why me??? new ak fanfic important message pg 22!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi I'm new here an I'm a reeeeeeeally big ak fan so I'm gonna start a fanfic on them. If I don't get enough positive feedback I'm gonna have to stop writing it kk. Anyways here it goes.

Kripa Sharma- A rich fun luving tomboy. Is bubbly and cheerful and loves her only brother Nishaant. Parents died at the age of 4. Hence giving kripa no actual experience of a girl. Is moving to her brother's college (it's jus gonna be Melbourne college kk) after living with her uncle for 11 years. Is 18 years old. Her best friend was mukti khanna who like kripa's uncle tried to make kripa to change into a girl but failed miserably. She also has anger management problems.

Nishaant Sharma- A spoilt 23 year old who loves his only sister kripa. Is sole owner of a really big company name after his father Surya. Is looking forward to meeting his sister after 11 years. His best friends are Prem and Prithvi. Is a total flirt loves to date and dump a girlfriends everyday but believes he will find true love someday. The longest he's been in a relationship was for 21 hours!!! Used to go to Melbourne college. Is going to look after his parents business as this was their last wish before they died in a car crash 14 years ago. He loves basketball and is a pro like prem and prithvi. Is in the school team. Last year of University.

Prithvi Bose- Rich and spoilt but doesn't brag as much as Nishaant and prem. Is a flirt but has kept in a relationship with a girl for a month. But normally it only last a few days as he hates emptying his pockets out on his "girlfriend ". Is 23 years old going to the same college as prem and Nishaant. He loves basketball as he is a pro at it along with josh and prem he is in the basketball team. Parents died in bomb blast few years ago which also killed his unborn sister. Doesn't believe in love. Last year of university.

Prem Bose- Is Prithvi's twin but looks noting alike. Loves to brag about his money. Is a flirt and loves basketball. Is 23 years old and like prithvi is spoilt. He does believe in love and is waiting for the right girl but like his friends he doesn't show it. Last year of University.

Mukti khanna- Kripa's best friend. Loves to shop unlike krips. Has a brother who is coming back from America after 6 years to complete his studies.

Other character's will be revealed later on in the story but for now what do you think.

chapters:

chapter 1 ----- page 1

chapter 2 ----- page 2

chapter 3 ----- page 2

chapter 4 ----- page 3

chapter 5 ----- page 4

chapter 6 ----- page 4

chapter 7 ----- page 5

chapter 8 ----- page 5

chapter 9 ----- page 6

chapter 10 ----- page 7

chapter 11 ----- page 7

chapter 12 ----- page 8

chapter 13 ----- page 9

chapter 14 ----- page 10

chapter 15 ----- page 11

chapter 16 ----- page 13

chapter 17 ----- page 13

chapter 18 ----- page 14

chapter 19 ----- page 14

chapter 20 ----- page 15

chapter 21 ----- page 15

chapter 22 ----- page 16

chapter 23 ----- page 16

chapter 24 ----- page 17

chapter 25 ----- page 19

chapter 26 ----- page 20

chapter 27 ----- page 20

chapter 28 ----- page 21 chapter 29 ----- page 21
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Posted: 16 years ago
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please please please guys reply back!!!😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here's part 1 guys!!! hope you like it!!

Chapter 1- (sorry about my Hindi you see I aren't even Indian or Hindu so like I don't know how to say sum stuff kk so please mind my Hindi writing lol)

You see a white cottage with beautiful green gardens full of different colored flowers. It has a front patio which has a French touch to it making it all the more beautiful. It is a bright sunny morning and as you go through the house you see a maid opening up all the curtains in the house letting the light hit the beautifully decorated house. You see the French furniture adding a nice feel to the atmosphere and as you look toward the staircase you see the wall full of pictures of people. One of a pale green eyed girl with black hair along with another girl with brown chocolate eyes and brown silky hair and a fascinating smile. As you go up you see more pictures but this time of a dark man with grey hair and a beard well more like allot of stubble with a the same brown eyed beauty. Then you see a room filled with the same pictures of two girls scattered across the room you see the girl sleeping peacefully of a soft white mattress with the duvet comfortably around her body, her head buried in the velvet pillows as you look closer you see it is the same brown eyed beauty from before. Suddenly the alarm goes off waking her up from her sleep. Annoyed she reaches her arm and turns it off. We see it is getting very late and she is still not waking up. You see a man walking in, in his late 40's looking as angry as ever. You see him going into the bathroom and getting out 5 minutes later with a jug full of freezing cold water, he looks at her angrily and shouts,

"KRIPAAAAAAAAAA" you see the turning around and you finally get to see her face with her eyes still closed it is our kripa!!! " kab sudrogi tum? If you don't wake up now I will have to forcefully wake you up!!:@:@!!!"

"ufffff!! 5 mins chaachu pleeeeease!!!!..." but before she could even say anymore she jerked up feeling something wet and freezing touch her body!! " AHHHHHHH CHAACHUUUU!!!!! It isn't even late look at the time!!!!!!!!"

"oh I've seen the time alright it clearly says that you are late for college AND that it is your last day today!!!"

"What are you talking about?…." she quicky glances at the clock and then jerks back looking at the time " OH SH***!!!!! That professor Aanad isn't going to let me off today!!!!" She quickly rushes into the bathroom as she only has 5 mins left till lessons start!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part
charachter sketch sounds really intresting
cant wait 2 read the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#5
continue soona nd send me a pm when u do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
great start I just love ak
can't wait to read more
continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PROMO-

"arre Nishaant yaar is that buffolo with a sari on, heading our way your sister?" prithvi said whilst pointing at a oversized lady, with sari on making it horribly revealing. Nishaant gulps,
"i hope not..."
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys i aren't getting many replies it seems like i'm going to have to end this fanfic!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing promo
sounds really intresting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awesome start!!! Plzzzz continue soon!!! PM me when u update!!

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