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Posted: 16 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: annie07

haha, i can understand.............had similar feelings last night................ but dear i can give u more than 1 reason to update today............ firstly the accident-court track finally gotta end today (hopefully) and we can have sme nice Mayur moments,a nd ofcos the most awaited "kiss" next week........... and your fan fic is getting people addicted just like MJHT.............so bliss all the way............... :)

Is this enough or shud i write more? 😆

LOL....thanks a ton sweetie for soo many reasons to update...trust me, I'm trying but getting verrrry distracted....I'll definitely have greater interest tmr I promise! Till then, please be patient coz sabar ka phal meeta hota hai ;)

P.S. the wait for the kiss is driving me absolutely nuts...I really really want this whole messy accident affair to get over as quick as possible OR a time machine should be built for me to be transported to next week....lolollolol.... :)

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#492

Hey Kainath!
Let me begin with the chesire grin dreamer: Sonali! Tha woman is such a livewire... I loved how she got all worked up abt Vikram's girlfriend.. it wud be fun to see them together in the future, even in fan-girly mode. LOL. I also loved how Nupur still thinks she cant stand Mayank despite the 'distilled hatred'. Oh the kind of theories people come up with to justify their madness! :P

Now wait - choco cheese biscuits? Erm, I cant seem to get that out of my head.. 😆 Who told Nupur only men can check out women though? How can anyone stay away from Mayank? Oh well..
Let me just say the whole conversation - and Neev - was exceptionally well written. But then u're an expert at conversations. The awkwardness abt the beds was interesting - so it wasnt sumthin he had considered.. Ahem.

Coming to the wedding.. it read so much like a fairy tale! Enthralling, beautiful and white. I felt like a spectator, smiling at the gorgeous couple. Mayank's attempts at describing the dress were commendable. Ha ha.. esp the things his 'brain' was thinking. As for what happens in the 15 minutes... I have a few ideas but lets see what u've planned for us.. It isnt really fair to keep it hanging in the air like that but since its hard enough for me to emerge out of the fairy tale now, I might as well enjoy it till sumthin comes to break the bubble..

Lovely chapter once again Kainath. This wasnt a chapter though.. it was a wedding I attended. :)

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shinz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#493

kainath.......can u like plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz not update today cuz i m gonna go offline and if i know u have updates and i m the moron nt able to read then for sure i m gonna go around like a zombie but do update tommorow for sure
plzzz

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#494

Oops, I just realized I missed commenting on chapter 15... I just read the two of them in sequence and the wedding is still so much on my mind that all else got lost in the mist.
Samrat, Gunjan, Uday.... everyone is mad at Mayank. But just like Gunjan's positive feeling, this wedding has me all excited. Jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai... 😊

Update soon Kainath... and thanks for the double bonanza! :D

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: debby
Hey Kainath!
Let me begin with the chesire grin dreamer: Sonali! Tha woman is such a livewire... I loved how she got all worked up abt Vikram's girlfriend.. it wud be fun to see them together in the future, even in fan-girly mode. LOL. I also loved how Nupur still thinks she cant stand Mayank despite the 'distilled hatred'. Oh the kind of theories people come up with to justify their madness! :P

Now wait - choco cheese biscuits? Erm, I cant seem to get that out of my head.. 😆 Who told Nupur only men can check out women though? How can anyone stay away from Mayank? Oh well..
Let me just say the whole conversation - and Neev - was exceptionally well written. But then u're an expert at conversations. The awkwardness abt the beds was interesting - so it wasnt sumthin he had considered.. Ahem.

Coming to the wedding.. it read so much like a fairy tale! Enthralling, beautiful and white. I felt like a spectator, smiling at the gorgeous couple. Mayank's attempts at describing the dress were commendable. Ha ha.. esp the things his 'brain' was thinking. As for what happens in the 15 minutes... I have a few ideas but lets see what u've planned for us.. It isnt really fair to keep it hanging in the air like that but since its hard enough for me to emerge out of the fairy tale now, I might as well enjoy it till sumthin comes to break the bubble..

Lovely chapter once again Kainath. This wasnt a chapter though.. it was a wedding I attended. :)

Hi Debby!

Thank you super duper much for the review..lol....and Sonali - uske baare mein jitna kahan jaaye, utna kam hai....lol

And you're absolutely right! A girl can totally check out a man...i shamefully find myself doing that constantly...lol....

And choco-cheese biscuits came right out of my childhood - i remember going crazy about them when I was 7...lol...And the beds part - that matter had to be raised, dude...totally inevitable....haha....

And thank you soo much abt your comment on the wedding! Mayank and his brain....tsk tsk....lol...and what happens after those 15 seconds - you'll obviously get to see that in the next chapter! lol...i know i;m not being fair but a story does need some cliffhangers here and there... :)

And I hope you're enjoying the wedding so far :)

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: debby
Oops, I just realized I missed commenting on chapter 15... I just read the two of them in sequence and the wedding is still so much on my mind that all else got lost in the mist.
Samrat, Gunjan, Uday.... everyone is mad at Mayank. But just like Gunjan's positive feeling, this wedding has me all excited. Jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai... 😊

Update soon Kainath... and thanks for the double bonanza! :D

lol...it's ok I understand :) thanks for the 2nd review!

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amazingneira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#497

wat a FF!!.. i read all parts in one go and just loved it... it was too good!!!

I love the whole concept and wnder what went wrong between two 5 years before and please update soon

PM me please!!

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: aati1429
wat a FF!!.. i read all parts in one go and just loved it... it was too good!!!

I love the whole concept and wnder what went wrong between two 5 years before and please update soon

PM me please!!

hi! Thanks a ton! Read all the parts? wow, that must have taken quite a while - and I thoroughly appreciate it :D

I've added you already ;)

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: archieeps

And thank you soo much abt your comment on the wedding! Mayank and his brain....tsk tsk....lol...and what happens after those 15 seconds - you'll obviously get to see that in the next chapter! lol...i know i;m not being fair but a story does need some cliffhangers here and there... :)

And I hope you're enjoying the wedding so far :)

Yeah, I understand.. not that I mind the illusion anyway... such a fairy tale its been..! Enjoying the wedding? Redundant question! I am having a blast. 8)

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: debby

Yeah, I understand.. not that I mind the illusion anyway... such a fairy tale its been..! Enjoying the wedding? Redundant question! I am having a blast. 8)

Haha....thanks a ton dear! I'll try my utmost best to update by tmr :)