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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ria
the part was mindblowing lovely
oh i loved it .but i m feeling sad too as armaan actually went away
and then 1 year passed......
but his son was very cute.owwwwwwwww
well he living in canda with muskaan .....wow thats cool and now riddhima also comming to canada....oh this gonna be interesting to watch .well waiting for the next update
please doo update the next part soon and thansk for the pm
well the name of the ff was great that i allready said earlier and that song of love aajkal very well goes with your ff loved it
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Hey guys i am updating the 4th part within half an hour.....

C ya

Love

Ria.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey plz add me in ur pm list!!!! itz awsum!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Guys i am sorry i won't be able to update right now.....gotta go somewhere....sorry guys.....but i will surely update after 9 pm.....promise......

Sorry once again.....

Love

Ria

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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP :

Ridz : (thinks) Yeh nikki bhi na....ab main canada jake kya karungi.....kabhi bhi kisi ki baat nahi sunti hai....

And then she books a ticket for canada.....and starts packing her bag......

PART 4


NEXT MORNING :

Riddhima got ready in her red dress (lonavala episode) n put a butterfly in her hair n not letting her hair fully open....she took her purse n suitcase n made her way out of her house.....

She came out took a taxi n reached the airport....n went to the checking queue.....after that she settled in the plane put her purse in her lap n sat on her seat....

After sometime the flight took off.....n she was feeling bored....also there was no one besides her seat that she would talk to.....so she just took out a magazine n started reading it.....

While she was reading the magazine....she heard some voice from behind.....she turned to see what was going on.....

Girl : Baby....jab hum pehli baar mile the tab toh tum aise nahi the ?

Boy : Aur tum bhi toh aisi nahi thi....hey.....

Takes her hand in his....

Boy : Sirf ek gift ke liye tum mujhse gussa nahi ho sakti....

Girl : Kyun nahi ho sakti....zaroor ho sakti hoon.....aur main hoon bhi....(she leaves his hands n looks in other side)

Boy : Look aisa pehli baar hua hai na....

Girl : Isiliye toh main tumse gussa hoon.....

Riddhima was smiling at their conversation....

Boy : Come on now....jab hum ghar jayenge na toh tumhe ice-cream khane le jaunga.....okay ?

Girl : Bas ????

Boy : Ummm......fine hum shopping pe bhi jayenge....aur tumhe jo bhi pasand ho wo karenge.....okay....r u happy now ?

Girl : Hmm.....

Boy : So tumne mujhe maaf kiya na.....

Girl : Ummmm.....(makes a confusing face)....haan.....

Boy : Thanks.....i love you....

And he hugged her....

Girl : Love you too.....

A wide smile spread over riddhima's face....n she again turned towards her seat....n then she decided to take a nap as there is so much time left.....

As soon as she closed her eyes.....she was surrounded by her past.....a small flashback.....

******FLASHBACK******

Riddhima and nikki were having a coffee in the cafe nearby riddhima's house.....riddhima was wearing the same red dress as she is wearing now (reality) and nikki was wearing a white n pink kurti n leggings....

Riddhima : Kya yaar nikki tu bhi na......sunday ko koi kya subah subah 8 baje phone karta hai kya.....

Nikki : Kyun na karu ? After all you're my best friend.....aur madam subah subah agar koi phone kare toh good morning bolte hai....naki stupid, idiot n moron....

Ridz : Tujhe pata hai na sirf sunday ko main free hoti hoon aur mujhe sirf sundays ko itne waqt ke liye sone ko milta hai....varna roz badi maa aur bade papa jo kehte hai wahin karna hota hai.....

Nikki : I know yaar.....par kya karoon hum dono ne kitne time se saath mein waqt nahi bitaya tha isiliye....

Ridz : Okay....fine ab teri ye sab emotional baatein ho chuki ho toh kya hum coffee order kare.....

Nikki : (with her mouth wide open) Main eotional baatein kar rahi thi ??????

Before she could say anything riddhima called a waiter n gave an order of two coffees.....

After chatting for sometime.....they both stood up to go....

