FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 54

Hey kainath,

Originally posted by: archieeps

Thanks a ton! your reviews always make me feel so nice :) lol....I realised i needed to include some small moments between characters in this chapter - that's why the interaction between Sonali and Nups, Nups and Mayank of course, Mayank and CJ and Sonali :))

And the sexual tension between Mayank and Nups had to be shown as well...lol

I've got a question for you though - you say you find the chapters really vivid, and i LOVE that you do, but who do you imagine as Sonali and Neev? while proof-reading my chapters I really really try very hard to associate someone with them but just cannot seem to do so! I mean Neev is inspired from my relative but I cant even imagine him as Neev....I guess they're extremely unique characters...lol.... ;)

And whether anyone objects - you'll see soon!

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

*reserved*

EDIT!

first i gotta say, a little naughtier??
: O girl you've got to be kidding me, jeez.. both their minds are so freaking dirty.. hahaha.. but i secretly enjoyed it.. 😛... 20 question thng was cute, atleast they're kinda talking without shouting insults at each other..

Neev and Harsh are adorable, garbage disposal .. hahaha.. loved that line.

Kainath, you know im in love with this FF and ur writing. The description you've written in the previous parts regarding the scenery of the wedding ceremony and now the reception was beautifully written, question: are you an architect? by any chance.. hehe.. i loved the last scene especially in the bedroom... t-shirt off while sleeping?
GOD! i fainted a gazillion times while reading that, if i was nupur i would have pounced.. hehe it's her wedding night and im sure mayank wouldn't mind either..

more bedroom romance plz.. (not in the *cough* way yet.. )

thanks so much for the PM

xxSonia

Lol...thank you sooo much for the review, sonia! And of course they're minds are gonna be dirty - they're soooo darn attracted to each other! lol...and I really really had this mad urge to include the 20 questions bit - coz what else would the bored Mayank Sharma be doing other than testing others' intelligence...lol....but Nupur showed him ;)

And a shirtless Mayank was a must! LOL...Nups is too civilized to pounce...yet ;)

Originally posted by: dolly18

oh goddy gods i don't believe it they kissed that to in front of every body they kissed........

harsh n neev were such a sweet cake theives ..eating of other peoples plate i can imagine the sugar high they got.. n msysnk n nupur kissed......

what a brain both have playing gk with each other , n nupur is one of her kind ,( makes me remember bella of twilight )n both of them kissed ................

then there was sam ,ajay ,neev n harsh playing quietionere rounds amongest themselves ,, that was sweet tooo ultra sweet.. n nupur n mayank actually kissed.................

when r u going to update next ???? by evening ,, by night

ok don't kill me 4 this... bt pls update soon ....

n ya how can i 4get mayank n nupur actually kissed

gross in neev's terms

lots of lov

dolly

Lol...you seem quite taken with their kiss :) glad you liked it :) thanks a ton! and Nups like Bella?? hmmm...never thought about that :)

I'll try to update soon...but it'll be hard - have got lotta pending work!

Originally posted by: aati1429

hey this chapter was really fun.. I just Neev and Harsh bit too much.. they were fun.. yuck kiss and eating cake from others plates!!!

Also the Q and A session bw mayur was cool.. I cant believe mayank flirting with her..

it was a really nice part and thankfully long too..

update next part soon

Hey thanks a ton! And Neev-Harsh were adorable, yes :)

And Mayank and flirting don't seem to go together does it? But after seeing Nups his mind goes bonkers..lol ;)

I'll try to update soon!

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi!!!

this part was really really nice. it was hilarious at some points.this was awesome-

If the asshole says 'very well' one more time, I'm going to stab him in the eye with the pen.

god they were playing quiz on their wedding!!! but at least they were not fighting.

very nice and naughty part.

continue soon.

Thank you sooo much! Lol...I liked that line too... :)

I really wanted to include that quiz - some light-hearted moments were necessary in this FF :)

I'll try to update soon, but cant promise my usual fast updates this time :(

Originally posted by: hgrhr

I finally read the chapter..!! aaram se popcorn ke saath...LOL...just kidding..hehe...i was dying to read this one...when they finallt get married...and actually i was looking forward to the awkwardness between them after that because of course the wedding rituals call for some..."ahem"....LOL....wedding kiss, couple dance, honeymoon..!

well....mayank surely got it over with quite nicely..! and nupur too but the best part i like is the voices inside their head!!

