DOORIYAAN-An AR ff (part 10 page 29) - Page 8

Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey sanna thanks a lot...for finding out the mistake.....well i was in such a hurry hat i didn't realise that only....

And coming to the chemistry test......it was so bad.....😭......i created up a mess with the test.....it was the worst then the other tests i ever gave......😭😭😭😭

But thanks once again....

Love....

Ria

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic

HEY RIA

NICE PART

JUST READ ALL THE PARTS

LOVED THEM ALL

PLS CONTINUE SUPERSOON

LOVE

KAVYA

Hey Kavya

Thanks a lot....n i'll surely coninue soon....

Love

Ria

hey ria

Originally posted by: simi2

hey ria

the part was fabulous i loved that a lot

and armaan blushing oh that was the best and then he looking at her and her innocent falling for her more and more oh i just loved the flashback

and then nikki abhi talks to cheer up riddhima all that was the best oh man i loved this one soo much

please please please please do update the next part super soon

and yaa oh you had a bad chemistry test ...ohh sweety please don't feel sad for these test and all

please cheer up

will wait for your next update

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

Hey simi....

Thanks very much for loving the part....

Well....i would really thank you all guys.....cause only your sweet comments could make my day....

Yeah....it's true that i was a bit sad yesterday due to the test.....but you guys cheered me up with your comments....

Thanks....

Lova Ya

Ria...

Originally posted by: luvkaranmadly

oh see......

'So maam....what will you prefer for your breakfast


within some time riddhima got her lunch.....'

tht was funny.........dont mind dear .....okkkk
just found it fummy so told u........


nice part dear
continue soon
thnx 4 pm

with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey...Thanks for pointing it out....i really hadn't noticed it....well sanna also pointed a thing related to that only...

But well thanks....this show that you really read it with full concentration.....

Well while i was writing it i was starving....n it was actually my lunch time..... I think tht's the exact reason for admitting such a silly mistake.....

Love

Ria

Hey guys thanx for the comments....so here goes the 6th part....enjoy....

Recap :

Ridz : Guys.....look....i am really very lucky to have you both as my friends.....(getting emotional)

Armaan got up n saw rehaan sleeping with his small small fists near his face...n was looking like n angel....he had a fade smile on his face which armaan had noticed for the first time till now... rehaan was smiling showing his small cute deep dimple...he was smiling as if god was playing with him in his dreams....while armaan could just stare at him....such a small thing he is...so innocent....so cute....so adorable...that no one could ever imagine to ignore....he got a wide smile on his face....n he bent down n kissed rehaan's forehead....n hugged him with all his love...all his care n comfort....n rehaan just moved his fist a bit....n armaan cursed himself for breaking his sleep...but was assured when rehaan again became steady n closed his eyes.....he imediately took rehaan in his arms n got up whil rehaan still sleepy hugged him n his head clinged on armaan's shoulder...armaan went to the window....

He took in the fresh air....he closed his eyes to feel this fresh cool air.....he felt someting down in the corner of his heart that something is going to happen....something....something new....which he had never expected.....but then coming out from his thoughts he opened his eyes n looked at the small baby in his hand...he was looking so cute while sleeping....n armaan caressed his hair n patted his back lightly.....

Armaan " Bacha....good morning....dekho subah ho gayi...."

He said while kissing rehaan slopily which made rehaan giggle....

Armaan " Bacha aapko pata hai aaj daddy bahut khush hai.....pata nahi kyun....kya aapko pata hai ???

Rehaan nods with a no....

Armaan " Main bhi na....aapko kaise pata hoga...."

Rehaan "Daddy...." (in his cute baby language)

Armaan " Haan baby bolo...."

Rehaan " Reha....los yo...." (rehaan loves you)

Armaan could not stop himself from giggling out.....

Armaan "daddy loves you too..."

At this rehaan gave a wide cute smile showing his dimples....

Armaan " Ab chalo hum dono aaj jaldi se ready ho jate hai....isse pehle ki woh toofan express (muskaan) aa jaye....okay....

Rehaan giggled as if he understood each n every word said by armaan....

Then they both headed towards the bathroom....armaan really had to face many difficulties while makin rehaan bath....rehaan just loved bathing n playing with water.....n he played with the toys n everytime splashing water on armaan....as soon as armaan would try to apply soap on him he would hit armaan's hand n the soap would fall don....n armaan could catch it after so many tries....he was getting irriteted at first but soon began to like all this....how rehaan was lost in his own world....n how innocently he was playing with his toys.....n would pout when the soap bubble would burst on his touch....this really made armaan think over.....

Armaan made rehaan bath....only his mind knows how he was able to do this.....then he tried to take rehaan in in his hands.....but he didn't wanted to get out of the bathtub....

Armaan " Bacha ab chalo...."

Rehaan " Na...."

Armaan " Bacha...ab chalo bhi....aur waise bhi mujhe late ho raha hai..."

Rehaan " No...no...no...." He said hitting his hand in the water n splasing it on armaan's face....

Armaan " Agar aap abhi bathtub se bahar nahi aaye na toh daddy aap se baat nahi karenge aur aapke liye woh favorite toffees bhi nahi layenge...."

