DOORIYAAN-An AR ff (part 10 page 29) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ria020594

Same here sanna....even when i thought about giving this name to my ff...i was singing this song in my mind only.....i just loe this song....but didn't like the movie actually...cant' understand the story only.....lolz.....

Love....

Ria

Hey

Heyy

Hey guys thanks for the comments...here goes the 3rd part...

RECAP :

Armaan : Ab se hum yahan par nahi rahenge....hum canada jaa rahe hai...okay....

The baby smiled....then they both got ready n went to the airport with aryan.....and departed for their flight to CANADA.....

PART 3

One year has passed away till armaan n riddhima seperated.....armaan now lives his life for only one person......it's his little son......Rehan

Hey guys here's the pic of Rehan :

(Awwweeeee chooooooo cuteeeeeee na !!!!!)

While riddhima is still all alone searching for a job that she could live by her own n not depnding upon shashank n padma.....

But armaan now lives with muskaan.....his best friend till now.....n they all share a great bond.....once muskaan went inside armaan's room to wake him up but she saw rehan playing on the bed n armaan still sleeping.....rehan was playing without any noise so that armaan would not wake up.....

Muski : Aare....rehan baby....aap uuth gaye.....

And took rehan in her hands....n kissed his cheek....

Muski : Toh ab aap apne dad ko bhi uthao na.....

Rehan : Naah.....

Muski : Kyun ? Chalo main aapke dad ko uthati hoon.....okay....

Rehan nods....

Muski : Armaan chalo utho....it's 8 in the morning.....aur tumhe office bhi toh jana hai.....

Armaan : Muski yaar sone de na.....

Muski : Kya armaan.....tum bhi na.....dekho aaj toh rehan bhi tumse pehle uuth gaya hai....aur tum ho ki uthane ka naam hi nahi le rahe......chalo ab utho.....

Armaan : No mujhe sona hai......

Muski : Armaan....

Armaan : Muski.....please ( sleepy tone )

Muski : Thik hai....tu nahi uthne wala na ?

Armaan : No.....

Muski : Fine then....

She puts rehan on the bed n takes the jusg full of water from the table n pours it on armaan.....and with armaan woke up with a jerk......

Armaan : Muski.....muski yeh tu kya kar rahi thi.....

Muski : Tujhe utha rahi thi......

Just then rehan starts to laugh out.....he was laughing uncontrolably.....armaan looked at rehan and then he looks at muskaan n then both muski and armaan start to laugh looking at rehaan......then armaan took rehan in his hands.....

Rehan : No........gila......

Armaan : Oh toh main gila hoon isiliye aap mujhe hug nahi karna chahte.....

Rehan nods.....

Armaan : Aisa thodi chalta hai....aapko mujhe good morning wala hug toh dena hi padega.....

And then armaan hugs rehan tightly......

Armaan : Love you bacha.....

Rehan : Lo....u....(baby language)

Muski : Muski loves you too baby.....

And she also comes forward n all of them hug together.....a family hug.....

Muski : Armaan.....you stink.....

Armaan : (naughty) Oh really.....

And he starts coming closer.....

Muski : Armaan just shut up.....(takes rehan in her hands) Aur jao jake naha (bath) lo......tab tak mein rehan to tyarr karti hoon.....

Armaan : Okay....

And then he goes into the bathroom n muski goes in her room to make rehan bath....after sometime armaan gets ready n comes in muskaan's room.....

Armaan : Hey muski tyarr ho gayi......

Before he could say anything he saw the room full of mess.....and muskaan totally tired n sitting on the bed and rehan playing in the room.....

Armaan : Muski ye sab kya hai......

Muski stood up with her eyes full of anger : Armaan......tu yeh mujhse puch raha hai.......dekh bohot ho gaya haan.....rehan ab bohot hi shaitan hota jaa raha hai.....

Armaan : (mumbles) Aakhir beta kiska hai.....

Muski : Kya.....kya bola tu.....ek toh teri aur rehan hi shaitani mein bardasht kar rahi hoon.....aur tu....tu hai ki.....

Armaan : Muski......(holds her from her shoulder) muski calm down.....itna gussa karna aacha nahi hota.....

