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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 2- thanxs for your comments guys!!!

You see kripa rushing out of the bathroom with a towel wrapped around her body. She quickly grabs any pair of clothes as she isn't picky. She wears a baggy brown umbro top and blue baggy jeans. She quickly grabs a bobble and puts her wavy hair in a ponytail. She then gets a pair of brown trainers and slips them on to. You see her uncle making breakfast he looks up and frown, "ufff yeh ladki be na kab sudregi? " Kripa looks at his frowning face

"chaachu aap be na!! save the lecture for later I'm getting late already!!!"

"areee kripa beti khaana kaa khar to jao!" but it was too late she was already out the door rushing towards her black sports car. She drives fast on the streets of nanitaal ignoring all people giving her weird looks as she looks like a tomboy. She stops near a college and quickly rushes in not waiting for anything and anybody. She stops near a door wich says Mr Aanad. She frowns "oh sh*** ab mein kya excuse do" she walks in and soon regrets it she looks up to see a very angry professor. Kripa gulps oh sh*** aaj hi aana tha late (she thinks this).

"MISS SHARMA!!!!" "yes sir" "WHAT TIME DO YOU CALL THIS?" " urmm is that meant to be a trick question?" "JUS SIT DOWN AND I'LL TALK TO YOU IN DETENTION!!!" " kk sir" kripa went and sat next to a girl with fair skin, she had black hair and green eyes.

"kripa when are you going to learn you know it's your last day after you move but still you have to come late and ruin our plan to spend some time together!!!" she said In one breath.

"I know, I know, calm down mukti, I'll skip this detention and then, we will skip the rest of school and go to the coffee shop around the corner. I'm not coming back to this school, so I won't get a detention will I"

"Yeh but sti…" "no iffs no butts mukti, it's my last day yaar, just chill for atleast one day will you. And anyway you'll join me after a year won't you?" "yeh but sti…" "yeh well then it's set we skip school and go have some fun ok"

Sorry for the short update but I'm really busy as my sister's wedding is happening soon. I know it's a boring part but I'll make the next one interesting kk. Oh yeh the promo will happen in a few more parts.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
great part
kripa's charachter seems really intresting and very different i really liked the relationship between kripa and mukti.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Hey, omg a AK ff, yay!!!
Please do update soon, I miss AK.
No one writes about them anymore.
I am glad you did.
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Lovely part! Continue soon plzz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Chapter 3- guys plzz bare with me because it's my first attempt in writing a fanfic as u might have noticed so plzzz feel free to pm me if you got any ideas for this fanfic kk.

"kripaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!" "kya hai mukti?" kripa replied a little irritated. "can you please walk a little faster!!!! You walk as slow as…… guys!!!!!!! If I where someone els I would think you had sex change, I mean you walk like a guy u talk like a guy, for god's sake if it weren't for your face and hair they'd sure think you where a guy!!!!" " muktiiiiiiiii how many times do I have to tell I will never and I mean NEVER!!! Change my dress sense for anybody I repeat ANYBODY!!!" "yeh some kind of dress sense you've got!!!" "mukti look I don't want to get in a fight with my best friend on my last day with her ok!!!" they reach the coffee shop and sit down, they order their drinks from the waiter and sit in silence for a while until muki breakes the ice." Kripa?" "hmmm" tumne kabhi socha tha ke hum best friends banja yenge?" " actually to think about it, no, I didn't because we got into so many fights when we first met it was hard to keep count. It was only upto when that ugly buda professor sabsi (lol couldn't think of any other name uff I've got too much on my mind kk) put us for that stupid assignment together that we actually got to know each other!!!!!!!!!" "yeh I know I can remember that, because we got into a paint fight at my house, in my bedroom and my mum made us clean it all up!!!!!!!! We even had to scrub it off the carpet!!!!!!!!" "yeh it took us hours!!!!!!!!" the drinks still hadn't arrived so they decide to go for an ice-cream in the park. It was slowly starting to drizzle so they decided to go to kripa's house. "oh sh***!!!! Mukti I left my car at school!!!!!!" "oh no if mr aanad sees us we're dead!!!!!! Kripa common we gotta take the risk!!!!!!!!!" they sneak towards the school hoping not to bump into him and to their luck they didn't!!!!! "few next time we take the car with us kk!!!!!!!"

