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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Hehe....main to dono posts ko 'like' kar sakti hu....😆😆....isiliye kiya bhi....😉😉....

Lekin Lekin Lekin.....mujhe ye VEER wala kissa samajhna hai....jaldi!!!! Tumhe pata hai na Guglu mujhe mysteries solve hote dekhna kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa achha lagta hai?? Waise agar pata nahi hai to abhi jaanlo....mujhe ye VEER wali mystery janni hai....😃😃😃....lekin itna to mujhe bhi pata hai kismat itni meherbaan nahi hai....🤢🤢....isiliye tum bas ek kaam karo.....jaldi se parts post karo....isse raaz khulne wala UD nazdik aa jayega....😆😆😆

Achha abhi main part ki baat karu?? Rajveer-Naina BEST COUPLE!!! So realistic yaar!!!😳😳😳...And Huda had seriously no other expression for himself other than anger....😆😆....but wo kehta hai wo Raj se badla lega??😡😡😡 Iski toh....😡😡😡....I hope tum jaldi se isse iski limit yaad dila dogi Guglu.....warna meri koi limit nahi hai....when it concerns Raj....😈

I liked RN dance....and usme confusion ki baat to maine pehle hi kar di....and I mostly loved the way Rajveer was concentrating on his work....it surely makes us more proud on him....Naina's words were soooo true....and I liked the convo where she was justifying her accompany here....😆😆😆

And they got the waiter....hmm....lets c how they stop that guy...Pls continue soon dear.😃😃

P.S. Waise ye IF wali musibat jaldi se tal jaye to behtar hai.....par main hope karungi ki Mana aur Priya wali musibat kabhi na tale....😈....Mana & Priya.....tum dono apna kaam jaari rakho....hum sab tumhare saath hai....😆😆

@Mana: Thank u for posting the part Doc...😉😉

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Great part Guglu...!!!

RN ko best couple toh banna hi tha...!!!!

You have described the dancing scenes very well...!!!!

And yeh ' Veer ' ka kya chakkar hai...??? I have too many questions and assumptions but I know that you ll not answer them right now so...!!

I just loved the way you described Rajveer's alertness....!!!

Oh the waiter is the bartender now....sounds like trouble...!!! Jaldi se post the next part so that we see more action....!!!

Mana darling, thanks a lot for posting this part...!!!!

Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#183

ver nice p guglu love the part and r n ka dance bhi bohot he romantic tha

plz agle bar mujhe bhi pm kar dena

cont soon

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Hi Guglu

m so sorry is baar late hun na, par tum bhi janti ho na mein kahan busy rehti hun isliye par ab aage se try karungi ki kabhi aise late na hun, m so so sorry this time. Ab mein part pe aati hun nahin to meri bak bak me hi sara part khatam ho jayega

The update was awesome, just loved it

Raj Naina ko best couple ka award to milna hi tha na, as we all know they r just the best

Par yeh Huda kabhi nahin sudhrega, I just hate him.

Par ab yeh Veer kaun hai, Kahiin Raj ka Naina se koi bachpan ka rishta to nahin na, Maloom hai thodha bakwas guess hai, Par ab mein itna hi kar sakti hun na

But I just loved the whole part

Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Guglu dear....

sooooooo sorry ,maine is baar bahut bahut late ki apni comment karne main.....

Awesome... 👏 👏 👏 👏 Fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏 loved the whole update

Alekh is Mr.fresher n naina is Ms.fresher....alekh got the title n ye stupid huda ko ye baat se jalan horahi hain....ab is huda ko har baat pe jalne ke alawa aur koi kaam hain kya.....isko raj se problem alekh se problem ..sab se problem hain...main kehthi hun wo khudh hi ek problem hain

The best couple of the evening is our dear raj n naina...........ab is main koi shak hain kya....our cute couple truly deserves the title.....i am so happy ........dekha phirse ye idiot huda jal raha hain..the moment he entered in to the party sirf uska ek hi kaam hain jalna aur kuch nahin..aur wo kya kehraha tha..captain ko main chodunga nahin..lagtha hain bhoolgaya jo kuch dher pehle kya hua jab usne raj ko challenge kiya

