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Posted: 15 years ago
my reply to you for both the updts....

superb!!!!mindblowing!!!!fantablous!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

loved d way in the first1 cadets celebrated her birthday ...almost leaving naina in shock.....👏😊

den the letter of hope for naina as her wishes from rajveer.....
den the coming of bunty and bringing ray of hope.....😊

all was brilliant ...simply loving d way ur taking ahead dis fic....👏👏👏👏

now for second part....

loved it d way u began with d devil part of lala coming and letting his desire known to all ...

BC's health going down...

den gunny and cadets chalk out plan...👏

den gunny and naina making plan and involving BC too.....👏👏

everything was perfect......simply njoying d way ur bringing out naina's briiance and showing strength of cadets ......toooo goood...also d dialogues wer awesome..👏👏👏👏👏.

in all superb updt....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear

The update was really amazing.....I read it after a long time

But I don't know why anything related to LRL seems so vacant without the real stunner....though you've tried n succeeded brilliantly in en-capturing the essence well

But there is always a hitch.

I loved Gunny's convo with Naina...n the way they tried to increase KMA's admission rate. The amazing Six really

Do update soon.

All the love😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Doc😃

sorry for d late....😃!!! maine tum se kaha tha ki main kal raat ko hi kar dunga😛...par kar nahi paya...prob yeh thi ki mujhe candel light dinner par jana pada...😳!!! ab naraz mat hona...tum soch rahi hogi ki main tumhare hote hue kisi aur k sath kaise candel light dinner k liye ja sakta hun...😳!!! ab voh toh meri majburi thi...kya karun...😃??? current chala gaya tha...aur mujhe majburan apni dinner candel jala kar karna pada...😆!!! ab naraz mat hona plz...tumhara udaas sa chehra dekhta hun toh...mera dil dhadkna band ho jata hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
ok...ab tumhare ud par aate hain...!!! sach kahun toh mujhe tum se yeh umeed nahi thi...matlab doc aur police ka kaam toh yehi hota hai na ki hamesha last me pahunchte hain...!!! par tum toh baht fast nikli...aur itni jaldi ud bhi kar diya...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
ab aate hain tumhare aaj k vishya par...jis ne ki mujhe baht PRABHAVEET kiya hai...!!! itna PRABHAVEET kiya hai ki...main sirf itna hi kah sakta hun ki 'mujhe tum par GARV hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃!!! voh SALMAN KHAN aur SHILPA SHETTY ka GARV nahi...yeh hum jaise aam logon k GARV ki baat karr raha hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
simple word me kaha jaye...jo ki sab k samajh me aaye toh yeh UD ek damm...AWESOME....SUPERBB aur MINDBLOWING tha...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! aur sach kahun toh is UD ka size bhi mujhe kafi hadh tak thik hi laga....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
ek baat ki khushi hai yeh jaan kar hui ki tum bhi RAJ ko miss karr rahi ho...tabhi tumhe use lane ki jaldi hai...!!! ab Raj ko maine is UD me bhi miss kiya...par mujhe laga ki ab Delhi jyada dur nahi hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
yeh ud sach me baht khubsurat tha...dil khush ho gaya...samne hoti toh hugs milte...phir bhi itne dur se sirf emoticon ki post karr sakta hun...accept karr lena...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
naina ko tumne kitna mature dikhya hai...varna LRL me toh naina ko ek aisi ziddi ladki ka character dikhya gaya tha...jo sirf zidd se kaam karti hai...sochti kuch bhi nahi hai...!!! par yahan par naina ka pura character badala hua hai...i loved dis naina...!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
yeh Lala k kya kahne...!!! vaise us ka bhi koi kasur nahi hai...villan hai bhai...ab aise gande harkat karega...tabhi toh us ki peetai hogi na...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!! koi baat nahi ek baar hamare RAJ ko aa jane do...voh aur us k fauj mil kar LALA ko gana gana sikha denge...taki hamesa LALA apna hi naam gungunata rahega..."LA>>>LA>>>LA>>>LA"
aur phir sare cadets ne jis tarah se civilians ko motivate kiya...naina ne jiss tarah se us bachhi ko bachaya...aur us ka baad ka us ka voh speech....sab kuch itna achha tha ki kya batayun....!!! simply gr88888888888888...akhir rajveer ki protege hai...asar toh rahega hi...par yeh taiyaal tumhare liye hai...kyoun ki tum is ki haqdaar ho👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
