FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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sheena

@sheena_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

WoW!!

Really Well written

sooo curious 2 read nxt part

Keep up the updatin speed!!

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Wonderful update Kainath!!! 😊

I really like your writing style, its quite different (in a good way) than the one's i've read in the past.

"Even if it was just towards the fruits of his loins?" ... Just hillarious! 😆

Neev's a really cute kid, and like his father intelligent as well.

And then how Mayank calculated 2 mins... thats exactly what you expect him to do in the show.😆

Great update!👏👏 Please do continue soon, can't wait to find out who was Mayank's x-wife.

Anjali

Edited by *angel94* - 16 years ago

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#73

ooohhhhhh eemmmmm geeee...

wat am i to say?? 2 amazing updates, in a day!! i promised my self i'd stay away from IF but it didn't work. hehe..

jeez this mayank is.. woah.. loved the im the damn chimney sweeper. LOL.. and i can totally imagine a hot older mayank with a son.. and he knows FRENCH!!

*faints*

so this is wat i predict.. they lived in france for a bit? either neev is nupurs kid.. but nahh not possible coz nupz would kno wouldnt she?? or from a previous relationship..

plz updte sooon..

thanks for the PM

xSonia

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

u write to perfection !!!!!!!!!
i loved it
and seriously i loooooove your long update
i wished they were even longer lol!!!
im greedy of this ff now
update soon!!

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archieeps

@archieeps

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

thank you all so much! working on the 6th chapter....got caught up in some work, so i'm not sure if i can update by today...will try to

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Hello kainath, i am sowie i am alittle late, its a sin if someone reads and not comment on your hardwork and effort.
Well honey i have to give you the prize of the most adorable ff ever man. You deserve a standing ovation and a pat on your back girl. I am soo proud of you.

This part had me tears and i laughed soo hard while reading it as well. neev is such a darling and so is our nupur man. what is this mystery i just can't figure out man. maybe neev is not mayank's son but then he is as mayank was talking or thinking about his ex-wife na.

Whatever that may be, but your ff is just superb and so fresh and unique as i said earlier. keep it up.

I lovedddddddddddddd it kainath, hugs. Thanks for the pm.

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Bronze.

@Bronze.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

oh its co chweet..

loved neev..
Thanks for updating so fast....

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tinkertoesreads

@tinkertoesreads

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Sorry I didn't comment before - but I loved it!!!

I love how Nupur is so nice to Neev, even though Mayank is acting like such a jerk. And now, I'm dying of curiosity to know what went wrong between those two, since even they admit, they were so much in love... And who is she, that dared come between Mayur? And why are they so bitter towards each other? I guess the more you love, the more you hurt...

Kainath, you're doing an absolutely fantastic job... Keep going and update soon....

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Isha

@isha93

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

awesome....... loved it to the core...........Neev and Nupur r already acting like mother and son.....but plzzzzzzzz reveal the mystery soon as to why Nupur and Mayank broke up and who did Mayank marry and have a son with.........and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me with the next part because i will be dying to read it:)