Guglu u have written the dancing sequence so beautifully...raj n naina donon saath main aise dance karthe hue kitne pyare lagthe hain na...ab ye veer mystery kya hain...waise kuch kuch samajh main aara hain...but wo kaha tak tikh hain wo main bhi nahin jaanthi ......isiliye main kuch nahin kehrahi uske bare main...tum plzzzz jaldi wo mystery ko reveal kardo

I really loved it when raj mentioned about huda n ritus dance

mujhe wo scenebahut pasand aaya jaha raj amidst of the celebrations he is still alert n how focused he is on his mission...aur mujhe naina ki enthusisiam bahut accha laga...i liked her convo with raj where she is justifying her stay with raj

totally enjoyed the whole update guglu

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#186

superb update.loved it.

First alekh is Mr Fresher , ms fresher is naina,lovely. but mujhe jada pasand aaya best coupl raj,naina , wow.love it 👏and love u for this,

and the reaction of huda, wow , but mujhe uss dr.mishra ka reaction dekhna bhi hain,jalke laal hojati...

the dance scene , kia kahu it' s too too good,loved it.and iye veer wali partmein kuch guess kia aur kuchnehi , but mein bolungi nehi tujhe ke meine kia guess kia, dekhti hoon mere guess milte hain iya nehi....

loved the conversation between raj and naina ,

hope they caught that bartender.....

continue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Hi Guglu

How r u??

I read this fiction in 1 go...really loved the concept.

U have done a gud job.👏👏

Last update was really gud...

Naina n Alekh were declared n Miss n Mr fresher respectively..But the best part was RN getting the award for best couple..

They indeed r made for each other..😛

Their dance was too romantic...But they were remebering certain things from the past during their dance..

Continue soon

Bye

pls pm me when u update next

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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pinkorblack

@pinkorblack

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#188

RN rock together.....yay.....happy for aalekh too.....

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Superbbbb ud...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

sab se pahle yeh Veer koun hai...??? kahin yeh toh nahi jiss k bare main soch rahi hun...!!! matlab....???? chal jane de...pata toh chal hi jayega...vaise mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai is fic ka first page...!!! agar jo main soch rahi hun...voh sahi hai toh jawab mujhe mil gaya...varna confusion dur karne k liye toh tu hai hi...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

alekh...mr fresher aur naina...miss fresher...n raj aur naina...best couple...tum ne last me surprise package daal diya hai....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ab Huda ka xpression bhi mujhe saaf saaf dikhai dene laga hai...bichara kitna frustrated dikh raha hoga...aur use vahan company dene k liye Ritu toh hogi hi...!!! dono hi same situation me hain...bole toh dil hi dil me bol rahe honge...Raj aur naina k bare me 'hath ko aaya muh na lagaa' na huda ko kuch mila aur na hi ritu ko...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

pura dance scene baht hi khubsurat tarike se tum ne likha hai...!!! toh raj ko us bartender par shaq ho hi gaya....!!! par yudi...??? pata nahi yeh kaam banayega ya phir bigadega...

vaise raj ka dr mishra aur huda ko dance k liye kahna achha tha... bichare pahle se hi dukhi the...aur raj unhe aur bhi jyada chidha raha tha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Mana ko thanxxx nahi kahungi...kyoun ki hum dono k bich ek deal hui hai...isiliye voh samajh jayegi...!!! lekin maine abhi tak tujh par se gussa thuka nahi hai...

ab yeh toh hadh hi ho gayi...Sumi kahti hai...ki main aur Mana mushibat hain...aur voh hamara sath degi...!!! arre yaar...hum toh social service karte hain...jiss sab ko faida hota hai...matlab hum sare readers ko...writer k bare meeeeeee..........pata nahi....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ab cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ki ab mujhe dhamki dene ki aadat pad gayi hai...sochti hun ek SARKAAR company khol hi dun... dhamkiyaan dene k liye...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago