Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thanks shaina dear...

I loved the way you portrayed Naina's grief and pain when she lost Rajveer!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏thanks again...

The song is very nice and just perfect for the situation!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is remembering all the beautiful moments spent with Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hmmm...even i'm getting nostalgic....

Everything is shattered and Naina has lost herslf in this!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She couldn't react as she was in a great shock!!!!!

Abhimanyu got her out of her shock made her cry by calling Raj and Navin a traitor!!!!!

Naina once attempted of commiting suicide but the lines written by Navin prevented her from doing so!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

I really luved this part. Gr8 gift 4 frndship day. I hav always felt that Raj died sumwat bcoz of Abhimanyu. He shud hav trusted his frnd n not his so-called rules n principles. Though I am not completely ryt but thats sumthing I hav always felt. Whenever I think of Raj I feel really angry at Abhimanyu. And u just voiced my thoughts in the lat portion. Totally awesum.

Pls continue soon.

Thanks sumaiya....
yeah...even i felt Abhimanyu was guilty.....
this fic just helped me to let my thoughts out...
Thanks....i'm really glad that i was able to voice your thoughts...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Oh why did u stop...??? 😕
This certainly brought tears to my eyes...!!!! 😭
I just want to say pls update the next part soon....!!!!

Thanks dhara....
I guess my efforts paid off...
coz...I believe that...if my emotional update was able to make u atleast bit sad....then i have won....
I'll update next part soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon

Thanks rituka....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

nice update.. but very sad... 😒
u hv described the condition of cadets mind so well...
Abhimanyu thinks he is responsible for two lovers seperation ..Raj's death...partially he is right...
pls update soon.... 😊

Thank you so much for the appreciation shona...😃
yeah...will update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good but sad too

plz continue soon

Thanks Prerna....😊
will update soon dear...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hiiiii Manali......😊hi priya!!!!😃

is baar IF mujh par kuch jyada hi meherbaan hai😛...tabhi yeh page open hone me mujhe jyada tym nahin laga😛. Arey waah! balle balle!! mithaayiyaan baaton....sach mein yeh kisi miracle se kam nahi hai!!😆
aur maine bina kisi rok tok k padh liya...aur ab hai...comments karne ki bari......😃chalo chalo jaldi karo....
ek min... ek toh tum serious ud post karti ho toh main bhi toh serious comments hi dungi na...!!! no comedy...ok...😊ok..maam...😉
sach kahun...toh yeh tha toh is fic ka first part...par suruwat jabardast hui hai yaar...!!! i really luved dis part...too much...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thank you thank you thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much....😃
tumne frndship day par ise ud kiya tha...aur doston k emotions ko baht achhe se describe bhi kiya hai...!!!yaar hum RN fans k liye baht hi beautiful gift hai yeh...!!! Thanxxx a lot...😃welcome sweetie...😃
naina ki soch...sirf vohin par...!!! apne Rajveer Sir...vohin se us ki soch suru bhi hoti hai aur khatam bhi...!!! 👏
pata nahin is fic ki writer kab us k chehre par mushkurahat layegi...😡he he he.....jaldi hi...😉
huda ki soch naina k liye👏...alekh ki soch naina k liye👏...Abhi ka guilt...apne dost ki tabahi k liye👏...Abhi ka guilt...Naina ko us k pyar se alag karne k liye👏...Abhi ka observation...Raj aur naina k rishte ko le kar👏...!!! just awesome dear...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
kahin na kahin main bhi Abhimanyu ko hi Rajveer ki tabahi ka jimmedar manti hun. us k so-called principle ki wajah se yeh sab kuch hua tha. kahni na kahin voh jealous tha Raj se...yeh baat bhi zahir hoti thi...LRL me...!!! aur yahan par tum ne us ka confession bhi rakha hai...!!! 👏haan...kahin na kahin se main mera opinion voice karna chahti thi..."Luv happna...." mein toh chance nahi mila....toh yaha pe chance pe dance kar liya....
par agar reel lyf se nikal kar Real lyf aa jayain..toh sari galati RAJEEV ki hai...!!! agar voh serial chodne wala na hota toh...toh sayad sab kuch thik hi hota.😡 Point to be noted my lord! bilkul sahi kaha tune!😆
do boond anshun chalke in ankhon me😭...wajah sirf tumhara yeh ud tha yaar😭...!!! kuch purani yaadon ko tum phir se mere ankhon k samne le aayi.😭 Sachchi??? thank you....it's a biggest appreciation for an emotional update....
awesome ud.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Thanks sweetie...😃
plz cont soon. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Wonderful yaar,👏 👏 👏thanks dear...😃
i just loved the way u portrayed Abhi's mind n his feelings. The main reason behind his behavior with Raj. I knew from start that he was jealous of Raj n y it was clear too because v know how much importance Raj used to have with his cadets not Abhi. I wanted to kill Abhi right than.
same here...
I can never forgive Abhi because only of him my Raj is not in Naina's world anymore but i know soon he would be back for his Naina. He would love Naina more n more. Naina is still lost n only Alekh is the person who can understand her very well n give her all support.😭 😭 😭 Though all are geniuenly concern about her but Alekh is still special.
update soon n i am really sorry for being so late.
it's ok dear ...no probs....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: varshita

Abhi deserves this that's y i hate him the most. Us ki hi vajah se aaj saare cadets ne Raj ko kho diya aur ab Naina ka ye haal hai ki us ko samhaalna bhi mushkil ho gaya hai, Naina ko bus Alekh hi samajh paa raha hai aur ye hi reason hai ki meri nafrat humesha us k saath hai.

Brilliant dear, continue asap.

yeah...Abhi deserve it!
thanks for liking the update dear....
will update soon...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

the update was very emotional.

I wish that abhi would have trusted raj...it is important to do ones duty but he also had a duty of friendship towards raj.
Alekh is the only one who understands naina completely aur who hi naina ko sambhal sakta hai.
update was very nice..please continue soon

Thanks a ton for liking the update dear....
yeah....will update soon...

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