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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey that's not fair🥺 🥺🥺232 views n only 18 comments....😲 😲😲feeling very very very dissapointed....😭

hey dear dont worry............. u will get da comment soon.......... we just love ur ff
HAPPY JANMASHTMI
LOVE
SANNA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey that's not fair🥺 🥺🥺232 views n only 18 comments....😲 😲😲feeling very very very dissapointed....😭

hey dear
dont take this os bad coz some ppl like mw like to read and reread the ff so it s tells u everytime anyone opens ur ff so i came to ur ff so far like 10 time
and i have my own ff which has same problem
dont take it to ur heart
u just keep on writing ur ff
later they all will come and coment
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys i am back with the 2nd part....so here it goes :
PART-2
RECAP :
Ridz : Please di bas ek aur sawaal phir i promise main aapse koi aur questions nahi karungi...bas mujhe ye bata dijiye ki armaan kaha hai....


Anji : (stubborn) Ridz he is gone....

Ridz : Gone....where ?

Anji : Woh tujhe hamesha hamesha ke liye chod ke chala gaya hai.....

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Ridz : Chala gaya ?
Anji :haan ridzie woh chala gaya hai aur ab kabhi wapas nahi aayega....aur ab i think ki mujhe bhi chalna chahiye...tum apna khyal rakhna...okay...bye...
But riddhima didn't reply....she was left shocked by anji's word....
Ridz : Armaan tum mujhe chodke chale gaye just because ki.....(crying)maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha tum aise nikloge.....armaan i thought you loved me....but i think i was wrong...aaj tumne sabit kar hi diya ki sare mard ek jaise hi hote hai.....
And cries very bitterly thinking about her past n the moments she had spent with armaan.....while there is no one to console her....she was left all alone....the only thing that was with her was the pain,the sorrow,the lonliness with which she has to live her life now......
While here on the other side armaan came out of the hospital n there a man was waiting for him with his car....
Man : Sir kya hua ? Aap thik toh hai na ?
Armaan : Haan main thik hoon....aur ab mujhe airport le chalo....
Man : Airport ?????
Armaan : Haan airport...
Man : Par kyun sir...i mean...
Armaan : Aryan mujhe kuch nahi sunana.....let's go the airport right now......
Aryan : Okay sir as you say....driver airport chalo....
They all drove to the airport....
Armaan : Aryan book my tickets for canada....
Aryan : (didn't wanted to argue) Okay sir....
He went to the counter to ask for the tickets....and then again came back to armaan....
Aryan : Ummm.....sir....canada ke liye kal subah se pehle koi flight nahi jati hai.....
Armaan : Fine then hum kal subah hi canada ke liye ravana ho jayenge.....ab tum jao....
Aryan : But sir...aap ???
Armaan : Meri chinta mat karo......
Aryan : Aur ye BABY ????
( Guys you all were right the baby is there for armaan but there is no baby for riddhima....n i will reveal this secret in few parts only so go on reading..... )
Armaan : Baby bhi mere saath hi rahega....
Aryan : But sir i don't think baby ke liye ye atmosphere sahi rahega......i think hum sab ko hotel mein jake aaram karna chahiye.....kal subah hote hi hum sab canada ke liye ravana ho jayenge.....if it's okay for you ?
Armaan : (looks at the baby whos was in his hands ) Okay....
They all went to the hotel n armaan went to his room....the baby was in armaans hands holding him tight from his neck.....armaan tried to move him a bit and then make him lay on the bed but his hold was so tight that he could not do so....cause if he did so then the baby would wake up and he didn't want to break his sleep.....so he took away his shoes n layon the bed with the baby on his chest....he kissed the baby's forehead n then patted him for some time....while his mind was lost in some other thoughts.....
Armaan : Riddhima tumne aisa kyun kiya....agar ye sab na hua hota then we all three would be together.....hum sab ek family hote....but i think ab ye sab possible nahi hai....aur isiliye main humhare......no riddhima ab yeh sirf mere baby hai....ab tum iss pe se apna har ek haq kho chuki ho riddhima.....aur main kal hi MERE baby ko yahan se le ja raha hoon....iss desh se dur....aur TUM se dur....
Now he looks at the baby who was sleepingwith all his comforts in his hands....
Armaan : Aur bacha aap chinta mat karna hmm...aapke papa hai na aapke paas....woh aapko world ki sabhi khusiyaan denge....aur kabhi bhi aapko khudse juda nahi hone denge....okay....i love you bacha.....
The whole night he tried to sleep but was unable to do so...while the baby was not letting his father to leave him...he just remained hugging him....while armaan would also cover him up as if he is giving him protection....protection from the rest of the world......
In the morning :
Armaan got up and saw his baby lying besides him hugging him.....armaan broke from the hug and made the baby lay on the bed....and he just stared at the baby who was just in his own dreamy world not knowing the world around him....the baby was looking so cute n adorable while sleeping....that armaan got a smile on his face.....n thought about something.....but as soon he reralised what was he thinking he just left the thought with a jerk n came to his present life....took the baby in his hands....n went to the window....
Armaan : Aaj se sirf aap hi meri life ho aur aapke liye aapke daddy kuch bhi karne ke liye tyarr hai....(to himself) and i promise ki aaj ke baad mein kabhi bhi riddhima ke baare mein nahi sochunga.....nahi hi apni beti hui zindagi ke baare mein....aur sirf woh hi karunga jisse mere baby ko khusi mil sake....
Just then the baby moved his hand a little bit....Armaan patted his back....
Armaan : Good morning bacha....
The baby came out of his hug n looked at armaan with his blue seagreen eyes.....n gave a huge smile which could melt anyone.....
Armaan : Aap toh aaj bahut jaldi uth gaye.....aacha ab hum dono jaldi se bath le lete hai aur phir hum yahan se chale jayenge.....
The baby looked at armaan suprisongly....
Armaan : Acha toh ab aap janna chahte hai ki hum kaha jaa rahe hai....
The baby nodded with a yes....
Armaan : Ab se hum yahan par nahi rahenge....hum canada jaa rahe hai...okay....
The baby smiled....then they both got ready n went to the airport with aryan.....and departed for their flight to CANADA.....
Pppppppppphhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww
Oh man....my hands are really tired....i think this is a big part as compared to the 1st one....
but don't worry i will even post some parts bigger then this one.....but for nor it's enough haan....
Hope you all liked it.....
And ya thanks for the good good comments....i am waiting for another bunch of comments too.....
So do comment....they mean so much to me....
Love ya all....
Ria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ria......... awesome part.......... gr8 feelings..............
hmmmm so ar were havng a baby......... & only armaan knows they have a baby & ridz doesnt........ oh my god!!! armaan & the baby is off 2 canada...........
hey m eager wat will come next....... lovng ur ff all da more..............
plzzzzzzzz cont babes
& ya select a name 4 ur ff soon........ lolz............ i will try recomendng u sum.......... lolzzz
love
sanna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ria love this part .how Armaan protect his child.but wanna kill that bi**that scumbag.
She must have iron heart if she have normal one than can't snatch a child from a mother.She ruin 3 lives, A sweet family before its union,they r separated.Hope that child get love of AR both.Amen.--------------------