The two of them are totally dazed and dazzled by each other...every little thing they do..!!

And on top of that Neev yelling out.."kissing is yucky.." didn't help the already over-concious pair..! LOL....I love Neev..!! hehe...

i loved that sweet conversation they had while waiting to enter the hall....newlyweds...my foot....they still can't keep their hands off each other..! Even if in their imaginations..!!LOL

aaaahhhh...they were plaing the GK game..? By god...i thought only mayank can play that to pass the time...but Nupur too..!! wow....!

I mean one sec Shilpa aunty's friend is describing them whispering sweet nothings to each other and the next we find out its actually all the random things in the world..!!haha...

Mayank was being unusually flirty and naughty in this one..!! haha...loved that part....! and the dance was really romantic..!

and those things that mayank was imagining in his head to get nupur out of his head were interesting..LOL...lalita sherawat..!! You really don't like her na..?🤣

But Neev's questions regarding dancing were even more interesting....haha..!

I knew it...i just knew it that the honeymoon question would be brought up..! i wondered how they'd get out of that one..! ooh...well...mayank handled it...quite "tactfully"🤣🤣

the last scene was oooh great too..!! both are so attracted to each other....they're like magnets..!! the distance isn't going to last long..!LOL

This was an awesome part and like you said...light hearted...and a bit more naughtier...I just totally loved reading it...!!

The "morning after"....the wedding...is gonna be interesting..!! aaah....the romance is just going to be great now i have a feeling..!

why do i think that in one of these days neev is gonna walk in on them...? hehe...LOL....i hope not...!his question will be the death of them them..!!

i can't wait till the next part..!!

You really are the best to update it every other day....!! Its like a big treat..!

wow...this comment got really long....! i just couldn't stop typing..! LOL😆😆

WOW! I looooved your long review :) and even more glad you liked this chapter so much :)

ahaha...Mayank and Nups are just soooo in love - the sexual tension had to be brought out some time or the other :) They certainly cant seem to keep their hands off each other, can they? lol....

And Mayank and Nups had to play that game - at least the bored Mayank Sharma has to :D

And after yesterday's MJHT episode I hate that lalita character with a vengeance....grrr.....

And after Mayank saw Nups his flirty side was bound to come out...haha :) inevitable man...

And yes, Neev-Harshad jodi are very adorable, i agree :)

I'll try to update soon, but cant promise anything!

Originally posted by: debby

Kainath! You make me want to fall in love afresh. Amazing, beautiful.. Heaven.

Mayank seriously can not keep his hands off her. Who is he kidding? The attraction is so evident. The memories of what they once had combined with this new unexpected but somehow hugely exciting setting - the perfect catalyst to fall for each other again. This time for good.

I loved Neev-Harshad playing around. Their questions abt the kiss and the dances were hilarious. Kids are damn inquisitive at times... gets tiring answering them. lol

The quiz was a superb idea. But Mayank the flirt strikes again - a position from the kama sutra? lol If she had elaborated on that, his heart would be on fire. The entire undercurrent of romance and sexual tension was wonderfully built up, right till the night.

I can imagine how Nupur must have felt when she saw Mayank semi-nude. How extremely 'thoughtful' of him to mention that he kept his pajamas on. =)) While reading I had that hard to define feeling which is enthralling yet forbidden at the same time.. exciting yet off limits..

Sometimes I wish I didnt like this FF so much.. but I do. You are brilliant dude.. you are just brilliant.

Debby, thank you sooo much for the review! And I'm doubly happy you want to fall in love again :D

That quiz had to be included - a must-have pastime for the bored Mayank...lol...his flirty side totally came out in this chapter - after seeing Nups brain malfunction! lol...

And Mayank semi-nude....sigh....who wouldnt react like Nups did...haha....I cant totally understand that feeling of yours :P

And thank you sooo much dude...I'm glad you like this FF so much :) Makes me feel very powerful *rubs hands in glee* LOL

Originally posted by: hgrhr

@debby : ooh your review made me think of M&B romance....!! and with mayur in it....ufffffff....

once they get their hands on each other...it'll be hard to get them off each other...!! 😆😆

LOL....I love Mills and Boon....very surprised but ecstatic you think this FF reminds you of that ;)

Originally posted by: archieeps

LOL....I love Mills and Boon....very surprised but ecstatic you think this FF reminds you of that ;)