shalini aur bakiyoun ne sahi kiya naina k sath...!!! vaise bhi voh kahan kisi ki baat maanti hai...voh toh bass ek hi insaan ki har ek baat maanti thi aur voh hai RAJVEER...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
ab LALA apni chaal khel raha hai...!!! par humain yakeen hai ki kisi ko kuch nahi hoga...!!! yakeen Raj par ya naina par nahi...balki tum par hai...!!! kyoun ki Raj ko toh tumne kahin chupa rakha hai...aur naina toh chali use dhundhne...ab bacha koun...tumhi na...??? toh phir hum bharosha karen toh kis par kare...??? hamare paas toh tumhare alwa aur koi option bhi nahi hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
gunny ko bhi pata chal gaya ki naina aur raj ka rishta vebicol ki tarah majbut hai...tutega nahi....😃!!! gunny aur naina ka plan...jis ki wajah se BC bhi aa gaya maidan me....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
flashback me naina aur Tau jee ki baat baht badhiya thi...!!! matlab ek damm superbbbbbb....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 !!! abhimanyu bhi naina ki help karr raha hai...par naina us par trust nahi karti...yeh sahi hai...lagta hai use bhi allergy hai Abhi se....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
is ud k sare scenes baht achhe the...naina k scenes...BC ka...gunny aur baki sabhi ka....!!! kisi ek scene ki tarif karna mushkil hai....pura ka pura ud itne achhi tarah se likha gaya tha aur sab k emotions aur sare scenes itne achhe se describe kiye gaye the ki...sirf achha ya baht achha kahna na-insafi hoga...!!! aur hum SHER hai...na-insafi kabhi bardast nahi kar sakte...!!! itna hi kah sakta hun ki...LRL me raj k gayab hone k baad agar yeh sab dikhya gaya hota toh hum me se koi bhi fic nahi likh raha hota...!!! kisi ko TV se furshat hi nahi milti....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
ab mujhe pata hai ki Raj baht jaldi aa jayega...!!! naina use la kar rahegi...!!! main bass raj k bare me naina se itna hi kah sakta hun...'bahki hawa sa tha voh...udti patang sa tha voh...kahan gaya use JALDI dhundho"😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
lo ho gaya aap ka comment...ab toh khush ho na...!!! ab next ud jaldi se post karo...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
tumhara......
Phunsukh Wangdoo😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ( honth ghuma...siti baja...siti baja k bol...Mana "aaalll izzzz wellllll")😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mana....
Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 wonderful 👏 👏 👏 👏 superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 part
Ye lala se hum expect hi kya kar sakte hain ...badha aaya KMA ko band karwane..dekho kaun kehraha hain naveen ko traitor ..aur wo apne aap ko samajtha kya hain .. .....ek desh bakht...aur wo stupid sa condition ...i hate him so much...ab main uske bare main baat karke meri time waste nahin karungi... Aanedo Meri raj ko wo usa wo haal karega ki mujhe wo dekhke badha maza ayega...Raj ke liye kitna kaam padha hain... kitne logon ko band bhajana haina
our super six academy ko band hone se rokne ki koshish kar rahe hain ..n gunny also supported them ...aur hamara shalini aur suriji to hain hi cadets ko help karne ke liye.. ye abhimayu ne kya sochkar naina se baat karne ki koshish ki.... that naina will ask him to help in this situation ....bahut accha kiya naina usse baatein bhi nhain ki aur na koi help maagne ke liye uske pass gayi..uske sath aise hi karni chahiye
I liked the the cafe scene where Ali alekh n yudi ne sab ko inspire kiya.....very beautifully written dear 👏 👏 👏 👏
Loved the way how Naina saved that girl ...awesome scene yaar👏 👏 👏
Naina pe attack ..wo to accha hua gunny time pe aagaya ... gunny n nainas scene is fabulous..n gunny calling Naina partner.... is so nice
Ye delhi main kya hua tha...Naina itni silent kyun hogayi thi...batade Mana...Raj ke bare main kuch pata chala kya naina ko...sweety pie raj delhi main hain kya ????
Naina ko BC ne jhat se pehchanliya .....n he is sounding so low.. when naina asked him about rajveer n when he took long time to reply...main sochrahi thi ye BC itna soch kya raha hain ..thank God finally muh khola aur kaha nahin in firm voice
Now naina got BC support also ...too gud
Mana ....i loved the whole update so much yaar...tune itna beautifully likha hain tumhari writtng skills ko main jitna praise karun wo kam hi hoga...
Ab jaldi se continue kar .....aur raj ko bring back sooooon
maine bahut late comment ki ..iske liye main sorry bolungi to tu kahegi .. ... ab to ye teri aadat hogayi na late comment karna aur fir sorry kehna 😆 😆 😆 😆 fir bhi chollyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 12:-

