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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
intresting part....
waitng 4 AK 2 meet
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Chapter 5- sorry guys been busy with wedding prepirations (spelling) ak are going to meet after like 4-5 parts kk

The next morning you see kripa waking up early due to the excitement of meeting her brother. She gets up with a smile on her face and rushes to the bathroom to have a shower. She comes out with a towel around her body. She looks through her wardrobe for something nice to wear and decides on a pair of black baggy jeans and a white Umbro huddy (spelling?). She puts her beautifully wavy hair up into a high pony and slips into a pair of black and white trainers. She walks down the stairs to notice her uncle's disappointed look.

"Kripaaa!! Atleast today you could have dressed like a girl!"

"Please chaachu!! I don't want to fight. And yeh I don't have to dress up just because I'm going to meet my brother!! And I didn't want you to get your hopes up high!!!!!!!"

He sits down with a defeated look

"Chaachu?"

"Hmm"

"Are you angry?" he looks up to see her pouting face and shakes his head. She instantly smiles and hugs him. A few minutes later she feels something wet on her and looks down to see him crying.

"Awwwwww chaachu if you're going to cry I won't be able to leave and if I don't leave then I won't get to see bhai!!!!!!!!!"

"ok ok!!! But you know I'm going to miss you" kripa's eyes fill up hearing this

"I know I'm going to miss you to so don't worry!!!!!!" after a while they started eating

"kripa?"

"Hmm"

"Have you got nishaant's number?"

"oh sh***!!!!!!! That's what I forgot!!!!!!"

"mmm I thought so that's why I have already saved it onto your mobile"

"thanks chaachu"

"ok but quickly finish eating you're going to get late!!!!"

"one last bite….. mmm finished!!!!!!!" she gives her uncle a quick hug "bye miss you"

"miss you to beta"

"chaachu don't start again!!!!!!!" she gives him a quick kiss and rushes out

"huh paagal!!!!!"

Kripa finally reaches the airport and decides to call nishaant as she has only a few minutes leftfor the flight.

You see the other side of the country, a beautiful mansion 3 stories high with a gorgeous garden. It had flower all along the side and a fountain in the middle, all around was graas apart from around the fountain where the driveway was. You look inside the house to see all furniture of the latest fashion. We look around the house to find picture of 3 boys 2 of them looking very similar and 1 looking different you then stop at the door which reads NISHAANT'S ROOM. We enter the room to see a gigantic mess with clothes everywhere apart from in the centre where the bed is. We see a man lying down sleeping peacefully until he wakes up to the sound of ringing. We finally see it's Nishaant.

"uff itni subhe subhe kaun ho sakta hai?" he picks up the phone and hears the sound of a girl he smile listening to her voice.

"hi bhai!!!"

"hi kripa"

"bhaiya agg aapko yaad hai mughe pick up karne ki airport se?"

"oh sh***!!!! Sorry kripa main bhool gaya!! What time are you coming?"

"umm I think around 2, kk bye I've g2g!!!!!"

"ok main tumhe leyne aunga bye luv u"

"luv u 2" he disconnects the phone and checks the time "cr** I'm getting late I've got only 2 hours!!!" he quickly makes 2 phone calls and goes into the bathroom. He comes out with a towel around his waist. He looks toward a pile of clothes and slips on a grey le coq sportif grey t-shirt and blue jeans. He looks dashing and hot!!!!!! He combs his hair, grabs his jacket and heads outside. He parks his black spots car outside another mansion similar 2 his but only 2 stories high. He see 2 men and waves to them. They head his way. We see that they are the same ones from the pictures in nishaant's house. One of them is short but broad and is wearing blue jeans with a white fcuk t-shirt. You see the face an it's none other than Prithvi. Then you look at the guy next to him, he is wearing black jeans with a blue addidas t-shirt. That is none other than Prem!!!!!!! "common guys, kripa is going to kill me if I'm late!!!!"

"she probably isn't as bad as you think Nishaant"

"Prem once you meet her you'll see what she is like, she's got a really bad temper problem" They sit in the car and rush towards the airport. They stand there waiting until prithvi breaks the ice

"ermm Nishaant is that kripa?" Prithvi said whilst pointing at a very fat lady with a sari on heading there way!!!!!!!!!! Nishaant gulps "I hope not!!!!!!"

That's it guys I'm sorry for the late update I'll write the next one tomorrow as it is late. sorry !!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
great part
Nishaant's intro was really nice and the scene between kriapa and her chachu was really cute cant wait till kripa and nishaant meet.
the scenes between nishaant and kripa were really beautifully potrayed i liked the way u showed the emotional side of kripa.
Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Chapter 6- decided to put this part in aswell guys

Just then his phone rang "hello"

"ermm hi bhai errm what are you wearing?"

"oh hi kripa I'm wearing a grey t-shirt and blue jeans"

"ok well in that case turn around" she cut the phone and nishaant turns around and saw kripa smiling at him!!

" SURPRISE!!!!!" she went and hugged him

"kripa? You and tomboy?" he asked with a confused look

"oh no! not you as well bhai I'm sick of people saying that!!!!! Let's just go home!!!!!"

"ok well first meet these two my brother like best friends"

"hi I'm prithvi"

"and I'm prem"

"hi I'm ….."

"kripa we know" they said simultaneously. They laughed and headed home.