Nikki : Pata nahi aaj kya hai.....mujhe scooty kitna door park karna pada....

They came out of the cafe....

Ridz : Haan yaar.....dekh waha par kitni bhid hai waha par......

Nikki : Aaya hoga koi....

Ridz : Chod na....waise teri padhai kaisi chal rahi hai....

Nikki : Perfect.....bas agle mahine se internship join kar lungi.....

Ridz : I am really happy for you......yaar atleast ab toh tu settle ho jayegi....

Nikki : Ya....

Just then they were passing by the crowd n a group of girls were crossing the road very hurrily as if they were not going to be alive at the next moment.....

While riddhima n nikki were walking n talking....the group of girls just rushed into them n out of no way riddhima was made to enter the crowd.....

Ridz : Aare.....aare.....mujhe....

But they were just pushing her inside n inside....she wa loosing her balance.....n at last when she came out of the crowd....she totally lost her balance n was going to fall......but suddenly someone hold her by her waist.....

While all riddhima could do was to close her eyes n think about the crowd laughing over her......her eyes were closed so tightly of fear that she didn't even realize that she was already caught by someone.....

******FLASHBACK ENDS******

Riddhima immediately opened her eyes for she realized what she was thinking about.....she took a sip of water n then again decide to sleep promising herself that she would not think over it once again.....

******FULL FLASHBACK******

AR FIRST MEETING :

While all riddhima could do was to close her eyes n think about the crowd laughing over her......her eyes were closed so tightly of fear that she didn't even realize that she was already caught by someone.....

The person who was holding her was just lost in staring at her......he was in his own dreamland.....he was just mesmerised by her.....yes guys.....who could it be.....of course the one n only ARMAAN MALLIK.....He was thinking how beautifull a girl could ever be.....or god has filled all the beauty in this girl who was in front of her......

While riddhima was just thinking why hadn't she fall yet.....also she didn't got hurt yet.....then she realized that she was alrady saved by someone from falling....then she first opened opened her right eye.....still frightened.....n didn't look at the person who was holding her.....rather she looked down.....whether she was dreaming or it was real that she was saved....then she took a sigh of relief.....

While armaan also entered the real world n riddhima got in a staright position.....(she still haven't looked at the person)......then she made her duppatta a bit straight.....n then she looked at the person who saved her to say thanks.....

But as she looked at the face she was shocked.....really shocked.....she held her mouth open.....was she really face to face with the person who's name is counted in the world's most successfull businessman......was it actually happening with her......or it was her dream.....

While as armaan was giving his autograph before he saved riddhima.....he was having a pen in his right hand......he called out his manager.....n gave the pen to him....n as he was feeling hot....(he was wearing a coat suit guys !!!!) he took out his coat n gave it to his bodyguard.....

Meanwhile nikki also came there any how n she even without looking at armaan turned towards riddhima....

Nikki : Ye log bhi na....ridz tu thik toh hai na....ye sab pagal hai.....pata nahi aaj kya hai ki.....

She then just turned sideway n saw who was in front of her.....it was THE ARMAAN MALLIK....

Before riddhima could look at nikki....n tell her about this incident....she just felt nikki's head on her shoulder.....yes nikki fainted......riddhima gave some light slaps on nikki's cheek trying to wake her up.....but after many tries she succeded.....

But before she could say anything.....armaan's body guards came n hold riddhima n nikki n told them to go.....but armaan interupted.....

Armaan : Guys....leave them.....

The bodyguards followed the order n leaved ridz n nikki.....nikki was so much exited on seeing armaan....he was such a great celebrity to meet.....she immidiately gave out her hand for friendship.....

Nikki : Hi i am nikita....nikita sharma....but you can call me nikki....niks....watever you like....(just in one breath)

Armaan was confused at all this.....but still gave out his hand accepting nikki's friendship....then nikki took her hand away....n looked at riddhima who was just glaring at her for her stupidity.....

Nikki : (whispers) Kya hua ???

Ridz : Nikki....

Then she turned towards armaan who was just staring at both of them....n feeling left out.....

