FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#461

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Much as I want to read this now, there is time enough only to update mine and rush...will get back to you tomorrow... thanks so much for updating!!

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#462

Hey kainath, by updating twice in a day, you have given me one of the best gifts of my life and i don't know how to thankyou man.

But still i would loveeeeeeeeeee to keep on thanking you, if you get inspired from the mayur sbs and give double update then there should be such sbs everyday man.

God damn it, i have not been sooo happy in a while now, thankyou soooooo much man.

Ok enough of me going crazy and thanking you.

What an update, kainath, this is not just yours but my favourite as well man. Starting from the way neev and harshad were punished, poor ritu. Wow nupz is such an amazing teacher and even a mother.

I loveddddddddd the towel scene and how neev was sooo happy with nupz. Mayank wasn't the only one touched, my eyes were literally filled with tears man. Neev never got to know how a mother is like and how is it to be loved by a mum.

Though ofcourse mayank lovesssssssss neev like anything man. Oh gosh nupz thought mayank would be jealous, even i thought that to be the case earlier but not now man.

Aww mayank lovessssssss her so much but would never accept it. The cooking and bedroom bit was soooo well narrated man, i know the awkwardness mayank. this is sooo adorable man.

Coming to the wedding bliss, again mayank acting soo mature about the venue bit was all soooo like him that is as i understand a side of him to be.

I love the way nupur keeps on getting surprised man! I was sooo sure that nupz would look heavenly as she did and poor mayank, i know his condition. Sonali is soooo much life man. mayank's reaction and feelings as usual were sooooo beautifully told, i am sooo happy. I have always felt while reading your ff that i am watching the show man. everything is crystal, right in front of my eyes man.

Mayank doesn't know much about fashion, but he analysed nupz and her dress really well huh. wow mayank. Oh gosh this part was amazing when she thought that why is mayank looking at her in such a way as he is hungry. the way mayank held her hand and kissed it was all soooo wonderful. I was in a dream and i so don't want to come out of it.

Thankfully uday , samrat came and CJ is sooo much fun man. Excellent update, white and mayur are the best combination ever man.

i loveddddddddddddd it kainath, thankyou sooooooooooooo much. God bless you always.

i hope no one objects man, i will die if someone does.

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priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#463

HI loved this two chapters sorry for the late review i just read them they were both great and i loved how mayank apologized to samrat and uday it was cute how he did it for nupur and i loved the wedding party where mayank was think how long it would take to takke nupurs dress mayu does have bad mind ☺️ well afterall he is guy........i love your ff its great pls update soon

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Shahida

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Posted: 16 years ago

#464

nice update cnt wait 2 knw wat happens nxt plz cont soon

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#465

ok sorry i cudn't comment earlier, was busy w/ skool work
so here goes
Part 15 - wow i feel so bad for nupur
im glad she said yes but its hurting her so much to lie to almost everyone she loves
but i think shez really luck to hav brothers like sammy n uday they care so much abt her
sonali is uff there r not enuf words to describe her, n rohan is just weird
n i just love neev n harshad, they r so cute, lol they sure lessened mayur's burden by shouting stuff to each other
great part over all, very emotional too
Part 16 - aw neev is too cute i love that kid
its so nice nupur is like a mom to neev, n she learned how to cook! wow
gosh when will these two idiots accept that they still love each other? its so obvious n they r so oblivious to it
hope these 6 months help them realize their feelings
anyways continue soon

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Brinda

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Posted: 16 years ago

#466

loved it...n ya da kiss segment was awesum dying to see it...

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Piya Roy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#467

amazing update!!

loved d towel beat...

Nupur was nervous whether mayank will like it or not...His comments still matters for her..

Poor mayank , he was enjoying d biriyani...and nupur brought d akwardness by bringing d bedroom issue...

wedding part was well writen...

samrat uday benji came....Nupur was so happy to see them...

Now d wedding is over...Actual battle starts now...

update soon...can't wait for d next part...

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#468

Hey Kainath! Another wonderful part, i love how you've shown the very much alive sexual tension between the both of them. I love Mayank's character, the way you've written it out and made him alive is very well done. Loved it! do cont soon xxSonia

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: annie07
amazingly superb part...................rte from their kitchen conversation to the wedding bit................i cud see it all infront of my eyes.....................wud be interesting to see how Mayank controls himself around her........... thanx for the long update................will wait for next 1..................

Thank you sooo much! lol....Mayank controlling himself would be fun.... ;)

I'll try to update soon!

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: parisbynight
kitchen convo was so good,they were showing great maturity over the issue of rooms!
i wanna know what will happen the night of their "wedding",hope they have another convo !

cant wait till next part!
please update tomorrow !

Thanks a ton!! hmmm....the wedding night I dunno - but they'll definitely be having many many more of such convos ;)