Muski : Dekh tu phirse....

Armaan : Okay.....okay.....fine....mein rehan ko kapde pehna dunga.....okay.....

Muski : (calms down) Hmmmm......

And then she takes a look at the room which was a mess.....

Muski : Aur ye sab mujhe karna padega ?

Armaan moves a bit away from her n takes rehan in his hands....

Armaan : Haan......ab woh toh tumhe karna hi padega na....isme main tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta.....

And before muskaan could hit him with a cusion he ran out of the room......

Muskaan holds her head with her hands.....

Muski : Aare yaar.....mere room ki kya halat bana kar rakh di hai.....of oh !!!! Yeh dono mujhe pagal kar denge......

Then she starts picking up all the mess and putting them in their respective places.......

While here riddhima got up and went to the window to get the fresh air of the morning.....just then her phone rang....

Ridz : Hello....

Voice : Hey ridz....kaisi hai tu ?

Ridz : Hi nikki.....(sad) i am fine.....

Nikki : No ridz you're not fine.....

Ridz : Kya yaar....koi job hi nahi mil rahi.....main kya karu ?

Nikki : Ridz ek kaam kyun nahi karti yahan par aaja.....phir hum dono milke kuch sochenge.....

Ridz : Nikki......tu kaisi baat kar rahi hai....main waha kaise aa sakti hoon.....

Nikki : Flight mein.....i think so.....

Ridz : Nikki.....pls no joking.....

Nikki : Okay fine.....dekh abhi bhi yahi chahta hai ki tum yaha par aa jao.....and i am sure ki tumhe yaha par koi aachi si job mil jayegi.....

Ridz : Nikki.....lekin....

Nikki : no lekin vekin....tere paas visa hai na ?

Ridz : Hmm...

Nikki : Toh phir kya problem hai.....

Ridz : Lekin nikki tum samajne ki koshish toh karo....

Nikki : No ridz tum samajne ki koishish karo....aur mujhe kuch nahi sunnana......tum abhi hi ek ticket book karva lo.....aur kal ki hi flight mein yahan aa jao.....and yes tum CANADA aa rahi ho......that's final.....

Ridz tried to interupt between.....

Nikki : Okay.....bye bye bye.....mujhe phone kar dena.....main aur abhi tujhe lene airport aayenge okay....bye...

And she cuts the phone.....

Ridz : (thinks) Yeh nikki bhi na....ab main canada jake kya karungi.....kabhi bhi kisi ki baat nahi sunti hai....

And then she books a ticket for canada.....and starts packing her bag......

That's all !!!!!!!!!

Guys from today my school is starting so i think won't be able to update so soon.....i hope you guys understand cause i have so much homework you know......but still i will try.....

And ya you all comment haan....and silent readers just press the like button......

Love ya all.....

Ria

hey ria..........

oh so finally ridzi is gng to canada.lets see what happens now.

heyyyyyyyyyy😊



nice part😊
continue soon
thnx 4 pm
well ur story theme is quite similiar to tanha dil written by rucha........no offence.....😊




with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛😊
😊

Originally posted by: luvkaranmadly

heyyyyyyyyyy😊



nice part😊
continue soon
thnx 4 pm
well ur story theme is quite similiar to tanha dil written by rucha........no offence.....😊




with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛😊
😊

Hey...umm....actually when i started this ff i was not knowing that rucha also has a ff named tanha dil which also shares the same concept.....but then she told me that we both have same concepts....but still there is a difference....that you'll come to know when you'll read the further parts.....so for now just relax, go on reading n commenting.......okay......

Love

Ria

Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey...umm....actually when i started this ff i was not knowing that rucha also has a ff named tanha dil which also shares the same concept.....but then she told me that we both have same concepts....but still there is a difference....that you'll come to know when you'll read the further parts.....so for now just relax, go on reading n commenting.......okay......

Love

Ria

hey dear..........
i know thr will be something tht will make these two stories different but i just cant pin point it........
n dont think i was complaining or sought of.......was just tying to tell u .......hope u didnt mind it......
well 4 noe i m enjoying reading ........continue soon

awsome part ria
omg ridz is going to canada, thats gud!!!! omg rehan is shoo cute!!
cont soon