FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1141

congo yaar.....u have crossed 150 pages!!!
awesome part yaar!!
wow they kissed!!!
neev uday benji scene was hilarious!!!
hope mayur sort out their difference soon!!!
please update soon.please pm me.😳

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#1142

omg personality disorder... talk about understatement!
u are on a roll!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1143

Originally posted by: hgrhr

omg kainath....!!!! thank you sooo much for this update..!!
Made my sunday it did..! hehe

what a wonderrrrful update..!! right from the start to th end..!

I was wondering since the last update that WHY did that creep come to their house...doesn't he fear his life..! LOL

Soo he has got mental problems...lol..figures. Perfect. It was weird to see him acting civil to anyone...lol

and mayank was on the verge of making mince meat of him.

Nupur was the best though....what a one-liner..!

The mayur scene afterwards was so touching...they can't live without each other. Just being with each other has them at peace.....*sigh*....that looked like such a perfect family moment. awww and they banter like a married couple too...it so nice to see...makes me grin llike anything..!

Aaaannnd then comes the epic lunch...or dinner..?? at Gunjan's house..!

By god Benji and Uday will corrupt Neev completly..! They just had to put that kid in mummy's yummy idea in his head na...LOL...and poor mayank....had to resort to the Santa's magic explaination while everyone was hidhing their laughs..! hehe

oh god and then he went about asking for a sibling....😆😆and uday and benji just can't keep their mouths shut about it na..!!😳

And Neev never is able to even acknowledge annie in anythingr related to mother....he just doesn't even think of it as a pausible thing...Nupur's all he ever thinks about...awww....he is just the bestest.

Last scene in the bedroom was my fav..at least they're making progress....even though nupur stopped saying that line at the righ time but still he know what she was about to say....awww....

Nupur was mortified...!

LOLz that lotion distraction was so funny...they just cannNOT stop thinking about each other..!!

And then the bonding over neev....sharing their thoughts. Their feelings were so visible...how can they not just confess..!

And you write the romance so well..it gives me goosebumps..! 😳😳

I really hope they don't get awkward in the morning....or neev doesn't catch them.

Though i have a feeling that he WILL catch them in a compromising position one of these days...and then the questions will be fun..!! hehee😉

Mind Blowing Update..!!!👏I am officially in love with it..!!😳

Pleeeease do continue soooonnnn....

exactly what i wanted to say.......
loved ur update.....
plzzzzzzzzzz update soon.....
it was so short 😆

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1144

Originally posted by: archieeps
Hi guys! Thanks a ton for all the lovely reviews, I really really appreciate all of them :D I've a question though, do I really have to open a new thread after the 150th page? Can't I just stick to this one, or is it mandatory to open a new one?<br>

yup u'll have to open a new one :)

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Shahida

@Inshira

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1145

Lovely update truly ur are pure natural writer plz cont soon

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1146

gr8 yaar awesome
neev's mummy tummy was excellent and uday and benjy
i loved it

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mannnnnn

@mannnnnn

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#1147

awesome neev is like a nasty kiddo n plz update regularly as u did before

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1148

on chapter 26-
holy god!! kainath..truly..realy n absolutely u r THE BEST!!! god..dis was an update dat i was looking for a long time...n u satiated my desire yaar...oh god..m so happy 4 sonali..finally she has got her vicky!!! great!!! luvly..well d tampons..ha ha 🤣 n d kissy is yucky was too gud dear!!! 😆
seriously u shud consider taking up writing professionally..i can bet dat u vl be sureshot successful..u vl den become a hot-shot,most wanted writer!!!we vl 4rm a queue 4 ur autographs n all..i mean ur ff is becoming too gud too read yaar,,,he he..i hope u knw wat i mean... 👏
kp rocking n entertaining us...as u always do!! god bless ya!! luv ya.. ⭐️ 🤗
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1149

reserved.

but still i wanna sayyyyyy amazingggggggggggggggg kainath.

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I am so sowie i am leaving a shorter comment kainath which would certainly never be able to do justice to the kind of work you put in, but still apologies, i am just too loaded with work and stress man.

Your update always come across as a stressbuster and makes me fall in love with MN all over again. Kainath thats what you have done again man.

I was soo scared after reading that RV is standing at their door and is back but then i knew that mayank would always have the better of him. Wow Rv is going through rehab that came across as a pleasant surprise man! I lovedddddd the way nupur felt comfort by mayank just there when RV talked to her. You expressed nupur's emotions soooooooo well, even of Rv and Mayank for that matter.

awwwwwwww the way mayank and nupur felt comfort in eachothers arms was sooooo wonderfully expressed, even i was so tensed up, i can understand what nupur must have gone through.

At the dinner at gunji's i loveddddddddd benji, uday and neev annoying mayank, wow mayank surely is changing man. Hehe now mayank and nupur would have to think of neev's siblings. Neev is sooooooo adorable man.

i loveddddddd every bit of your updatem wow the last part between MN and them being for eachother was all damn wonderful.

keep it up kainath, your ff makes me believe that there is something like love and you make it soooooooooooo relatable, realistic and beautiful. Excellent work. sowie i am rushing man.

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago