikki! Thanks a tonnn for the review :) And you can def call me that :D

Haha..you're right - I'm building the suspense with the help of flashbacks...lol :)

And yes, Neev is back - creating sticky circumstances as usual....lol....

Shilpa will have a part in re-uniting Mayur :) You'll see soon :)

And yes....lol...Mayu got too carried away, caught in a moment of passion...sigh...but both have to face thier inner demons first before anything can happen ;)

kaitz...........when r u updatin dear???????????????teri ff ki bahut hi badi gehri aadat ho gayi hai....cant control on tht....hehe...😉

Originally posted by: preethis

Kainath you are just amazing dear.. i read it yesterday itself but couldn comment,,,

the Ouchie part was wonderful... then nupur's confusion nupur and shilpa aunty's convo was interesting..

now waiting for next part.. eagarly waiting for the suspense.....

Hi! Thanks a ton! :D Glad you liked the ouchie bit ;)

I'll try to update over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: cutie_nikki

Brilliant part kainath!! ahh that ouchie 😆....... i just love Neev and Shilpa aunty lolz.

Thnx for the PM. Do continue soon. Iam so greedy i can't wait for ur update.

Hey! Thanks a ton! :) I'll try to update over the weekend ;)

Originally posted by: Bronze.

thanks for the update.. as usual awesome..

Oh the flashbacks ve started to come up.. loved how it started, just like our thoughts.. a little ramdon... it took some time to realise whats going on..

Your way of presenting flashbacks, dream is very natural and realistic.. love it 👏

Sonali entry was perfect. poor girl, hope she gets someone soon.😍

OMG neev and his ouchi.. he puts them in such situations.. Loved ajay's comment : thats what you kids are calling it these days? 😉

I felt shilpa's confrontation a little blunt.

Mayank is totally out of control, cant blame him.
Dying to know how they react. actually a little nervous. 😲

Hope we'll get to know the the past completely soon...

Plz update soon :)

Hi! Thanks a ton! :D Appreciate the flashback comment :)

Sonali...that girl is way too down right now isn't she? Well, something will come along her way too ;)

And Neev - haha...that little tyke is always messing things up...It's like the Marauder Messers from Harry potter! Well, I dunno if you're familiar with the term though :)

And yes, Shilpa was blunt here...lol...I should have mellowed it - but as I've told others - Nups needed a stir

LOL...you're right - can't blame the poor guy, he's not done anything for two months now! And now that they've done it, it'll be doubly hard to control :) you'll see both of their reactions in the next chapter :) which should be cmg up over the weekend!

Hey archi
I kno i hvnt been commenting lately, but was trying adjusting to hostel n ol na.
U kno my hostelite frnds ol of them r a fan of ur ff, they keep bugging me at every meal in our mess asking usne update kiya😆. Actually the caught me reading it one night and then i told them the story then they read the entire thing and now im never at peace during meals😆. Coming to my comment.

Yaar neev is such a smart boy, he found the ouchie 😆. Ajay uncle is dangerous he started pulling their leg not gud😉. Then neev says Mayank to share stuff😉, also when he feels that nupur will leave him like annie😭 i felt so sad for the boy he is so sweet😳. Yaar this rv is soooo disgusting, y the hell dint mayank kill him😡. May i do the honors😡. I love sonali and mayank discussions, she will surely be a wonderful teacher for neev😉😆. Nupur is nice yaar, she took care of mayank when he wasnt well. 😳Also both mayank and nupur hv a problem expressing themselves their love or hatred or anything, moreover they understand or think too much, as in way more than required or is happening.😆
Ye kya kiya mn ne😛, will nupur be pregnant now??? Also i liked it when mayank was not letting nupur go. He has lost all control over himself😆. Ok in the past when Mayank and annie slept together was mayank halucinating bout annie being nupur n ol?? (my frnds were discussing this and they came to this conclusion, thats y im asking). Also will mn hv a fight in which out of frustration both mn reveal how much they love each other?? When will you update next??
Im waiting................
Ur an amazing writter yaar, all my frnds and im waiting.

Sorry for no comments these days