FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 113

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Posted: 15 years ago
mindblowing update! 😃
Neev is ultra-adorable...absolutely love him! 😃
the end was just ammazzinggggg! 😍
plz bring mayur together soon!
keep up the gud work! 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
edited on pg 148
and a BIG Congratulations Kainath..!!! On completing the first thread of the FF..!! It def would finish with this part....sooo hoping to see this FF complete many many threads...hehe...you totally and absolutly deserve all the wonderful comments..!!!
Its one of the best mayur FFs I've ever read..!
so keep rocking like this..!!!
*hugs*
btw kainath...how long is this FF gonna be...?? approximatly..?
because i dunno what i'd do when it ends....
Edited by hgrhr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh kainath.............it was simply superb.............with MJHT going no where, ur fanfic is like a breath of fresh air................loved it.............their confusion and confession to themselves..............both knw they cant leave without the other.................they just need trust...............3 months..............ah more of romance coming our way.........lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
a true Epic FF kainath I must say it make me drool over MN all the more*sigh* what more do I say yaar A perfect start to my Sunday Morning
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Posted: 15 years ago
Whoa, Kainath, the multitude of emotions in this update was breathtaking. I love the way you write. Seriously, it was magical.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago

wiowwwwww kainath wonderful dear.. loved it.. you are simple superb dear,,,,

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Posted: 15 years ago
ohhh myyyy gawwwdddd!!
kainnaatthhh u dntt knwww!!
myy laptop passsworddd,,, is lost to me...
n i quietlyy pickkedd up dadss laptop to readdd ur updatee!
cann u beaaatt thaAATT??
lol... amaZinggg thatt surelyy madee my sundayy!!
luuuuuvv yaaaa
sindhya
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Posted: 15 years ago
my dear kaitz.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.................
by god wht an awesome rockin fabulous fantabulous heavenly Santa magical update dear.......👏.....................aww it made my day....sweetie........truly truly awesome.........speechless..........beautiful to d core.........romantic to d coreeeeee............thnxx god RV din do nythin this time....he apologized...well thts gud for him...i really dnt wanna comment nythin on tht part....bt i shud thank him for d magical mayur moment tht occured just bcoz he went there............vich ws this...

"But the dejected look on her face just put him off and he put his arm around her shoulders.

She didn't say anything, but felt wonderful inside. She felt wanted and protected with him around and just rested her head against him."

awww..............😳.................wht a perfect family picture n a perfect mayur moment................thnxxx a zillion ton kaitz for this moment alone.........🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.........

then came d Epic dinner....😉.......undoubtedly star of d dinner ws our jaanuable Neev again....👏..........Poor mayur.....dono vr hvin really tough time na answerin neev's queries.....😆.......n Benjy n dodo toh aag mein ghee daalne ka kaam kar rahe the haina....😆..........aww poora gang moments dekhkar mujhe show ke purane gang moments yaad aa gaye.....😭😭.....nywz there vr really some special moments where...i ws lik this....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣............pehla toh woh mayu ka ans SANTA's MAGIC!!!.......🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.........n doosra

Nupur bit her lip, slightly pale, and smiled across the table at her stepson. "Maybe later, sweetheart. It's a very difficult magic and uh…"

"You need to practice?" Benji and Uday asked at the exact same time......🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...................

well well.....so ab tak....is tarah v had some gr8 love filled moments...really really funny moments.....n nw its time for ROMANCE.....😳............

i really lovd d way u descriebed mayus distractions-lotion. And wheatish, lovely, slender legs.........hehe..........

then their monologues....by god ab yeh dono kab tak apne aap se deny karte rahenge ki they dnt wanna b 2gether again,huh?.........

then came my most most most fav moments of this update......aakhir yeh dono firse haar hi gaye na apne aap se..in front of their deep deep pure true love vich they still feel for each other.....

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a zillion billion trillion ton kaitz for givin us those heavenly hardcore romantic mayur moments at the end.......

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i really really njoyd..............each n evry letter u wrote in tht part......ws blushin to d core readin tht part.......................truly wht a perfect ending u did wid tht one-liner....

"Both didn't know what this meant, whether were they together or not – they were just enjoying the moment. The breathtaking, magnificent moment."


sach mein kaitz has bcome one among my most fav updates of this ff...thank u soo much once again for givin us this heavenly update dear...

.................congo dear so u finally ur 1st thread gt ovr...i really wanna c u openin more n more threads of this FF.....coz main bhi nahi chahti ki is FF ka kabhi The End ho....😉......bt i knw aisa kabhi ho nahi sakta....bt dream karne mein koi tax nahi lagta na....nywz c u in ur next thread.......😃






Edited by nikki028 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
A part filled with heartfelt, touching and magical moments. Brilliant!

And, you have finished 150 pages. Congrats..you are going to start a new thread!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kainath thagt was so beautiful.. oh man neev is a devil.. poor payur but they answered really nicely.. loverd the part... the ending part was also so beautiful how love wins over self.. amazing.. update next part soon

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