FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 49

noooooooooooo please update today!
i am becoming restless !
i already read the previous part 5 times to compensate the wait ! LOL !

Originally posted by: parisbynight

noooooooooooo please update today!
i am becoming restless !
i already read the previous part 5 times to compensate the wait ! LOL !

hahaha me toooooo!!! actually i been doing that with all the parts LOLLL

@ Paris and xOxMwahxOx

haha....thank you sooo much for reading it so many times...lol...i hope you havent gotten bored of it yet....I'm trying to figure out how exactly to shape up the chapter and I'm in a crappy mood right now coz I just saw yesterday's MJHT episode and after seeing that ass of a lawyer do practically nothing just sit there giving blank expressions, pouting her lips and acting like a complete bimbo, I've become quite irritated....what a hell of an actress that lawyer is

so I'm finding it hard to write it...usually once I start, I can't stop...lol...but this time, sorry guys but that idiotic lawyer pissed me off

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amazing is the word.......the way they r both getting attracted cuz of being in love and well ...............sonali and his rugby player...........i swear i have this tingling feeling that she is gonna meet him soon and is gona straightly hit it off!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: shinz

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amazing is the word.......the way they r both getting attracted cuz of being in love and well ...............sonali and his rugby player...........i swear i have this tingling feeling that she is gonna meet him soon and is gona straightly hit it off!!!!!!!!!!

Hey thanks a ton! And abt Sonali and her Vicky....LOL.....you'll see soon what happens :)

Okay, Brilliant Chapters! Both 15 and 16. I love the humour, the love, the sexual tension, everything about this FF. And I would love to have a friend like Sonali. She's really a dreamer as you said. I hope she gets her Vicky soon.

And Mayank and Nupur are so silly I feel like whacking both of them on the heads! Why don't their realise their blaringly obvious love for each other?!

I cannot wait fot the wedding kiss! I hope you make it absolutely mindblowing. But knowing your skills, you probably would. And Mayank wanting to remove Nupur's dress😉 I'm sure there'll be hundreds of more cravings like that. Hehe.

wow wow wow...i'd been waiting for this chapter since you said it was going to be the wedding...and finally i read it..!!!

Originally posted by: cheenukoul

Okay, Brilliant Chapters! Both 15 and 16. I love the humour, the love, the sexual tension, everything about this FF. And I would love to have a friend like Sonali. She's really a dreamer as you said. I hope she gets her Vicky soon.

And Mayank and Nupur are so silly I feel like whacking both of them on the heads! Why don't their realise their blaringly obvious love for each other?!

I cannot wait fot the wedding kiss! I hope you make it absolutely mindblowing. But knowing your skills, you probably would. And Mayank wanting to remove Nupur's dress😉 I'm sure there'll be hundreds of more cravings like that. Hehe.

Thank you sooo much!! And Mayank being even more naughty....lol.....dunno what to make of that! haha...

Originally posted by: hgrhr

wow wow wow...i'd been waiting for this chapter since you said it was going to be the wedding...and finally i read it..!!!

It was spectacular..!! Like always but this was even more so....the descriptions were so good...i could see it happening in front of me..!!

And my fav was the different interactions with everyone..!

Nupur-Neev at the alter...Mayu-CJ before the wedding...Mayu-SONALI before the wedding...LOL...amazing..!

And of course the mayur conversation..!! So awkward....LOL....and yet full of sexual tension..!!

The beginning scene was so cute with Nupur-Neev-Harsh...i swear Neev and Harsh together would be worse than fred and george..!! hehe....

Loved the little moments between mayank and nupur during the wedding..holding hands...checking each other out....LOL....

fab update..!!

I know i always say this...but i can't wait till the next one..!

ooh...i saw you wrote that Sonali and Vicky will hit it off...LOL....I hope so..!! Is going to be interesting to see Sonali's reactions then...!

Thank you soo much for the wonderful review! And thank you for observing the little interactions! I wanted to include those in this chappie...and Neev and Harsh are following in Uday and Benji's footsteps...LOL....

And Sonali and Vicky - whether they even meet or not - you'll find out soon!

Originally posted by: archieeps

@ Paris and xOxMwahxOx

haha....thank you sooo much for reading it so many times...lol...i hope you havent gotten bored of it yet....I'm trying to figure out how exactly to shape up the chapter and I'm in a crappy mood right now coz I just saw yesterday's MJHT episode and after seeing that ass of a lawyer do practically nothing just sit there giving blank expressions, pouting her lips and acting like a complete bimbo, I've become quite irritated....what a hell of an actress that lawyer is

so I'm finding it hard to write it...usually once I start, I can't stop...lol...but this time, sorry guys but that idiotic lawyer pissed me off