FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 64

Originally posted by: debby

Yep, Neev deserves a treat for getting Mummy and Daddy together. Such a cute kiddo he is! Why were u scared abt the restaurant scene I wonder? Ah, was it hard getting into the skin of that confused 'invisible' examiner? LOL But since u managed Annie so well, no one can be bitchy/dumb enough. :)

Wow, I am delighted u got tired of making them curse each other.. cant wait till Mayank accepts the truth more openly as well..

I missed out on one thing in my previous comment - the part when he kisses her on seeing confused soul approach. Now that was less for display, more of an impulse, like he himself admitted. I seriously applaud Nupur's sense of self control.. sitting like that so close to him, with him kissing her and still telling herself hez doing it for the show AND not reacting much outwardly. W-O-W. lol

Originally posted by: archieeps

LOL...I know! Nups has fantastic willpower...haha....I think I would have needed an ambulance by then ;)


And I was scared, well the wrong word actually, not too confident abt the restaurant scene coz that was the one I wrote in like 30 mins - didnt want my stupid comp to crash again, so I didnt know how the scene came out...but twas all fine in the end :) I'm actually in a happy mood right now, so writing furiously right at this moment! :)

Originally posted by: debby

@bold: You bet. Me too!

Oh the scene was brilliant.. trust me. Hey, its great to know you're in a happy mood at present.. stay happy always.. :) Just wondering, are u writing the next chapter? *smiles awkwardly*

Originally posted by: archieeps

Yup, I'm writing the chapter! Haha...well I'm happy coz I received a rather unexpected but pleasant surprise today :) So my current happiness = Writing the next chapter...lol...I am sooo vela....haha

Originally posted by: Bronze.

absolutely wonderful part...

At last nupur said it.. she still loved him.
Neev is the sweetest thing ever, i couldnt control my laughter, when he was abt to talk abt the bed thing... Hmmm smart boy. so are they gona join beds soon?

Of all the pov's i find neev's most enjoyable, its commendable, you write a 4 years olds thoughts so beautifully.
Annie doesnt remember her son's name !!!!
Hmm nupur didn't get from annie's letter that mayank never got over her.

Waiting for the next one...the ending looked promising...

Originally posted by: debby

*hugs* That means I can hope for an update soon. :D
LOL if ur velapanti amounts to a chapter, I wish u get many more hours off! :P

Originally posted by: utfracks

Kainath...mindblowing update..reserved for a longer comment.

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Kainath, i had a BIG smile on my face while reading this update. As i said earlier, i absolutely ADORE Neev. I mean, how do you manage to show his character so flawlessly? it is so impressive. I mean..are you really fond of kids?

Well, I'm really happy that finally the arguements are slowly reducing...i mean..mayur are living pretty normally now..i like it that way...please continue keeping it this way..

Oh, and Annie is a real bitch! WTH does she think of herself! She doesn't even know the name of her son, and she calls him HER son? ugh! Hate her from the bottom of my heart..i definitely cannot see my darling neev with that witch...

Now, that DMP you mentioned..guess whom she reminded me of...professor Trelawney from harry potter...lol, u might end up thinking that i'm a potter obsessed fan..but trust me..the way u described her..it really matched to that of prof..Trelawney...

And that restaurant scene..wow..i loved that "mummy kiss daddy's ouchie.." hehe..so cute..and the way nupur kissed his hand..it was..uhm..HOT!

Finally mayur are getting along..wow...this is so awesome..and FULL credit goes to Neev..and a li'l acknowledgement to Annie for giving birth to Neev..nothing more than that..😆

And finally nupur accepted that she loves him..that's such good progress...

I just looooooooved this update..pls do continue soon..lol..i'm just too into this ff now...

Originally posted by: debolinaroy08

hey just read the whole of your ff !!

and found it mindblowing.....i mean its too late to comment on you earlier pieces but yeah i wud lyk to say i loved the way u depicted the emotions mayur were going through....

the last part has been too good as usual....the whole family getting on well and ofcourse the bit of humour in b/w through neev......

ok i got a little curious going through the whole series of yours...so i'm asking whether ur going to show wat happened in the past in any of your parts....i wud glad to see tat.....good going....waiting for ur next one....