FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 56

aww this chapter was soooooooo cuuuuttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....loved the part where samrat tells that he nd gunj kiss all d time....lol.......nyway i loved every part,......hopefully d nxt part will b even more naughty...lol.....

luv
ananya

Hi kainath

Again i want to say the same thing yaar-it was mind-blowing, fantastic,lovely,super-duper update.
First of all my Favourait char neev- he is going 2 b sweeter day by day.
Oh God he damn cute. Like neev-harsh-ajay uncle convo about kiss very much
Mujhe lagta hain jab a ladka bora ho jayega tab kiss ka record create korega. 😃😃😃
The kiss scene was nice also.
But i miss mayanks feeling after that kiss .
Mayanks naughty comments and Nups blashing was also very cute.
And at dance sequence nupurs widow wala comment was very funny. I coul not but lough.
Both of them try to conroll thier feelings 4 each other.
Now lets see kabtak ye dono aisa kar payega.
Now i m waiting how they could detached from each other after residing the same room.
its seems to be a really interesting 1.
i know u prepare to add some extra massala which made us crazy. 😳😳

Aur lkuch ikhunga to a goru rachona(essay-the cow) ho jayega. bengali main agar kuch jaida likho to usse ahi kaehta hain. But cant controll myself, Sorry.......

Pls cant wait more.
Update soon.
A big HUG 4 u.
faria

Superb yaar

Hey kainath..did I ever tell u ur ff is fab? (ans -oh yes abt 16 times😆😆..)

everything I wanted to say has already been said by Nidhi, Debby, Rachna, senny...control girls..hume bhi bolne ka mauka do 😆😆

so if u think i m not gonna still go thru the bit again..for sure u r wrong 😆

I loved the way this marriage happened!! It was a dream wedding 😊 I loved what went thru their minds ..their conflicting emotions...wow..!!!😊 I still resent it that they are stuck at dislike,.i thot atleast now they wud've moved on a little like 'like' stage? no? B/w I loved the I love you, wife..whether he meant it or not!!!😊

I most certainly caught the hint on cj's 21st birthday..!!😊 so u havent failed at all...!!

B/w In the last comment I asked u if u've been to India -thats only cos the way u write is not Indian at all..so i sort of thought u were not born or brought up in India 😊 ...abt the wedding..oh I love these kind of weddings so its gr8!!!

😃 i think am rambling, so i stop..but pls pls dont stop giving us ur lovely n regular updates?
Wud u give one 'morrow?? 😳 ,,, If I say please? 😳

Originally posted by: myownarea

Hey kainath..did I ever tell u ur ff is fab? (ans -oh yes abt 16 times😆😆..)

everything I wanted to say has already been said by Nidhi, Debby, Rachna, senny...control girls..hume bhi bolne ka mauka do 😆😆

so if u think i m not gonna still go thru the bit again..for sure u r wrong 😆

I loved the way this marriage happened!! It was a dream wedding 😊 I loved what went thru their minds ..their conflicting emotions...wow..!!!😊 I still resent it that they are stuck at dislike,.i thot atleast now they wud've moved on a little like 'like' stage? no? B/w I loved the I love you, wife..whether he meant it or not!!!😊

I most certainly caught the hint on cj's 21st birthday..!!😊 so u havent failed at all...!!

B/w In the last comment I asked u if u've been to India -thats only cos the way u write is not Indian at all..so i sort of thought u were not born or brought up in India 😊 ...abt the wedding..oh I love these kind of weddings so its gr8!!!

😃 i think am rambling, so i stop..but pls pls dont stop giving us ur lovely n regular updates?
Wud u give one 'morrow?? 😳 ,,, If I say please? 😳

Lol...thanks a bunch for the lovely review! and ur not rambling at all :) MN still 'dislike' each other - due to their past and thanks for catching on to that hint! Glad u liked the wedding :)

And yes I havent lived in india - mostly abroad, so that's probably why u felt so....lol....my writing is definitely not conservative...haha.... ;)

Tmr ....ummm dunnno how possible that would be...but i'll try - cant promise though!