(I forgot to tell you guys that mukti's parents moved to Mumbai ,when she started high school leaving her by herself in the house, her brother had gone a year before they moved so kripa didn't get to meet him. That is also why she is going to join kripa after a year in Mumbai.) anyways guys I'll post the next part up later on in the day since here in the uk it's only 3 pm.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

ATTENTION GUYS!!!!!!!!!: i need more replies!!!!!! and i'm going to change the story abit so when kripa goes to meet nishaant prithvi and prem they are all 23 so they have left college kk. and mukti's brother is 18 so he's a year older then mukti kk.(this is according to the uk guys so don't get confused over the fact that you only stay in college for 2 years kk.) and kripa is also 18 a year older than mukti.that is why when mukti turns 18 after a year she joins kripa.

Edited by forever_always - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
nice story
waitin to read further
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Chapter 4- I WANT MORE COMMENTS GUYS!!!!!!!!!

Kripa and mukti have reached kripa's house they enter and see uncle in the kitchen.

"ummm chaachu kya bana raheho? Mmmm smells nice" kripa said whils entering the kitchen and hugging her uncle from behing.

" tuhare favourite aalo ke paranthe"

" FANTASTIC UNCLE!!!! I love you and my paranthe!!! Anyways I'll be upstairs when you need me ok I'm with mukti"

"oh mukti beta's here why didn't you tell me before! Where is she?!!!"

"I'm here uncle" mukti said whilst bending down to touch his feet

" jeeti raho beti (urmmm I think that's what you say if it's wronge feel free to edit it kk) ok ab tum oopar jau kripa ke saat varna vo naraaz ho jayengi " "ok uncle" and she leaves with kripa upstairs.

Kripa and mukti are sitting with music blasting through their ears whilst playing and having ramdem pillow fights and arguments. They eat and then they sit and watch a movie called kal ho na ho when suddenly mukti interrupts "kripa?"

"hmm"

" don't you thnk the title of this film is soo true?"

" what do you mean?"

"I mean that no one knows what tomorrow holds for us. Umm for example us, you will go tomorrow to Mumbai and I'll be here on my own but, I'll meet you at Mumbai in a year but you never know I might never be able to go to Mumbai and you might never get to meet me"

" yeh I guess that's what they mean when people say you should live life to the fullest, and that you should think about what's happening now, rather than what you are going to do tomorrow…. Anyways mukti lets stop this stupid emotional drama, like ekta kappor and her seriel kaisa yeh pyaar hai!!!!!!! I mean common how many times are you going to separate iqbal and neha look at them they like a Jodi made in hevan for god's sake ,yet still she has to separate them like a gazzilian times!!!!!!

"yeh! Anyways I better get going it's getting late"

"oh ok see yah…. In a year I guess"

"oh kripa!! if you keep reminding me that you're going I'll cry!!!!!!!"

"yeh and if you cry, I'll cry and we'll be flooding the house!!!!!!!!" mukti lets a tear drop from her eye and kripa see this and her eyes water too

"I'll miss you kripa, but you better keep in touch!!... EVERYDAY!!!!!! Or els I will have to personally (spelling???) come there to spank you!!!!!!!!"

"hehe yeh I'll mis you to and don't worry you won't be getting rid of me so soon!"

"Bye see ya!"

"yeh see ya too" they share a hug whilst crying for 5 minutes then mukti goes home. Then kripa starts to pack her stuff, after that she retires for bed as she has a long day tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
great part
mukti and kripa are really intresting charachters
cant wait 2 read the next partt
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
great part.
i cant wait till AK meet.
please update soon 😊

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