Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
yaaar rulaaogi kya.............😭
beautifully written.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Wonderful part...very emotional...i couldn't stop my own tears while reading it...you have described everyone's pain very nicely....it was a tribute to rajveer by his cadets
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Jay maata dii 😊
mata rani ki daya se yeh page open ho gaya...mujhe rulane k liye......😭
yaar...ud soon is ka matlab yeh hai kya ki tum rulaogi...sab ko...??? kitna emotional ud tha tumhe pata hai...???😭
main jyada serious nahin hoti...par haan...Raj ka voh jeep scene mujhe hamesh emotional kar deta hai...!!! aur tum ne Huda, alekh, naina sab k emotion ko itne bakhubi se likha hai ki i m just speechless...!!! 😭 πŸ‘ 😭 πŸ‘ 😭 πŸ‘
naina k emotions bilkul mere emotion se match karte hain... heπŸ˜†...heπŸ˜†...he...πŸ˜† sayad isliye kyoun ki main baht hi jyada attached thi is serial se...aur aaj bhi hun...😭 😭 😭😭 😭😭 !!!
tumhe toh pata hi hai main zindagi me baht kam baar serious hui hun...!!! pahli baar tab serious hui thi jab maine finally yeh faisla liya tha ki main Earth me hi paida hongi...varna jarur main kisi aur planet me paida hoti...!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
by d way...main point is ...k ab jab main jyada serious nahin hoti hun toh tumhare dono fics k uds mujhe serious kar dete hain...!!! aur haan...Dhara bilkul sahi kahti hai ki font size bada kar k kah diya ki yeh hai long ud...!!!
by d way...very beautiful & emotional ud.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
cont soon.
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
wonderful part....
u described everyone's emotions so well..!!! "yaadein"... but now this "yaadein" hi dard de rahi hai naina ko..!!!
u hv described her pain so well... she can never forget her rajveer sir..!!! nor the other cadets..!!!
very emotional part...!!!! πŸ˜’
waiting for the next update.!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Nice part 2 yaar but bahut senti tha yaar.
Par ek baat ki khaas kar k tareef karna chahoongi tumhare likhne me ki jis tarah se tum ne jis tarah se Yaadein song me sab ko ek saath liya hai that's really beautiful n senti way.
Sab k sab Raj aur us k saath bitaye hue palon ko yaad kar rahein hain jab Raj ne un ka saath diya tha aur sach me bahut miss kar rahein hain us ko. Raj ka haal sab se jyada kharab hai us me.
update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

It's wonderful part. Thanks dear...

It's too emotional part.When I read this part I was crying. Thank u so much dear...it is the biggest appreciation to a writer....even i was emotional while writing this...😊
U have talent dear in writing.Very good. Thanks a ton...parr taarif kuch zyaada nai ho rahi?πŸ˜‰
They all shared a very good relation with raj and they all miss him a lot and u wrote their emotion very well.Keep it up dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh...it was wonderful. Full of emotions n 'Yaadein' of Raj. I cud feel each n every scene reeling in front of my eyes. Specially when I remembered the de-ranking scene....it moistened my eyes.....I just cant take in that scene. U described everything so beautifully......each n every1's memory attached to Raj.....I luved it thoroughly.

Pls continue soon.

Thanks sumi dear(hope i can call u thatπŸ˜‰ aur mera naam mai tumhe pm kar doongiπŸ˜›)
Thanks a ton for 'feeling' the update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Very sad part...!!!😭
😭The atmoshpere is sad..😭.the song is sad...😭 and obviosly all the characters are sad...!!! 🀒
Sab kuch happy karne ke liye...update soon...!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
πŸ˜›And pls dont call this long...!!! 😑 U writers are very smart...font size large karke keh dete ho long update...!!!

Haa haa haaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
so dhara maam is angry! hmmm...
maam ab likhne waale ko toh looooooong hi lagta hai naa update?
i'll update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thanks dear...

The cadets are now returning to their second home KMA!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...

The jungle and the night was very well described!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanks again...

Pooja is resting her head on Ali's shoulder!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hmm...ab itna blush mat karo jaise tumhe pata hi nahi ki aisa hone waala hai!

Sahi kaha that Ali understood her the most and handled her temperment very well!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Huda Sameera ko comfort karte huye bhi Naina ko dekh raha hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Ab woh ussse chahta hai naa...πŸ˜•

Ab toh sudhar jaaye yeh abhi bhi Naina ke peeche pada hai!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Huda hai...itne jaldi kaise sudhrega...

Yudi is worried for Aalekh and Huda as they are injured but is now calm as they are alright!!!!!

Naina is still lost and only Aalekh can understand her and give her all the support!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊They are best friends! and more like bro-sis....

He knew that his grief of losing Rajveer Sir is nothing in front of Naina's!!!!!!

Aalekh is patting Naina's head affectionately!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

But he knew that nothing in the world is going to soothe her except Raj who is the reason of Naina's grief!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Aalekh knows just as he always knew everything!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊haan...Aalekh baba ko sab pata hota hai....

Abhimanyu is observing Naina and understood that somewhere he is responsible for her state!!!!!

I loved the way you portrayed Abhimanyu's mind and his feelings!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thanku thank u

Abhimanyu knew that Naina hates him and will never forgive him!!!!!! aur nahi toh kya? main toh nahi karungi atleast...

The main reason for his behaviour with Raj was jealousy!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

I knew from the start that he was jealous of Raj as he was so popular with the cadets and not Abhimanyu!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Abhimanyu hi Raj ke tabahi ka zimmedar hai!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Uske so-called principles ki wajah se yeh sab kuch huya!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 Thanks for agreeing with me.

Finally Abhimanyu is realizing the reasons for his jealousy!!!!!! πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

He is right that Raj was closer to Naina even in hatred than him!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He finally realized that Naina loved Raj and he felt guilty of separating two lovers!!!!!

I can never forgive Abhimanyu kyunki sirf uski wajah se Raj is not in Naina's world anymore!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭hmmm....parr sabse badi galati Rajeev ki hai ki usne serial chodi😑

But I am sure soon Raj will be back for his Naina and love her more and more!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ussi liye toh mai hoon...πŸ˜›par dekhte hai ki kitna late karta hai woh apne appearance main...πŸ˜›


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Posted: 15 years ago
hii manali.. wonderful fic sweetie.. i am unable to say anything.. am speechless.. u know am crying after readind the last part😭..

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