FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 92

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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh my! Why did she leave? How could she leave? But why should she have stayed anyway? But oh...
I am suddenly feeling really sad...

Mayank has always loved her passionately and now, with her being so close and matters closer to how they once were between them, he cant stay away from her. But Nupur has been cheated before, whatever the premise was. She cant let herself open up again to hurt. But when she left like that, I felt such a pang of - what do you call it - helplessness? You caught me somehow..

Sorry for digressing, but this chapter had something about it that I will remember for a long time. Something I have always remembered if that makes sense.. You have such a gift Kainath that my saying you write so well seems almost an insult. You dont write, you show. You dont even show, you take us through it.. like its our life...

Nupur and Mayank live there somewhere, leading the life you tell us about. I hope you'll keep reporting for a long time to come. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: debby

Oh my! Why did she leave? How could she leave? But why should she have stayed anyway? But oh...
I am suddenly feeling really sad...

Mayank has always loved her passionately and now, with her being so close and matters closer to how they once were between them, he cant stay away from her. But Nupur has been cheated before, whatever the premise was. She cant let herself open up again to hurt. But when she left like that, I felt such a pang of - what do you call it - helplessness? You caught me somehow..

Sorry for digressing, but this chapter had something about it that I will remember for a long time. Something I have always remembered if that makes sense.. You have such a gift Kainath that my saying you write so well seems almost an insult. You dont write, you show. You dont even show, you take us through it.. like its our life...

Nupur and Mayank live there somewhere, leading the life you tell us about. I hope you'll keep reporting for a long time to come. :)



wow.. love the ways you ve written..

kainath.. I cant write so well so...copy pasted the entire thing.. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Bronze.



wow.. love the ways you ve written..

kainath.. I cant write so well so...copy pasted the entire thing.. 😉

SAme here !! i wish i couldve said the way she did .. 👏
Kainath .. Add me in ur pm list pls!!!! 😊 i ll be really grateful to u ... Brilliant FF!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey when are u updating... dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey last part was gr8...plz cont soon :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
see i told you you were spoiling us with daily updates...
my days dont seem to pass by now!
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Posted: 16 years ago
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
im eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey wen are you updating?
cant wait any longer
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
the weekend's ending soon n u havent updated:(
pleaseeee update soon kainath!!!!! everybody is eagerly waiting... you have no idea how hard it is to wait for ur FF to be updated.....:(
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Guys! I'm really really sorry, I know I told you all I'd update by the weekend but as my luck turns out, I'll be out of town in a couple of days, so was very very busy packing, getting ready and all, so couldnt manage to update.... :(

I'll try to write it tonight, but really dunno how soon I cant put it up though! Very very sorry guys!

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