love.
ritu.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ria hi

well the part was very nice
owww armaan had there baby and riddhima think the baby is dead , soo this is a twist in it but how all that happened s still a mystry i m sure dr shashank must have too do somethink with that,,
well will wait for the secrets to reveil
as for now oh armaan going to canada taking his baby along with him .......noooo please dont let him goo ......hope he dont leave riddhima like that....hey please dont let him goo so easily .....
hope everythink get well soon and ar get back together as a family .,
well will wait for the next update
please doo update the part soon
and thanks for the pm
take care
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lolzzzzzzzzz i like ar together lolzzz
love ya loads
sanna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice story..pls add me to ur pm list...continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys...

Want to say something.....rather ask something.....

Guys in the next part i am going to introduce the baby.....so you all want it to be a girl or a boy.....and also suggest some titles.....haan ???

Do tell me....it's very important....okay....

Will continue in 1-2 days....

Love ya all.....

Ria

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey guys...

Want to say something.....rather ask something.....

Guys in the next part i am going to introduce the baby.....so you all want it to be a girl or a boy.....and also suggest some titles.....haan ???

Do tell me....it's very important....okay....

Will continue in 1-2 days....

Love ya all.....

Ria

oooooooooo a boy
like a very naughty cute shaitani boy lol
names; rehaan, raj, aman, aryan

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