Originally posted by: utfracks

Kainath, you updated!
omg, firstly, i know i deserve a real kick on my butt for not commenting on the previous two parts. But i surely read them, but i'm a little biased to this chapter, so i'd directly start off with this one. pardon me for that.😳

So now, well, i had been so friggin waiting to read this part, and you updated, so soon! Unbelievable! You are getting me used to such quick updates that if even once you delay, i might explode out of anxiousness lol!😆

But this part was just so good! Fabulous, amazing, terrific and good god knows what more! Firstly, can i say that i just ABSOLUTELY Adore Neev? Man, i kinda didn't like kids too much, but neev really changed that for me! And Harsh is a darling too.

Now the wedding...my FAVORITE PART! I loved the "lovely" comments passed by neev and Harsh about the kiss! I'm pretty sure that's exactly how any sane 5 year old would react! lol..if not, then kuch to gadbad hai! And the kiss was too good! Sooo...uhm...passionate?! Yeah, that's right, passionate!

The after-wedding bit was so cute..lol, people actually thought them to be whispering loving nothings to each other, but only if they knew! The gk quiz is soooooo Mayank to pass the time..lol...But i absolutely adored our little cake thiefs! Shoo shweeet...how can anyone get mad at these darlings..

The dance b/w MN was so uhm, romantic! But what i loved the most was their mind! I loved reading their inner thoughts..and man, i absolutely loved the flirty and naughty mayank..a position from kama utra?! Wasn't expecting that to come out of him!

Lol, both seem to have real dirty minds ha! lmao...poor mayank, sleep alone on his bed on his wedding night..AGAIN! lol...poor guy!😆

Seriously, i wonder how long they'd continue to keep themselves in control..i mean, just look at them! They're so drawn to each other! let's see their self control..

And i really must say, this FF of urs has become my favourite one! It's just so addictive! i just LOVE it! Do update soon..and oh, got the glimpse of MN past..Mayank was drunk?! I'd really love to take a tour to their past...Do update soon!

Didn't realise the comment got so long!

Hi rachna! Thanks a ton for the looong review...loved it! :) I love it when readers mention all their fav bits :) and those two are such idiots - they love each other sooo much it's mad and still dont admit it...lol ;)
and after seeing each other looking so fab then obviously dirty thoughts arise ;)

The past will come up soon - patience beta, patience....lol
Thank u sooo much once again! I'll try to update soon but cant promise anything!

Originally posted by: archieeps

Hi rachna! Thanks a ton for the looong review...loved it! :) I love it when readers mention all their fav bits :) and those two are such idiots - they love each other sooo much it's mad and still dont admit it...lol ;)
and after seeing each other looking so fab then obviously dirty thoughts arise ;)

The past will come up soon - patience beta, patience....lol
Thank u sooo much once again! I'll try to update soon but cant promise anything!

Kainath, the long comment is my pleasure and duty..since i missed out on two parts..bad bad me! lol! But anyway, patience is one thing i don't have when it comes to ur FF! it has totally hypnotized me...and uska punishment..u have to update asap! btw, did i ever mention that ur writing is SUPERB? man, i wish i cud write like that! And i hope and pray u win the best FF of the week..

@Rachna : Thanks a ton! Actually, I never realised it was even nominated....lol....hope it wins too ;) btw when do they declare the winners?

hey...thanks for the part. it was lovely, fun to read..

First and foremost...cj's 21 birthday party, mayu was drunk ... hmm does it have something to do with annie drama?

Kids can be so embarrassing... kiss is yucky !! 😆
and the cake thing was also hilarious. they actually ate left over cakes 🤣

and mayank was soooo firty, first the kiss and kama sutra positions dance... oh god.. hmm naughty naughty. lets see how long he is able to resist nupur.

loved samrats dialogue " congatrs and all that rubbish" 😆 he is seriously pissed at mayu.

both are missing being loved by someone, felt so sorry for them. hope they realize soon. they ve already wasted 5 years of their life.

Thanks for the great update. it was such a rollercoaster ride..had almost all the emotions.
waiting for the next one...