The start was awesome with naina's belief that raj will return to her. Yes, she was right. Raj will fulfil his promise in any situation.

That Nair is so rude, kabhi nahin sudhrega, bechari naina ko phir se punishment de di, ek baar raj ko vaapis aane do, dekhna iski halat kharab akr dega wo. Nahin to mein hun na, ES me kar dungi aur mere pass to ek solid reason bhi hai na.

Ali aur pooja ka roka ho gaya....its too gud. Aur ali ne to ab sharmana bhi kum kar diya, chalo acha hai......but the best part is naina ne in dono ko milwa hi diya, ab wo raj se itna pyaar karti hai to aisa karti hi na, ek pyaar karne wala hi unke pyaar aur uski problem ko samajh sakta hai. Naina ne ali aur pooja ke ghar walon ko phone kar ke sab kuch bata diya aur ache se samjhaya bhi, issiliye wo man gaye aur hamari punjaban aur usool bahi ek ho hi gaye.

Pooja aur ali sahi the par jo naina ne kaha, usse padh kar mujhe phir se rona aa gaya, usne sach kaha ki aaj wo apne pyaar se door hai isliye wo chahti hai ki pooja aur ali mil jaye, aur finally unki engagement ho hi gayi.

Tumne aalekh aur Neelu ko bhi nahin chodha, I am feeling bad for her and she was blaming Aalekh for all. Aur naina ne yahan bhi do pyaar karne walon ki madad ki. Naina ne bahut hi ache se Neelu ko sambhala aur yeh bataya ki agar Neelu ne kisi ko khoya hai to aalekh ne bhi apne farishte ko khoya hai, jiske liye wo bahut kuch karna chahta tha. Aakhir un dono ke beech ki sari problems door ho hi gaye aur wo dono bhi mil gaye.

Naina ne yudi ko bhi uske pyaar ko samajhne mein koshish ki, dekho doc, ab naina ne itne pyaar karne walon ko milaya hai an tum raj naina ko bhi mila do na please.

Ab sab friends naina ko cheer karna chahte hain. Ab naina ka birthday aa raha hai to uske friends kuch na kuch to karenge hi, m sure for it.

Naina roz raat ko rajveer ke room ke bahar ja kar uski wait karti hai, thats so touching. Raj ke room pe lock dekh kar hi usse rona aa gaya, its so emotional. Wo roz raat ko wahan aati hai, roz wo lock dekh akr uski umeeden tut jati hain,...........mana tunhe mujhe rulane ki than rakhi hai kya?

She used to draw a line for counting the days she came there and left with a disappointment. I just loved the way u have expressed everything, tears are coming out of my eyes also............The lines really match Naina's condition and I loved that one. Even, shalini used to come there. She wipe her tears and left from there.

The whole part was emotional yaar, please kabhi to mujhe hasa de

Hamesha rulati hi rehti hai

Aur me YM ki baat nahin kar rahi, mein updates ki baat kar rahi hun..........