On hearing the word toffees rehaan's blue eyes sparkeled with joy...but as soon as he heard the word no his face poted.....

This didn't went unnoticed by armaan...n he had to smile at rehaan's funny but cute acts....

Armaan thought " Ab mujhe pata chala muskaan roz aise chilati kyun hai....bechari....well it was worth an experience....waise bhi jaisa baap waisa beta...." he chuckled to himself....

He took rehaan in his hands n went out in the room....n made rehaan sit on the bed while armaan rubbed his hair as they were wet....n then armaan got up n went to the closet to take out rehaan's clothes....

He took out a blue baby t-shirt n a black capri....as rehaan just loved it....as soon as rehaan saw that his blue eyes again sparkeled....n then armaan came n sat on the bed to make rehaan wear the clothes...

Armaan " Bacha....daddy bahi bure hai na ???"

Rehaan noded with a no n got up on his own on the bed n pulled armaan's cheeks.....

Rehaan " Chwwweeeettt...."

And he hugged armaan....armaan couldn't stop smiling....

Armaan " Ohhh....i love you so much baby....you know....sirf aap hi mujhse itna pyaarr karte ho....aur main kabhi aapko khudse....."

He bit his toungue as soon as he realised that he was getting emotional.....n he didn't wanted to spoil his mood as he was this happy after so many days....

And then he made rehaan ready n he himself also got ready with his white stripped shirt with a black tie n a black pant....

While muskaan just got up n came in armaan's room to wake mr.lazy....but to her astonishment the view in front of her was not the usual....armaan was combing his hair in front of the dressing table while rehaan was playing with a toy on the bed....n both of them were ready....perfectly ready.....

" Good morning muski...." Armaan said while arranging his tie.....n then came to muski who's mouth fell wide open on seeing all this...

Armaan " Muh toh bandh karo varna...."

Muski immediately closed her mouth....

Armaan " Well main yeh nahi kehta ki tumhari galati hai....actually you're seeing the unexpected....right ???"

Muski " ya....exactly...."

Armaan " Well that's because ki meri neend aaj jaldi hi uud gayi this toh socha ki aaj tumhari thodi si help kar doon....."

Muski " Wooww.....armaan....thanks yaar...."

Armaan " Waise...muski....tu itni shock kyun ho gayi thi ???"

Muski " Woh....pehle kabhi tum dono ko itni jaldi uthte hue nahi dekha na.....isliye...."

At this armaan started laughing out like anything.....while muski just stared at him...she had never seen him laughing like this from the day he had returned from mumbai....but she was quite happy for that too...as the old armaan is somewhat coming back to life.....

Muski " Armaan please...."

Armaan "Okay...okay....sorry....fine"

Armaan " Waise ek baat toh kehni padegi....hats off to you yaar...i mean rehaan nahane ke maaml mein kitna ziddi hai...."

Muski " Ab pata chala bachu....anyways thanks...."

Armaan " Okay...ab chalo mujhe toh bahut bhookh lag rahi hai aur phir office ke liye late bhi ho raha hai..."

He took rehaan in his hands n walked towards the dining tble.....took their breakfast n then left kissing rehaan n muski on their foreheads....

While driving also he was feeling something.....something which was deep down in the corner of his heart....he didn't knew what it actually was....so he decided to skip up that idea of thought n concentrate on his work....

While on the other side riddhima abhi n nikki reached their place n abhi took out riddhima's suitcases....n put them down....

Abhi " Okay...ab mein chalta hoon...."

Nikki " Hmm...."

Ridz " Kahan ??"

Abhi " Come on babes....you know na....sanjeevani..."

Rid " Ohhh...ya......work comes first....."

Abhi gave her a hug n then went to nikki n kissed on her forehead....he so wanted a goodbye kiss but thought that riddhima would feel awkward....nikki really was happy as abhi was so understanding.....n then he said bye n left from there.....

And ridz n nikki also took the suitcases n went into the house.....

Ridz " Nikki tu kyun abhi ke saath sanjeevani nahi gayi....after all you're also a doctor there..."

Nikki " Abhi ne hi mujhe aaj leave lene ko bola tha...."

Ridz " Hey....yaar....don't be so formal na...."

Nikki " What formal....ridz we r your friends n can't we even do that....."

And then nikki took riddhima to her new room from now onwards...while riddhima was fully astonished at the sight in front of her.....the walls were painted pure white....which was her favorite colour indeed...n pinkish n purple coloured curtain hanging down the windows.....n the most important n the beautiful thing was the picture of the threesome (abhi nikki n ridz in betweent them) together hanging on the wall just above her bed.....

Nikki "Pasand aaya ??"

Ridz " Ofcourse nikki....lekin ye sab kis liye...."

Nikki " Ridz....dekh phir se shuru mat ho jana okay...."

Ridz " Nikki...i love you...."

Nikki " Love you too..."

And she gave a side hug to riddhima....

And then they put the suitcases on the bag n unpacked them.....

Well guys that's for now....i know it's a short one....but sorry guys....was not having much time....i hope u all understand....

Today i was having a really bad mood as my little cousine has drenched me off with his little pranks....so i decided to make up my mind by updating n getting some comments from you guys.....

Hope you liked it....

Do comment....they give me a hard push to update.....

Love...

Ria