Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01)

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Oh why did u stop...??? 😕
This certainly brought tears to my eyes...!!!! 😭
I just want to say pls update the next part soon....!!!!

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

nice update.. but very sad... 😒
u hv described the condition of cadets mind so well...
Abhimanyu thinks he is responsible for two lovers seperation ..Raj's death...partially he is right...
pls update soon.... 😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

that was really good but sad too

plz continue soon

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

It's wonderful update dear👏.U beautifully shown condition of every cadets and abhi sir's .It's too good.But, now,when abhi realises his mistakes,It's too late.

Superb update dear.Post next part soon dear.

Thank you sooooo much dear😊

Thanks for liking the narration of their present state....

yeah....it's late when Abhi realises his mistake....but it's good if he repents...😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Hiiiii Manali......😊

is baar IF mujh par kuch jyada hi meherbaan hai😛...tabhi yeh page open hone me mujhe jyada tym nahin laga😛. aur maine bina kisi rok tok k padh liya...aur ab hai...comments karne ki bari......😃

ek min... ek toh tum serious ud post karti ho toh main bhi toh serious comments hi dungi na...!!! no comedy...ok...😊

sach kahun...toh yeh tha toh is fic ka first part...par suruwat jabardast hui hai yaar...!!! i really luved dis part...too much...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

tumne frndship day par ise ud kiya tha...aur doston k emotions ko baht achhe se describe bhi kiya hai...!!!yaar hum RN fans k liye baht hi beautiful gift hai yeh...!!! Thanxxx a lot...😃

naina ki soch...sirf vohin par...!!! apne Rajveer Sir...vohin se us ki soch suru bhi hoti hai aur khatam bhi...!!! 👏

pata nahin is fic ki writer kab us k chehre par mushkurahat layegi...😡

huda ki soch naina k liye👏...alekh ki soch naina k liye👏...Abhi ka guilt...apne dost ki tabahi k liye👏...Abhi ka guilt...Naina ko us k pyar se alag karne k liye👏...Abhi ka observation...Raj aur naina k rishte ko le kar👏...!!! just awesome dear...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

kahin na kahin main bhi Abhimanyu ko hi Rajveer ki tabahi ka jimmedar manti hun. us k so-called principle ki wajah se yeh sab kuch hua tha. kahni na kahin voh jealous tha Raj se...yeh baat bhi zahir hoti thi...LRL me...!!! aur yahan par tum ne us ka confession bhi rakha hai...!!! 👏

par agar reel lyf se nikal kar Real lyf aa jayain..toh sari galati RAJEEV ki hai...!!! agar voh serial chodne wala na hota toh...toh sayad sab kuch thik hi hota.😡

do boond anshun chalke in ankhon me😭...wajah sirf tumhara yeh ud tha yaar😭...!!! kuch purani yaadon ko tum phir se mere ankhon k samne le aayi.😭

awesome ud.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

plz cont soon. 😃

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Wonderful yaar,👏 👏 👏
i just loved the way u portrayed Abhi's mind n his feelings. The main reason behind his behavior with Raj. I knew from start that he was jealous of Raj n y it was clear too because v know how much importance Raj used to have with his cadets not Abhi. I wanted to kill Abhi right than.
I can never forgive Abhi because only of him my Raj is not in Naina's world anymore but i know soon he would be back for his Naina. He would love Naina more n more. Naina is still lost n only Alekh is the person who can understand her very well n give her all support.😭 😭 😭 Though all are geniuenly concern about her but Alekh is still special.
update soon n i am really sorry for being so late.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Abhi deserves this that's y i hate him the most. Us ki hi vajah se aaj saare cadets ne Raj ko kho diya aur ab Naina ka ye haal hai ki us ko samhaalna bhi mushkil ho gaya hai, Naina ko bus Alekh hi samajh paa raha hai aur ye hi reason hai ki meri nafrat humesha us k saath hai.

Brilliant dear, continue asap.

Edited by varshita - 15 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: manatated

Thank you sooooo much dear😊

Thanks for liking the narration of their present state....

yeah....it's late when Abhi realises his mistake....but it's good if he repents...😊

Welcome dear😳.

Yes,it's too late for Abhi when he realises.But, u said right, if he repents, then its' good😳😊.