FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Brinda

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

hey wen u update this ff plzzz pm me okkkk....nice ff

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: brindamarfatia
hey wen u update this ff plzzz pm me okkkk....nice ff

sure....thanks for the review!

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

what a nice, long, wonderful update..!! I read it already and i was like....it ended...? LOL...

You write really good..!! I feel like I'm reading a great chick-lit novel..! hehe...

Trust mayank to teach his kid French and that too at so young a age..!!

I think this is really how mayank would turn out 7 years later WITHOUT nupur...LOL....he's become even more dry and rude than he used to be in college...! Like all the life is out of his life....except for neev of course....and Neev really does behave like mayank's kid....smarter than his age and well he thinks girls are stupid...!

"even if it was just towards the fruits of his loins?" This was hialrious..!!! LOL

And the way mayank calculated all the 2 mins of 6 years..!! LOL...that is so Mayank..!!

Great update..!! continue soon...!

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: hgrhr
what a nice, long, wonderful update..!! I read it already and i was like....it ended...? LOL...
You write really good..!! I feel like I'm reading a great chick-lit novel..! hehe...

Trust mayank to teach his kid French and that too at so young a age..!!

I think this is really how mayank would turn out 7 years later WITHOUT nupur...LOL....he's become even more dry and rude than he used to be in college...! Like all the life is out of his life....except for neev of course....and Neev really does behave like mayank's kid....smarter than his age and well he thinks girls are stupid...!

"even if it was just towards the fruits of his loins?" This was hialrious..!!! LOL

And the way mayank calculated all the 2 mins of 6 years..!! LOL...that is so Mayank..!!

Great update..!! continue soon...!

lol..thank u so much...i thought mayank should be even more sarcastic and cynical after the one love of his life went from his life....but neev came into his life and returned some hope....and ur right, trust mayank to teach neev french...lol.... :)

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430105

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

hey awesome update yaar...tooo good...awww neev is such a darling...........but whoz d mother?? m curious to know..do continue soon and pm me

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: utfracks
hey awesome update yaar...tooo good...awww neev is such a darling...........but whoz d mother?? m curious to know..do continue soon and pm me

read further to find out! :)

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Preethi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

wonderful i read all the parts i loved it.. please PM me when you update...

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: preethis
wonderful i read all the parts i loved it.. please PM me when you update...

hey thank you so much! btw, i dont know if you might know, but is there a fanfiction thread on this forum, where i could post this fic?

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Priyanka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

awwwwwww sooooo sweeet part yaar.........really awesome....loved the bonding between nupz and neev.....it was sooo cute......can't wait for next part.....please update soon...pm me😳

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
awwwwwww sooooo sweeet part yaar.........really awesome....loved the bonding between nupz and neev.....it was sooo cute......can't wait for next part.....please update soon...pm me😳

thank u soo much! i'd love to build on the relationship between neev and nupur