"kripa your room is on the third floor"

" the only one on the third floor" prem pointed out. " along with the bar, the 2nd swimming pool and I think that's about it"

" the second swimming pool where is the first?"

"in the outhouse"

"awwww thanks bhaiya!!!!!" she gave him a hug before running inside leaving a smiling nishaant behind.

She enters her bedroom to see everything brown and beige "just the way I like it!!!!!" she opens a door which leads to the bathroom which is blue and white it has a Jacuzzi and a shower, a toilet (of course!!!!!) and a sink. She goes back inside the room to see a balcony with a swing in the corner and a bench the other side. She then see a butten hidden behind the curtains. She presses it to reveal another room in which there is a small bed, a sofa and a memory wall in which there are pictures of her, mukti, prem, prithvi, nishaant and their parents. She see that it is decorated with heart shaped balloons and a banner saying 'WELCOME HOME KRIPA!!!!!'. She smiles when she sees a diary she opens it to reaveal a note,

Dear kripa aka the world's sweetest, cutest and best sister in the world.

Welcome home!!!!!!! Hope you like this room it's especially for you. Only you and I know about it so it's going to be a secret. Love your brother nishaant xx

She cries holding it with happiness!!!!

"so do you like it?" she turns around to see nishaant standing near thye entrance she can't help but run ito his arms and cry.

"I love you bhai"

"I love you to stupid, or do you think I would have spent ages making this room?" he pouts and she laughs seeing this. "always come here when you feel sad, lonely or you just want to be alone and I'll understand ok, but you always know that whenever you need someone I'll always be there for you."

"always?"

"always, I promise but you have to promise not to cry again ok"

"ok"

"well hurry up and get downstairs and eat "

"ok bye"

"bye"

Sorry for the short updae guys but it's like the middle of the night and I'm really tired lol I'll update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
nice part....
really liked nishant & Kripa's love... perfect bro & sis relationship....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Chapter 7- sorry for the late update been reeeeeeeeeeeally busy

Kripa came down in her tracksuit (obviously baggy). She was looking reeeeeeally cute!!!!!!! She sat down next to nishaant "mmmm what did you make bhai? Mmmm smells really good!!!"

"I didn't make it, our personal Chief did."

"Why? I thought you could cook cus' you live on your own and stuff!"

"Nishaant and cook!!!!!!!!!!" prithvi interrupted "NEVER!!!!!!!"

"He can't even make cereal without covering the whole kitchen floor!!!!!!!!!!" prem pointed out. kripa started laughing, prem and prithvi joined in.

N=nishaant p=prem pri=prithvi and k=kripa

n- HEY!!!!!!! Not fair stop ganging up on me!!!!!!

k- we…… weren't …………..ganging up ………….on you ………….we were…………. laughing at you!!!!!!!!!!!! Kripa said in between laughs

k- am I ……….right……..Prithvi bhaiyya??????

Pri- yeah…..you…..are, suddenly prithvi stopped laughing

Pri- wha…what did you just call me

k-Prithvi bhaiyyah why don't you like it?

Pri- starts to get emotional- no it's not that it's just that I have always wanted a small sister to call me bhaiyyah ever since nishaant got his first racki done by you, but I ended up getting this duffer standing next to me!!!!!!!!"

p-HEY!!!!!!!

k-awwwww prithvi bhaiyyah now that I've come I'll be the little sister you never had!!!!!! I love you bhai

pri- I love you to sis

kri- and you Nishaant bhai

n- love you to

kripa looked at a pouting prem she smiled

k- and last but not least I love you prem bhaiyyah. she kissed him on his cheek and gave him a hug he instantly smiled

n- ok now stop with the emotional drama the foods getting cold!!!!! And I don't like to reheat things!!!!!!

p-that's because you don't know how to reheat things, you know kripa last time he tried to reheat something he ended up………

he shut up as nishaant was giving him a cold glare

p-ermmmmmm never mind LET'S EAT!!!!!!!!!!

They all started eating intil prem suddenly remembered something

p-ermm kripa come over to our house today there's someone we'd like you to meet

k-who?

p-you'll find out soon!!!!

Preview: kripa meet's the person

sorry for the short update promise it will be longer next time and yeh PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REPLY!!!!! OR ELS THIS FANFIC ISN'T GONNA FINISH ANYTIME SOON!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part
i liked the way u showed kripa,prem and pritvi ganging up on nishant,and the scenes between kripa and the guys was really sweet.Cant wait 2 no who the guys want kripa 2 meet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i liked the way u showed kripa,prem and pritvi ganging up on nishant,and the scenes between kripa and the guys was really sweet.Cant wait 2 no who the guys want kripa 2 meet.

thanks for ur comments i'll try to write today for you cus nobody els seems interested in my fanfic
thanks for your support 😭!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
SORRY GUYS I MIGHT HAVE TO END THIS FANFIC BECAUSE OPF THE LACK OF COMMENTS AND SUPPORT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A COMMENT OR I WILL HAVE TO END HIS FANFIC AND RUIN IT FOR THE PEOPLE WHO ACTUALLY ENJOY THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!!!😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
nice part....
but do me a favour... whenever u update plz change the title stating that u r updating... it can b done by going on the 1st post of this fick & doing edit....
it is helpful 4 the readers....
continue soon

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