FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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archieeps

@archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
wow sajan 's son.....interesting........😉........loved the way sonali said.......oh so he broke ur heart😆..........poor nupz......all her plan was ruined by mayank.....pleasse update soon......pm me😳

thanks a lot! i'll definitely update the nxt chappie once it's improved...lol...right now it's in a crappy state

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shinella

@shinella

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

aweeeeeeeesome bloosom yaar
i mean its a fab story
the way they have the love and hate relationship
i just hope they fall in love all over again
update sooooooon

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Heyy Kainath!! Loved this part.. with each part it even gets more inetresting.. so many new twists.. i really want to find out more about the past. like i've been saying in all the comments i love the way you write. the bikcering between MayUr is very realistic and different, now u've included sammy n gunjan and their son in..woah.. plz do cont soon.
thanks for the PM

xxSonia

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Hey! To be very honest, I am in a cynical mood today. I just randomly hit upon chapter 6 a while back, in a mood to turn up my nose at anything that would fail to keep up my interest. Then I started reading and the chapter ended in minutes... This was a truly wonderful read. I will catch up with the prelude asap now that you've got me hooked. A very interesting storyline, written in a crisp and fascinating manner. Kudos to you! 😃

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Ananya

@ananya_s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

hey ur ff is simply amazing!!!!!!.......i read d whole thing today only......totally loved it!!!!!!! plz pm me wen u updt next!......plz.........

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archieeps

@archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

thank you all sooo much! you make me feel soo happy...lol :)

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: debby
Hey! To be very honest, I am in a cynical mood today. I just randomly hit upon chapter 6 a while back, in a mood to turn up my nose at anything that would fail to keep up my interest. Then I started reading and the chapter ended in minutes... This was a truly wonderful read. I will catch up with the prelude asap now that you've got me hooked. A very interesting storyline, written in a crisp and fascinating manner. Kudos to you! 😃

hey! i'm so glad I erased your cynicism....and even more delighted you want to check out the rest of the story! do read and review! it'll be greatly appreciated :)