Ridz : Woh....ummmm....i am sorry.......woh.....

Armaan : Hey....hey calm down....it's okay....

Ridz just smiled at his gesture.....

Ridz : (took out her hand) Ummm.....hi.....i am riddhima.....riddhima gupta.....

Armaan once again gave out his hand.....

Armaan : Hi....armaan.....armaan mallik.....

Nikki : Dude.....tum kyun apne aapko introduce karva rahe ho.....i mean the whole world knows you......

Just then riddhima took away her hand.....

Armaan just gave his million dollar smile when he heard nikki.....n then looked down as if he was a bit shy.....

Nikki immediately took out a small diary which she always used to have in her purse.....n also a pen....

Nikki : Autograph please.....if you don't mind.....

Armaan : Sure....

He gave his autograph.....

Nikki : Ridz i think ab humhe chalna chahiye.....and you know waht it's alrady 11:30.....

Ridz : (shocked) Oh no.....badi maa.....

Nikki : Ya....main jake scooty nikalti hoon.....tu jaldi aa.....

Nikki goes away saying bye to armaan.....riddhima was also going to follow her.....but armaan called aut her name.....

Armaan : Riddhima.....

Riddhima turned around with a smile.....

Ridz : Haan....

Armaan : Umm.....woh....main.....(in one breath) Kya tum aaj shaam ko free ho ?

Ridz : (confused) Ummm....haan.....lekin kyun ?

Armaan : Ummmmmm.....sirf ek coffee.....

Ridz : Okay...(confused)

Armaan : Okay then.....shaam ko 6:30 baje yahin par....

Ridz : (still confused) Ummm....okay....

Armaan : Fine then.....c ya....

And gave her a good bye hug.....

Ridz : Bye....

And then she left from there.....

Armaan was just lost in his own world once again....but was interupted by his manager.....yes it is aryan....

Aryan : Sir lekin aaj shaam ko toh aapki meeting hai ???

Armaan : Cancel it.....(smiling to himself)

Saying this armaan left with his bodyguard in the hotel.....

Aryan just had to smile at armaan's answer.....

******FLASHBACK ENDS******

Guys really sorry that i didn't update the part in the afternoon.....cause i had to go to pick up my little cousin from his place.....n then after my school.....i hope you guys understand.....

And due to my hectic schedule of school n homework i am hardly getting time to think n update.....so if there are any mistakes.....my apology.....

I thought that in this part if i add some more emotional scenes than you guys would kill me !!!!!....so i thought of describing their past n their first meeting.....

Hope you guys liked it....

And one more question.....you want to see some flash backs in the future or not......if yes n then should i continue from this on only or different diffrent parts....cause i have a loads of thoughts about their past n the moments they spent together.....

So do tell me.....n do comment.....good or bad....yo're most welcomed.....

Love

Ria....

Edited by ria020594 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
that was a gr8 part
loved it
ridz is sooooooo dum did not realize that he was asking her out
anyway plz updat next part soon want to know what happen next
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyyy😊😊
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nice part😊
continue soon
thnx 4 pm



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Edited by luvkaranmadly - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey.....

Umm.....oh my god....i've updated such a long part....so now i think no one would think that this is a short one.....do anyone ??????

And pls comment guys.....

Love

Ria

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

hey ria

wow the part was great its nice that you dont added much of emotional and rona and all stuffs now
well loved that past parts
oh armaan a great businessman and he fall for riddhima at first sight ...⭐️ loved that
it was soo sweet he hold her from falling .oh this is there obvious first meet i suppose..😆
well loved that and yaa ofcourse wanna read more and more of flashbacks this gonmna be interesting asd to how they met and how they fall for each other and all
well i m glad you actually written a big part
hey will wait for your next update please make that soon
take care till then and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ria its ok sweetie .Take ur time honey study come first.
nice update ,their first meet was nice and he felt some thing for her in just his first meet ,cute.
of course we wanna all u have stored in ur mind .Does it matter which way it come out whether a flash back or some other way?????????????

thanks for pm
love
ritu

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