Take care, ab mein baki 2 parts pe bhi comment kar du na

Luv Preet

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 13: -

Naina to dar gayi pooja ko uske bed par na dekh ke, par usse thodhi na pata ahi ki yeh sab to uske surprise ke liye kiya ja raha hai. Tumne bahut ache se suspense create kiya hai yaar, bechari naina to bahut dar gayi.

Pehle naina ko visitors room le ke gayi, then tum usse foyer ki taraf le ke gayi, bechari ko uske birthday se pehle kitna bhagaya tumne yaar. Chalo, aakhir tumhe us par taras aa hi gaya, aur finally usse surprise de hi diya.....aur surprise se zyada badha usse shok de diya.

Sab ne naina ke is surprise me part liya, Aur huda ki nautanki to yahan bhi band nahin hui par thank God, aalekh ne usse rok diya, varna sari celebration huda ki nautanki me hi khatam ho jati.

Pehle pooja ne is bare me socha nahin aur baad me naina ke samne aane se bhi dar rahi thi, ab aisa to hona hi tha kyunki hum sab naina ke gusse ko bahut ache se jante hain na. Aur pooja ne sara blame huda pe dhal diye, the from huda to aalekh which then passes on to yudi and then to ali. OMG tumne usse phir se bhagana shoro kar diya yaar. Itna to wo sari zindagi em nahin bhaagi hogi jitna usse tunhe ek part me bhaga diya. But thanks to shalini yeh bhagam bhaag band hui aur celebration bhi shoro ho gayi....

But Naveen aur raj ki yaad hamesha uske saath hai, issi liye to usse vahan par Naveen ke hone ka ehsaas hua.....the song u have choosen and the way u have explained everything was just awesome yaar, me pehle bhi bahut baar bol chuki hun....par phir se kheti hun ki I am ur fan, when it comes to ur writing styles aur vese bhi to tu meri sweetest friend hai hi........kyun?

Cake cut karne ke time bhi usse Naveen aur raj ka ehsaas hua, iska matlab to yehi hai na hum jin logon se pyaar karte hain........wo chahe humse door ho yan humhare pass, par unka ehsaas hamesha hamare saath rehta hai, har gham me aur har khushi me, jeevan ke har modh mein.

Now, that was nice, she got a chit from raj as we all know that he is the only one who call her as cadet naina ah singh.........m so happy, luv u for this mana

Par is khushi me bhi naina ki aankhon me aanso bhar diye, par uyeh aanso khushi ke bi the kyunki usse pata chal gaya ki uske rajveer sir bilkul theek hain.

Naina ne apni is prob ke bare me aalekh ko bataya, wo bhi khush tha par uska dar bhi sahi hai, yeh lala ki chal bhi ho sakti hain kyunki wo naina ko dukh pohanchane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Par usne bilkul sahi kaha ki dil hamesha sahi hota hai, its too correct. Jaise ki yeh chit raj ne hi bhejhi hai.

Naina aur aalekh ne yen baat kisi se karni zaruri nahin samjhi aur unke yeh decidon bilkul sahi tha, kyunki wo nair hai na, uske hote unhe bahut sambhal kar kaam akrne ki zarurat hai. Aur bunty chaubey ka yahan aana ek bahut acha sanket hai, aur mera ishara tot um samajh rahi ho na, ddekh rahi ho na.

Aur naina aur uske friends ke pass kuch clues bhi hain but they r not suffiecien, mujhe pata hai naina aur uske friends sab clues jaldi hi ikhate kar lenge. Aur ab mein chalti hun next part par.

Luv Preet

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 14: -

Ab yeh lala phir se new prob le kar vaapis aa gaya, uff yeh kabhi nahin sudhrega.

Usne to KMA band karwane ki than li hai par hum jante hain na ki hamare rajveer sir ke cadets kabhi aisa hone nahin denge, aur yeh lala aur kitna neeche ghirega KMA ko band karne ka reason Naveen aur raj ko thehraya, mera dil akr raha hai ki iska khoon hi akr do, par pata hai yeh maan karne ke liye hamare rajveer sir bahut jaldi vaapis aa jayenge, tu hai na unhe lane ke liye. The cadets will not let this happen. I am sure for it.

