FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 55

hey loved your update

Originally posted by: archieeps

Lol...thank you sooo much for the review, sonia! And of course they're minds are gonna be dirty - they're soooo darn attracted to each other! lol...and I really really had this mad urge to include the 20 questions bit - coz what else would the bored Mayank Sharma be doing other than testing others' intelligence...lol....but Nupur showed him ;)

And a shirtless Mayank was a must! LOL...Nups is too civilized to pounce...yet ;)

awesome yaar

ah.................loved it to the core..........u r a great writer...........u bring each scene live..........

loved their interaction after wedding..........the dance and ofcos the reaction wen SBU trio came to congratulate.............and as for ogling...........ah who wudnt?

I m up for more romance, since i m sure they cant keep their hands off each other................plz try an update soon..............thanx a ton...........

fab update!!!!👏

Btw guys, I think I failed miserably to convey the subtle message as none of you commented on it..lol..but this line in the beginning of Chapter 17 is a clue as to what happened in the past between MN

Sound mind? Nope… sorry, buddy. I've been certifiably out of my mind since that first sip of Baccardi at CJ's twenty-first birthday party.

:) Sorry about not making it clearer though....

Originally posted by: archieeps

Btw guys, I think I failed miserably to convey the subtle message as none of you commented on it..lol..but this line in the beginning of Chapter 17 is a clue as to what happened in the past between MN

Sound mind? Nope? sorry, buddy. I've been certifiably out of my mind since that first sip of Baccardi at CJ's twenty-first birthday party.

:) Sorry about not making it clearer though....

first sip of baccardi at cjs bday party???

Kainath, you updated!
omg, firstly, i know i deserve a real kick on my butt for not commenting on the previous two parts. But i surely read them, but i'm a little biased to this chapter, so i'd directly start off with this one. pardon me for that.😳

So now, well, i had been so friggin waiting to read this part, and you updated, so soon! Unbelievable! You are getting me used to such quick updates that if even once you delay, i might explode out of anxiousness lol!😆

But this part was just so good! Fabulous, amazing, terrific and good god knows what more! Firstly, can i say that i just ABSOLUTELY Adore Neev? Man, i kinda didn't like kids too much, but neev really changed that for me! And Harsh is a darling too.

Now the wedding...my FAVORITE PART! I loved the "lovely" comments passed by neev and Harsh about the kiss! I'm pretty sure that's exactly how any sane 5 year old would react! lol..if not, then kuch to gadbad hai! And the kiss was too good! Sooo...uhm...passionate?! Yeah, that's right, passionate!

The after-wedding bit was so cute..lol, people actually thought them to be whispering loving nothings to each other, but only if they knew! The gk quiz is soooooo Mayank to pass the time..lol...But i absolutely adored our little cake thiefs! Shoo shweeet...how can anyone get mad at these darlings..

The dance b/w MN was so uhm, romantic! But what i loved the most was their mind! I loved reading their inner thoughts..and man, i absolutely loved the flirty and naughty mayank..a position from kama utra?! Wasn't expecting that to come out of him!

Lol, both seem to have real dirty minds ha! lmao...poor mayank, sleep alone on his bed on his wedding night..AGAIN! lol...poor guy!😆

Seriously, i wonder how long they'd continue to keep themselves in control..i mean, just look at them! They're so drawn to each other! let's see their self control..

And i really must say, this FF of urs has become my favourite one! It's just so addictive! i just LOVE it! Do update soon..and oh, got the glimpse of MN past..Mayank was drunk?! I'd really love to take a tour to their past...Do update soon!

Didn't realise the comment got so long!