Naina aur uske dost apne puri jaan laga ke bhi yeh academy band nahin hone denge. Aur lala ne kya sharat rakhi hai KMA ko band karne se bachane ke liye, its difficult par agar koi kaam pure man se kiya jaye na to kuch bhi impossible nahin hai, aur aisa hi is case mein bhi hoga.

BC bhi bimaar ho gaye, yeh to bahut badhi problem ho gayi yaar.

Naina is tensed because she knows that if KMA will close, she will loss the last opportunity to prove his brother and Raj innocent and she can't afford such a big loss at any cost.

Gunny is also there to him them in this and All have decided to do anything to save KMA, naina aur uske friends ne bahut achi stratergy apnai hai. Yudi, Ali aur aalekh ne bhi koi kasar nahin chodhi, yehi wo rasta hai jisse wo apne maksad em kamyaab ho sakte hain, par lala aur nair kabhi sudharne wale to hain nahin hamesha tapak padhte hain problems badhane ke liye. Par wo kuch bhi kar le, raj ke cadets unhe successful nahin hone denge.

Naina ne us ladki na hi un logon se bachaya balki wahan khade logon ko achi dose bhi di, ab mana tu doc hai to naina se bhi dose dilwa rahi hai, gud yaar. Apne crrier ko apni hobbies me bhi use karna chahiye, isse se to tu perfect banegi. But I completely agree with her.usne jo kiya aur job hi bola wo sab bilkul theek kaha. Logon ko araam se baat samjhane par samajh anhin aati.

Par yeh lala phir se aa gaya, thank GOD naina bach gayi, varna Raj in sab ko nahin chodhta aur hum sab tujhe nahin chodhte. Shalini ne acha kiya jo naina ko jane se rok diya aur ab gunny aur wo partner ban gaye hain to koi aur rasta to dhund hi lenge na, ab kuch na kuch to hoga hi.

I m excited to know about gunny and naina's plan aur jis tarah se naina ne BC ko manaya na its awesome, just loved it yaar.

Ab to gunny bhi huda ki boli bolne lag padha...............grt yaar

Now, I can say that please continue soon.

Vese mujhe pata hai ki next ud...kab hone wali ahi, par yeh baat kehne ka ek alag hi mazza hai.

I just loved it.

So, continue soon.

All the parts were awesome yaar.....mindblowing, brilliantly written, all the emotions were explained extremely well.

Luv Preet.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Reply for the update on pg. 52:-

Sorry dear i found time today to read this part. Good one, u showed the emotions very well. Naina has supported all of them when they needed and finally they all r going to do something for Naina.
Ek shayad ALekh hi hai jis ne humesha Naina pe sab se jyada bharosa kiya hai bina kisi shak k. He is really a g8 support for Naina. And Naina did really a brilliant job by sorting out the matter b/w him n Neelu.
She made agree to Ali n Pooja's family n now as a result they r engaged. I think it's time for Naina to have happiness in her life.

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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali Hi di !!! 😃

How r u??
Update was terrific...👏 Thanks a ton 😃
All the cadets r doing a brilliant job to save their academy from getting closed..This incident is similar to the one that happened in LRL..But the main difference is dat there Raj was not coming n here Raj is abt to come😉😛 Yes....Here he is about to come !! 😊
Lala is such a cunning fellow..😡 I know...par fir agar woh aise nahi karega toh usse villian kaun kahega??
but this time cadets will not give up ..😊 you are right !!
Br.Chandralok is so shocked to know all this n he is is so ill.
Wat is Gunny planning with Naina???Why r they going to Delhi?? You'd know it soon ! 😊
Naina n Brg Chandrok's meeting was the highlight of this update..It was gud to see that he trust his cadets n is sure dat they will bring back the honour of his academy..This line was too gud
"KMA means STRENGTH and HONOUR. So fight with STRENGTH and get back our HONOUR !! "
Thanks again for liking it yaar !!
Continue soon I will......😊
Bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
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